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  • Bradley J. Fest–Teaching Without Computers

    Bradley J. Fest–Teaching Without Computers

    Teaching Without Computers

    Bradley J. Fest

     

    In a moment, I am going to talk about despair. But let me be clear: What I have to say in the following is not about frustration, burnout, or stress; it is not about disillusionment (and it is certainly not quit lit). Anyone teaching in the neoliberal academy at any point in the past fifty-odd years has experienced these things: frustration with administrators who want to run a university like a business; burnout with continually being asked to do more with less; stress over the precarity of being employed by a small liberal arts institution that was mismanaged for years during a time of demographic transformation; disillusionment that what we thought would be a life of teaching, reading, writing, learning, and talking with excited, engaged, committed students and colleagues turns out to be more about managing increasingly lowered expectations and never being able to figure out what isn’t our job (with a considerable side of event planning). No. I can handle these things. We can handle these things and do every day. Frustration, burnout, stress, and disillusionment are the ineluctable material facts we must navigate as university workers when also doing the work of our various fields and disciplines, the brute, often boring and thankless stuff we talk about at the dinner table that is nonetheless necessary for the slow, patient work of institution building, of trying to make something together none of us could make alone. And yes, we mitigate these experiences through the good work we all do every day, work that is worthwhile because it is about educating the generations that will follow, collectively making something about which we might be proud, and creating the world we want to live in, a meaningful world made more meaningful precisely by the hard, often frustrating work of trying to realize it with others.

    So no. I want to talk about something more existential, something that threatens our ability to do anything in the professional and pedagogical spaces we inhabit along with the very persistence of those spaces into the future: I want to talk about the despair that I contend is the hard kernel at the heart of generative artificial intelligence (GenAI), particularly as it manifests in writing classrooms now ubiquitously infected by large-language models (LLMs), an infection that has also already spread its nihilistic tendrils into every single aspect of twenty-first-century life and culture. Though what I have to say is not intended to leave readers in despair, I begin with despair not because I merely want to pile on the doomerism that characterizes so much discourse in these frankly (and appropriately) apocalyptic times nor for the cheap rhetorical trick of evoking a crisis and then suggesting a solution—though there is certainly an element of that in what follows—but because I think it is important that as faculty members and teachers of all kinds we collectively put in as clear terms to ourselves as possible what our institutions are losing and what we are losing as a profession—and as human beings—if we do not staunchly commit ourselves to resisting the systematic deliteracy and stupidification of an entire generation (or two) of students, and I believe that meditating for a moment on despair can help us do that, even if just a little bit.[1]

    GenAI and LLMs are, quite frankly, quilting points of despair. Though there are many more instances than I have space for that would more fully illuminate just how dark these technologies are, consider how the construction of data centers around the world over the past four years reveals how infrastructure could be built, how we do in fact have the resources to build things on a massive scale and so actually could make all the trains and solar panels and hospitals and sustainable agriculture and affordable housing we need . . . if only those things could enrich billionaires.[2] Rather than build those things, however, things we actually need, things that would mitigate global warming and help us survive on a planet many parts of which may be uninhabitable by the end of the century (or worse), we are building what Anna Kornbluh calls in my recent interview with her “plagiarism planetary arson engines,” and those machines are in turn having what study after study finds to be measurably negative effects on our long-term cognitive capacities, making it even more unlikely that we will have any hope of repairing our planet in the future if we are unable to do the hard, creative, critical thinking and imagining necessary for doing so.[3] (And also, of course, because so many of us will by then have been replaced by machines that cannot truly read, write, think, or imagine anyway, for it is clear that the people pushing GenAI into so many of the spaces we now inhabit desire nothing less than the complete automation of the university and much else.[4])

    But the despair I am interested in here is even deeper than these very real, very practical points about which all of us should be concerned. The despair GenAI has introduced into any classroom in which writing is an important part of what students and teachers do is a despair about meaning, or rather, a lack of meaning and thus a despair about the removal, abdication, and destruction of some of the most important parts of being human. In the opening chapter of his landmark 1964 study Understanding Media, Marshall McLuhan once called General David Sarnoff’s statement that “‘the products of modern science are not in themselves good or bad; it is the way they are used that determines their value’ [. . .] the voice of the current somnambulism.”[5] Today’s somnambulism, however, is different. If Sarnoff’s mistake was that it “never occurred to [him] that any technology could do anything but add itself on to what we already are” (UM, 23, second emphases added), GenAI boosters of all stripes have sleepwalked past a different point: that the technology may in fact be the first human media that does not add anything on to what we already are but in fact only diminishes us in a fundamental way, diminishes the human as such. For GenAI is not really a medium in McLuhan’s famous sense of being an extension of our senses, our capacities. Yes, like other media, GenAI extends another medium. This is one of the things McLuhan famously means by “the medium is the message” (UM, 19): The medium of film is also an extension of photography and drama and print and speech, et cetera. But unlike other media, GenAI extends only another medium. Rather than extend my individual ability to read, write, think, or communicate, an LLM extends something more abstract, a general rather than individual capacity; that is, an LLM extends all the language in its model (and nothing more); it extends merely that model’s ability to generate more of itself, more language by itself rather than the localized, embodied, imbricated, complex, historical, dialogical, and cognitive act of human communication that until GenAI characterized the medium of language. And indeed, hyperextending the linguistic archive threatens the very things—language, cognition, embodied writing—that made that archive possible in the first place. As such, GenAI is not a medium but a metamedium, and it is a metamedium without any coherent connection to the individual using it other than what they might prompt it to generate or how they use what it generates afterward (and, of course, as we are seeing with moltbook—the social media site built exclusively for GenAI agents to chat with each other—LLMs really do not need us at all for their linguistic generation).[6]

    Of course, technology has a very long history of calcifying, diminishing, or externalizing our capacities: Just think about what Socrates says about print destroying memory in Plato’s Phaedrus (ca. 370 BCE), the calculator killing arithmetic, or the baby monitor severing the embodied connection between a mother and her infant.[7] In augmenting some of our senses, media externalize our capacities and so can also diminish them in some way (even if opening up other avenues for their exercise). But regardless of their particular qualities, all historical media have had some connection to individual humans’ senses and capacities. GenAI is different. As a metamedium, it is not an extension of an individual but instead a hyperextension of the abstract human hyperarchive upon which it trains, of the human en masse.[8] Rather than an individual human subject encountering a medium as a localized extension of themself, GenAI automates the relationship between individual and medium; it also globalizes, disembodies, and outsources that relationship. And so GenAI enacts a cut in the human. Through its automated hyperextension, GenAI represents something new in the history of media, enacting a rupture or break between the medium and the individual not seen in any previous medium. When I use GenAI, its product is not a result or representation of my writing, reading, or thinking nor does GenAI write, read, or think “[b]ecause,” as John Warner points out, “ChatGPT cannot write. Generating syntax is not the same thing as writing. Writing is an embodied act of thinking and feeling. Writing is communicating with intention.”[9] GenAI does not do this. Or consider what Alberto Romero writes in a recent piece collecting and summarizing studies of the largely negative cognitive effects of uncritically using the technology: “[C]hatbots automate reasoning, argumentation, synthesis, and creative expression, the cognitive activities that are the skill rather than a means to it. When a calculator does your arithmetic, you lose arithmetic; when [artificial intelligence (AI)] does your thinking, you lose thinking.”[10] The book, the calculator, the baby monitor: All of these were extensions of the human that, like GenAI, also represent the loss of certain (other) capacities and connections. But in automating the relationship between us and its product, in erasing every aspect of the embodied process of writing, in being generated from the abstract mass of millions of data points rather than originating in an individual’s concrete thinking, GenAI severs the relationship between an individual and the medium and so not only diminishes and atrophies our ability to think, create, innovate, problem solve, communicate, connect, and feel, but, most importantly for my purposes as a writing teacher, it also destroys the human itself if the human is understood as a poetic creature in the sense of poiesis, a borrowing from the ancient Greek root poieîn (ποιεῖν), which means “to make, create, produce.”[11]

    Meaning is never given to us; it is not transcendent, a priori, readily available. It must be constructed. And so at its heart GenAI threatens human beings in their fundamental condition as historical, as creatures who make their own history, who build their world, who create what it means to be human because, as a metamedium, it wants to do all that for us, automating the relationship between our embodied humanity and the very meaningful world we are involved at every moment in making and changing. GenAI companies want nothing less than to create our world for us, and so, in abdicating the work of poiesis, of making, creating, and producing, as so many and certainly so many of our students have already done, we abdicate what it means to be human, to be historical, to make and change our world and thus provide ourselves with a reason to be in the world that we make. So it is not hyperbole to declare that GenAI threatens the entire planet with a dearth of meaning not seen since Friedrich Nietzsche declared God dead and an out-of-control nationalism shoveled corpses into the mustard-gas-filled, machine-gunned trenches of World War I.[12] Or rather, we will still have meaning in the wake of the increasing adoption of GenAI for all life’s activities, but it will just be the average, crowd-sourced, enshittified, unimaginative, uniform and uniformly bad entropic slop that no can deny has already taken over the internet, a situation that Matthew Kirschenbaum presciently predicted (all the way back in 2023) would soon be nothing less than a textpocalypse.[13] The emergence of a metamedium that attempts to automate human poiesis means that we are now not just losing arithmetic or thinking but jettisoning our very ability to construct meaning and thus our humanity itself. If that is the case, if GenAI is yet another instance of the foreclosure of the imagination under neoliberalism (or perhaps neofeudalism), we have good reason to despair.[14]

    And I, certainly, am not the only one feeling acute despair about the loss of something fundamental when thinking about teaching in the age of GenAI. For one example among so many, in December 2022, merely weeks after the public release of GPT-3.5 by OpenAI, David Golumbia wrote a criminally under-read and under-cited essay titled “ChatGPT Should Not Exist.”[15] Literary scholar, media critic, coeditor of boundary 2 and associated online publications, and author of a trilogy of books diagnosing the intersections of right-wing ideology with digital technology that have quickly become touchstones in the field of digital studies, Golumbia was tragically taken from us at far too young an age when he died suddenly from cancer in September 2023.[16] With Golumbia’s death, we lost one of the great critics of GenAI, a learned, compassionate, often strident voice who could have helped guide us through the mounting despair of the GenAI era.[17] But what we do have from Golumbia is much, even if we only go by this brief essay. In “ChatGPT Should Not Exist” he writes: “Generative AI is built on very dark and destructive ideas about what human beings, creativity, and meaning are. These are ideas that very few of us who practice or study creative arts, and hopefully very few others as well, would agree with.”[18] According to Golumbia, if we take CEO of OpenAI Sam Altman at his tweeted word that he is “a stochastic parrot, and so r u,” and we have no reason not to, “[t]his is an incredible rebuke to everyone who thinks that human creativity and even human life are valuable and important things” (“CS”).[19] As Golumbia points out, the term stochastic parrot comes from a 2021 paper authored by Emily M. Bender, Angelina McMillan-Major, Timnit Gebru, and “Shmargaret Shmitchell” and highlights the simple fact that “[t]ext generated by [a language model] is not grounded in communicative intent, any model of the world, or any model of the reader’s state of mind.”[20] Or as Golumbia puts it:

    A stochastic parrot generates apparently meaningful text through probabilistic means, but, like an actual parrot, it does not understand itself to mean anything by that text. [. . .] So when Altman writes that we are all stochastic parrots, he is saying very clearly that in his opinion none of us can create meaning; that just as the apparent meaningfulness of ChatGPT text is an illusion, so is the meaningfulness of our own communications. Meaning, according to Altman, just doesn’t exist at all.

    The name for the view that human life is meaningless is nihilism. (“CS”)

    I do not put it lightly when I say that the work teachers around the world do day in and out in writing classrooms of every stripe assumes the opposite. Sure, meaning may be slippery and impossible to pin down, endlessly deconstructed and deferred, never realized, never fully communicated, always already floating away, something to be fought for, navigated, and negotiated—indeed these challenges constitute what writing is, what we are involved in thinking and working through every day in a writing classroom—but when I focus my students’ attention on creating interpretive arguments about meaning supported by close, careful, original readings of texts or on crafting specific, concrete images in poems that aim to communicate something important to their student writer, I do so because I implicitly believe my students to not only be trying to communicate but capable of communicating and of communicating something meaningful, something that someone else might understand, that might in turn cause that person to also communicate and thus begin a conversation in which more meaning will be generated in turn.[21] What I am talking about, of course, is poiesis, the work of being human, of discursively cocreating the world we inhabit. That is the work of my classroom, and we do that work every single day. So if we think, as so many clearly do today, that we can outsource that work, pawn off the hard, often boring, at times frustrating, stressful, disillusioning, affective, embodied endeavor of trying to communicate to others the meanings we have discovered for ourselves, then I am convinced we are already rushing headlong into a near-future of mass-cultural despair that we have not seen since religion stopped being the primary way human beings meaningfully situate themselves in the universe. Golumbia is clear: “The despair that Generative AI projects produce in nearly all people involved in creative work is the point. [. . .] It’s the same despair that nihilists feel and want to impose on the rest of us. That despair is, to many of the thinkers who examined the rise of fascism during World War II, part of what the historian Fritz Stern called ‘the politics of cultural despair’” (“CS,” emphases added).[22] And so Golumbia concludes that “ChatGPT and other Generative AI programs should not exist. They are not the kinds of things that someone who cares about human life would build. Nobody who understood the stakes of asserting that our lives are meaningless would participate in such an endeavor” (“CS”).

    And so during academic year 2023–24 when I reported—not caught, reported—twenty percent of my students to Hartwick College’s Office of Academic Affairs for academic integrity violations, I was not just feeling despair: about the exhausting, time-sucking enterprise of filling out and documenting evidence of plagiarism; about how little my students seem to care about their own education and future and how little interest they seem to have any more in ideas, books, art, culture, history; about how little respect or knowledge they have about my capacities as a reader (and a reader that could easily suss out the bland tripe GenAI produces, which differs in kind and not just degree from the writing done by undergraduates); about trying to teach and engage a roomful of students who have not done the reading no matter the incentives or structures I put in place to help them do so; about how many of my students do not understand that so much of being in college is really just about actually going to class; about the broader loss of students’ abilities to think, read, and write; about a system in which fewer students each year are ready to pursue a degree that they neither really desire nor understand the real purpose of and that will likely put them into lifelong debt, et cetera, et cetera. No. I mean, I have been teaching in the neoliberal academy for twenty years and so am used to all that; that stuff just makes me frustrated and has unfortunately long ago become the norm, and so I, like everyone, have come up with a variety of methods for combatting these frustrations. No, in a world that increasingly wants to limit what meaning students might arrive at to merely what they encounter on their ubiquitous smartphones, the despair I felt was a result of watching one of the clearest opportunities young people have to create meaning for themselves outside the digital regime of contemporaneity, that is, an opportunity that asks them to think, read, and write for themselves and in which they are helped and instructed on how to do so, given feedback on their efforts, and engaged in conversation with experts and their peers, a situation in which they cannot help but come to some conclusions about the meaning of something, cannot help but to construct meaning, some meaning, any meaning—the real despair I felt two years ago was that all of that was simply gone. It was not in decline, not vanishing, leaving. No. Overnight, ChatGPT had set my students’ existence as poetic beings on fire and many appeared, at least then, to hardly even notice (though this situation does appear to already be swiftly changing). And so it is not hyperbole to say that GenAI threatens education itself, the entire endeavor of helping young people become more interesting, engaged, thoughtful, careful, knowledgeable citizens who can leave college and go out and create a world of meaning for themselves and the people around them. And it quickly dawned on me that because education was going to become increasingly futile, automated, standardized, dumbed-down, outsourced, my despair was also personal and professional: There was no longer any point in showing up as I had been doing for over twenty years and trying to teach anyone about reading, writing, or critical thinking, about history and literature, about media and culture, about anything. It seemed for a moment that perhaps I also no longer needed to hold on to a vision of human beings as historical while the world quickly and easily succumbed to sacrificing poiesis to the planetary pyre billionaire techbro’s neofeudal dreams were now even more quickly making of our once-beautiful Earth.[23]

    And so I was more than lucky to go on sabbatical in the fall of 2025, to have a reprieve from all this and to escape for even a few months into my work and thus be reminded by my own reading, writing, and thinking, by my own meaning making just how important poiesis is, how in these hollow, vapid times educators have even more of a responsibility, indeed, an imperative to create a space for students to exercise their powers of meaning making, especially because the humanities classroom is increasingly one of the few places that still asks and creates a space for students to read, write, and critically think. After having the time and space to reflect and regather myself, I concluded that the only way to rediscover such a classroom was to teach without computers.

    I have disallowed laptops and smartphones in my 100-to-300-level classrooms for over a decade (unless a student—any student, regardless of other accommodations—simply tells me why they think they will learn more effectively with the use of a laptop, and then I always permit them to use whatever they need). And I know my tech-free classroom creates more engaged students and more vibrant conversations, for without a screen in front of them students cannot completely check out of a classroom situation in the same way: They cannot do their homework for another class; they cannot shop or post on social media; they cannot Facetime with a friend, play a video game, or chat with an LLM, et cetera, all things students with access to screens will do in a classroom, have done in classrooms all over the world, anything really but taking notes or listening to their professor or, God forbid, answering a question that requires more than just a short answer (to say nothing of taking part in a real discussion!). (It seems hardly necessary to mention how well-documented the deleterious effects smartphones and social media have upon our attention and ability to concentrate, right?) And so technology in the classroom, unless absolutely necessary or if a student truly needs it for legitimate reasons, is so clearly distracting and detrimental to learning, so clearly erodes the atmosphere and student engagement of whatever classroom in which it is present—even for students not using technology—that I increasingly believe permitting widespread, unregulated screen use in non-advanced courses constitutes gross educational malpractice.[24] GenAI is not any different. If it is available, if it is a possibility, it will be used just like the laptop sitting in front of the even slightly bored student. And so, like the smartphone and the laptop, GenAI’s effect on a writing classroom also diminishes that room’s humanity, curtailing the opportunity for students to do the human work we are all there to do. If we want to create human-centered writing classrooms, if we want students to do their own work, to think, read, and write for themselves, to talk, to ask and answer questions with their professors, to talk with each other, if we want to help students leave college as more interesting, caring, thoughtful, critical, and outstanding human beings, the smartphone, the laptop, and any uncritical use of GenAI should be expelled from a great number of classrooms.

    So as a last-ditch effort to overcome my despair about teaching writing and the future of literacy, like so many of my colleagues around the world in literary studies, I moved all my writing assignments into the classroom in the spring of 2026 and, other than playing video games in ENGL 352 Critical Game Studies, made my classes completely analog. The assignments did not change. My courses lost some things, certainly. I had to cut about a third of the class content from both ENGL 220 Introduction to Textual Analysis and Critical Game Studies. Students largely produced work at a similar level to when I taught these classes previously, but they could not produce as much for any individual assignment. And the strongest students in each class legitimately complained about being frustrated that they did not have the chance to polish, edit, and revise writing produced under the class’s time constraints. But otherwise, my experiences have turned me into a proselytizer: I present myself as such today, walking up a mountain to sing from on high to all who might listen the transformative effects teaching without computers can have on a twenty-first-century classroom.

    And let me be clear: Every single aspect of my classroom improved when I moved to an all-paper pedagogy. In a survey I gave both classes at the end of the semester, multiple students wrote that “[i]t improved my attention to my own work” and students were “able to think clearly without any distraction.” They also realized that “[i]t allowed me to break a few bad writing habits,” namely reliance on electronic resources such as LLMs or Grammarly (which also uses GenAI). They also felt able to understand “what I am writing much clearer than on a computer,” and, across the board, it helped them improve as writers. Other students felt the writing process to be “more fulfilling,” “encouraged a greater focus on critical thinking,” and “improved my cognition of what I was writing as well as invested me in the topic more. Feeling physically engaged with the idea, not just mentally.”[25] Indeed, even the drawbacks I just listed a moment ago also had positive corollaries. Yes, I cut content, but that also meant that we focused more closely and carefully on a smaller handful of things, gaining in depth what we lost in breadth. Though the essays students wrote were shorter, they were tighter, more focused, the result of serious concentration. And because students were writing less and because I had less space to comment than on a word-processed document, I also found that it cut my grading time by about forty percent, a significant decrease that gave me more time for teaching, meeting with students outside of class, and something whose importance to the classroom we diminish at our significant peril . . . my own work. In the surveys, I also asked students about the effects of moving to all-paper readings—I either required a textbook or printed and handed out the readings—and across the board students felt some version of the following: “It is a dramatic improvement over digital texts. Tangible material that I can meaningfully annotate will always be better than a pdf, in regards to both attention and information retention.” Asked about the lack of smartphones or laptops in the classroom, my students were also in unanimous agreement with a comment I received on my end-of-the semester teaching evaluations: “This was one of the only classes I felt like I was in an authentic college course. Everyone was engaged and was off their devices and got involved.” At every level, teaching without computers allowed my students and me to rediscover what smartphones, systematic deliteracy, and GenAI have stolen from us: an embodied, human, collective space in which to read, write, think, talk, and work. On the first day of class, I presented trying to achieve such a space as the goal of my classroom policies to a roomful of nodding students. Though I have only a semester’s worth of data, I can say that my policies were a success: They enabled just the kind of meaningful, human classroom that should be what all of us strive to create.

    And I hope you also read in my students’ excerpted comments that they all know that this is how education should be, that an “authentic college course” is one in which students are engaged, participating, energetic, interested, where there is something at stake, where something meaningful is happening. It is why students energetically embraced my courses last spring and why there is already such a palpable backlash from students against GenAI, why Owen Yingling, an undergraduate at the University of Chicago would write: “The prevalence of AI use on college campuses [. . .] is a cancer on our culture that threatens to turn a generation of promising young Americans into a class of drooling morons, and it will grotesquely disfigure, if not destroy, the university as an institute in every way that it is imagined.”[26] After twenty years of seeing technology’s effects, it is utterly clear to me that computers in the classroom can fundamentally undermine meaningful learning and that GenAI is merely an extension of the organized, policy-driven attack on the educated imagination that has been taking place for some time.[27] GenAI’s threat to education thus also puts into even starker relief the other ways digital technology has robbed us and our students of meaningful classrooms. And so, as often happens in a crisis, perhaps the more appropriate collective response to the threat to human poiesis GenAI poses would be to explore how it might instead produce alternatives and a sense of possibility rather than despair, how returning to the media of print, paper, pen, chalk, and the human voice could be an opportunity to reconfigure so much else in our world that needs reconfiguring because using these things are ways, simple ways, that we can change the world: writing this, reading that, talking about this, feeling that, and inviting our students to do so with us.[28]

    In his short, powerful book, The Educated Imagination (1963), originally delivered as radio lectures in 1962, the great Canadian literary critic Northrop Frye argues that “nothing can be more obviously useful than learning to read and write and talk” but also that “there’s something in all of us that wants to drift toward a mob, where we can all say the same thing without having to think about it, because everybody is all alike except people that we can hate or persecute. Every time we use words, we’re either fighting against this tendency or giving in to it. When we fight against it, we’re taking the side of genuine and permanent human civilization.”[29] Using GenAI is drifting toward the mob; it makes us all say the same thing without having to think about it and so is fundamentally in the service of exclusion, othering, persecution, and violence, of trying to eliminate the marginal and minoritarian, of crushing anything that deviates from GenAI’s brutal, unthinking, uncompromising statistical norm. When we fight against GenAI in our classrooms, we fight against these tendencies, against the machinic homogenization of the human and for the heterogeneity and difference of the embodied human imagination. Part of what it means to be human, to be poetic, to be a meaning-making animal, to be historical is that we can imagine our world differently and so can change it. GenAI cannot imagine or originate anything, cannot depart from what it was given, and so cannot change; it is in service of the status quo, the norm, the average, the mob. It has been foisted upon us, and I believe it poses nothing less than an existential threat to education and thus to the human itself. But it does not have to. Thousands of years of history prove that we can choose to read, write, and think for ourselves, we can choose to change, go in a different direction, and imagine and thus make our world otherwise. And so, for teachers of all kinds who want to continue rather than abdicate this ancient project, how we do so starts in our classrooms and with the technology we find there.

    Bradley J. Fest is associate professor of English and coordinator of the creative writing program at Hartwick College, where he has taught courses in twentieth- and twenty-first-century United States literature, creative writing, poetry and poetics, and digital studies since 2017. His critical writing has appeared or is forthcoming in the b2o review(and here), CounterText, Genre, Scale in Literature and Culture (Palgrave Macmillan, 2017), the William Carlos Williams Review, and elsewhere, and since 2014 he has published interviews with important literary critics in boundary 2, including with Jonathan Arac, Rachel Blau DuPlessis, Anna Kornbluh, J. Hillis Miller, and Robert T. Tally Jr. He is also the author of three volumes of poetry, The Rocking Chair(Blue Sketch, 2015), The Shape of Things (Salò, 2017), and 2013–2017: Sonnets (LJMcD Communications, 2024), and a long poem, “Postrock,” was recently published in Always Crashing. More information is available at bradleyjfest.com.

    This piece is a slightly revised version of a talk I addressed to faculty and staff colleagues at Hartwick College in Oneonta, NY, during a Teaching Table on September 18, 2026. I would like to thank Racheal Fest and Alanna E. F. Rudzik for helping me work out some of the ideas in this essay—particularly for the challenging conversation about some of my larger claims—and in conjunction with our panel presentation, “Against AI: Approaches to Preserving Student Learning” at the Regional Perspectives on AI cross-campus symposium at SUNY Oneonta, Oneonta, NY, August 14, 2026, and during which I presented a significantly abbreviated version of this talk. This essay was supported by a Julia Thompson Elting Teaching/Research Award from Hartwick College.

    [1] Dave Eggers told the staff at OpenAI that “‘[i]f students are using [ChatGPT] to compose, which is the biggest tragedy of all, they’ll never learn to write. And their voice is stolen from them. They’ll never have the ability to say their truth and tell their own story. And that’s silencing an entire generation or two.” Dave Eggers qtd. in Terrence O’Brien, “Dave Eggers Told OpenAI Staff that ChatGPT Was ‘Silencing an Entire Generation,’” The Verge, July 18, 2026, https://www.theverge.com/ai-artificial-intelligence/967630/dave-eggers-openai-chatgpt-silencing-an-entire-generation. Also see Michael Clune, “Colleges Are Preparing to Self-Lobotomize,” The Atlantic, November 29, 2025, https://www.theatlantic.com/ideas/2025/11/colleges-ai-education-students/685039/; and Tyler Jagt, “My Students Can’t Read,” The Chronicle of Higher Education, June 1, 2026, https://www.chronicle.com/article/my-students-cant-read. For a selection of my reflections on anti-eschatological thinking, see Bradley J. Fest, “The Inverted Nuke in the Garden: Archival Emergence and Anti-Eschatology in David Foster Wallace’s Infinite Jest,” boundary 2 39, no. 3 (Fall 2012): 125–49, https://doi.org/10.1215/01903659-1730644, and “‘Eternal, Shiny, and Chrome’: The Fabulous Capitalist Megadisasters of the 2010s,” The Hyperarchival Parallax (blog), June 19, 2015, https://bradfest.wordpress.com/2015/06/19/eternal-shiny-and-chrome-the-fabulous-capitalist-megadisasters-of-the-2010s/.

    [2] For a discussion of some of the other threats of GenAI that I do not touch upon, see Justin Smith-Ruiu, “A Series of Small Apocalypses: On the Real Threats of AI,” Liberties 4, no. 4 (Summer 2024), https://libertiesjournal.com/articles/a-series-of-small-apocalypses-on-the-real-threats-of-ai/. Or consider what Cory Doctorow recently said about the realities of global corporate AI use: “AI is the asbestos we’re shovelling into the walls of our technological society. Our descendants will spend generations digging it out again, and the longer the bubble goes on without popping, the longer it will take to repair the damage.” Cory Doctorow, “The People Who Tell You ‘AI Is Changing Everything’ Are Lying,” The Nerve, August 4, 2026, https://www.thenerve.news/p/cory-doctorow-ai-business-incentive-to-lie-useless-chatbots-report-nikhil-suresh. Also see Nikhil Suresh, “AI Mania Is Eviscerating Global-Decision Making,” Hermit Tech, July 18, 2026, https://hermit-tech.com/blog/ai-mania-is-eviscerating-global-decisionmaking. Among other things, Suresh damningly writes: “I’ve had a front-row view to our collective institutions across both the private and public sector undergoing breathtaking mass psychosis. [. . .] All of this is to say that I am very confident that almost every report at a company about ‘massive AI productivity gains’ is untrue as a matter of brute fact.”

    [3] Bradley J. Fest, “Art Is for Everybody: An Interview with Anna Kornbluh,” boundary 2 53, no. 2 (May 2026): 40, https://doi.org/10.1215/01903659-12297935. See Alberto Romero, “What the Studies Say About How AI Affects Your Brain: A (Very Big) Compilation,” The Algorithmic Bridge, April 15, 2026, https://www.thealgorithmicbridge.com/p/what-the-studies-say-about-how-ai; and David Strömberg, Victor Lei, and Yanhui Wu, “The Generative AI Learning Penalty: Evidence from Chinese Secondary Education,” SSRN, June 2, 2026, https://dx.doi.org/10.2139/ssrn.6868618. Even more acerbically, Jeff VanderMeer writes: “Look, generative AI is toxic. Any angle you engage with it, you get stuck in, contaminated, compromised. [. . .] This is not a paradigm shift like the printing press. It is a parasitic echo chamber, a conduit for true ugliness and environmental ruin. It encourages narcissism, diminishes our ability to think and analyze, it mistakes information for learning, it separates us from our true self. We live within fucked up systems. We have to negotiate and navigate our way through various states of being compromised and made complicit because it is made hard to opt out. But we definitely can reject and not use this very harmful thing that we got along fine without just a short time ago.” Jeff VanderMeer, “Look, generative AI is toxic,” Facebook, July 13, 2026, https://www.facebook.com/681884194/posts/10163639412139195/?rdid=YycPCo8DHMc3TKTH#.

    [4] On GenAI and labor, see Ted Chiang, “Will AI Become the New McKinsey?,” The New Yorker, May 4, 2023, https://www.newyorker.com/science/annals-of-artificial-intelligence/will-ai-become-the-new-mckinsey; and Dennis M. Hogan, “Artificial Negligence: Why Are College Administrators So Eager to Adopt AI?,” in “The Fading Promise of Higher Education,” special issue, The Hedgehog Review (Summer 2026), https://hedgehogreview.com/issues/the-fading-promise-of-higher-education/articles/artificial-negligence. On data politics, see Tressie McMillan Cottom, “Want to Fight Back Against Big Tech? Start Here,” The New York Times, August 3, 2026, https://www.nytimes.com/2026/08/03/opinion/artificial-intelligence-data-politics.html.

    [5] Marshall McLuhan, Understanding Media: The Extensions of Man (1964), critical ed., ed. W. Terrence Gordon (Gingko, 2003), 23. Hereafter, this is parenthetically cited as UM.

    [6] See moltbook, https://www.moltbook.com/. As of August 11, 2026, moltbook appears to have been down for days or else it has been removed from the web.

    [7] Socrates says: “‘The story goes that Thamus said much to Theuth, both for and against each art, which it would take too long to repeat. But when they came to writing, Theuth said: “O King, here is something that, once learned, will make the Egyptians wiser and will improve their memory; I have discovered a potion for memory and wisdom.” Thamus, however, replied: “O most expert Theuth, one man can give birth to elements of an art, but only another can judge how they can benefit or harm those who will use them. And now, since you are the father of writing, your affection for it has made you describe its effects as the opposite of what they really are. In fact, it will introduce forgetfulness into the soul of those who learn it: they will not practice using their memory because they will put their trust in writing, which is external and depends on signs that belong to others, instead of trying to remember from the inside, completely on their own. You have not discovered a potion for remembering, but for reminding; you provide your students with the appearance of wisdom, not with its reality. Your invention will enable them to hear many things without being properly taught, and they will imagine that they have come to know much while for the most part they will know nothing. And they will be difficult to get along with, since they will merely appear to be wise instead of really being so.”’” Plato, Phaedrus (ca. 370 BCE), trans. Alexander Nehamas and Paul Woodruff, in Complete Works, ed. John M. Cooper (Hackett Publishing Company, 1997), 274e–275b, pp. 551–52. It is difficult to not think that Socrates may have actually been talking about ChatGPT here.

    [8] For my discussion of what I call hyperarchivalism, see Bradley J. Fest, “Reading Now and Again: Hyperarchivalism and Democracy in Ranjan Ghosh and J. Hillis Miller’s Thinking Literature Across Continents,” in “Thinking Literature Across . . . II,” ed. Ivan Callus and James Corby, special issue, CounterText 4, no. 1 (April 2018): 9–29, https://doi.org/10.3366/count.2018.0114.

    [9] John Warner, More Than Words: How to Think About Writing in the Age of AI (Basic Books, 2025), 8.

    [10] Romero, “What the Studies Say.” Also see Annette Vee, “The Moral Hazards of Technical Debt in Large Language Models: Why Moving Fast and Breaking Things Is Bad,” Critical AI 2, no. 1 (2024), https://doi.org/10.1215/2834703X-11205182.

    [11] “Poiesis, n.,” “Etymology,” Oxford English Dictionary (OED), Oxford University Press, June 2026, https://www.oed.com/dictionary/poiesis_n?tab=etymology#29367066.

    [12] “The madman jumped into their midst and pierced them with his eyes. ‘Whither is God?’ he cried; ‘I will tell you. We have killed him—you and I. All of us are his murderers. But how did we do this? How could we drink up the sea? Who gave us the sponge to wipe away the entire horizon? What were we doing when we unchained the earth from its sun? Whither is it moving now? Whither are we moving? Away from all suns? Are we not plunging continually? Backward, sideward, forward, in all directions? Is there still any up or down? Are we not straying as through an infinite nothing? Do we not feel the breath of empty space? Has it not become colder? Is not night continually closing in on us? Do we not need to light lanterns in the morning? Do we hear nothing as yet of the noise of the gravediggers who are burying God? Do we smell nothing as yet of the divine decomposition? Gods, too, decompose. God is dead. God remains dead. And we have killed him.” Friedrich Nietzsche, The Gay Science: With a Prelude in Rhymes and an Appendix of Songs (1882), trans. and ed. Walter Kaufmann (Vintage Books, 1974), sec. 125, p. 181.

    [13] As Alex McPhee-Brown writes: “The [LLM] can generate the shadow of language without its substance, the statistical trace of a social contract it was never party to. [. . .] Trained on a corpus that is itself the sediment of particular people writing in particular places under particular pressures, it produces output that arrives smoothed, deracinated, generic, a kind of fluent average.” Alex McPhee-Browne, “Empire of Signs,” Los Angeles Review of Books, July 12, 2026, https://lareviewofbooks.org/article/signifiers-differance-saussure-barthes-derrida-llm-ai-slop/. See Matthew Kirschenbaum, “Prepare for the Textpocalpyse,” The Atlantic, March 8, 2023, https://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/2023/03/ai-chatgpt-writing-language-models/673318/. For how slop is beginning to infect the creative writing/literary journal ecosystem, see Bradley J. Fest, “‘2025.01’ in The Alexander Review: Did I Just Get Published by an AI Journal?,” The Hyperarchival Parallax, August 17, 2026, https://bradleyjfest.com/2026/08/17/2025-01-in-the-alexander-review-did-i-just-get-published-by-an-ai-journal/.

    [14] On the foreclosure of the imagination, see Mark Fisher, Capitalist Realism: Is There No Alternative? (Zer0 Books, 2009); and Robert T. Tally Jr., For a Ruthless Critique of All That Exists: Literature in the Age of Capitalist Realism (Zer0 Books, 2022). On the phenomenon variously called vectoralism, technofeudalism, and neofeudalism, respectively, see McKenzie Wark, Capital Is Dead (Verso, 2019); Yanis Varoufakis, Technofeudalism: What Killed Capitalism (Melville House, 2023); and Jodi Dean, Capital’s Grave: Neofeudalism and the New Class Struggle (Verso, 2025).

    [15] GPT-3.5 was released to the public on November 30, 2022. For a selection of other early responses to GenAI, see Matthew Kirschenbaum, ed., “Again Theory: A Forum on Language, Meaning, and Intent in a Time of Stochastic Parrots,” “In the Moment,” Critical Inquiry (blog), June 26–30, 2023, https://critinq.wordpress.com/2023/06/27/again-theory-a-forum-on-language-meaning-and-intent-in-the-time-of-stochastic-parrots-2/.

    [16] See David Golumbia, The Cultural Logic of Computation (Harvard University Press, 2009), The Politics of Bitcoin: Software as Right-Wing Extremism (University of Minnesota Press, 2016), and Cyberlibertarianism: The Right-Wing Politics of Digital Technology (University of Minnesota Press, 2024).

    [17] For reflections on Golumbia, see Paul A. Bové, “David Golumbia, a Good Friend Lost,” Critical Reflections, September 14, 2023, https://paulbove.wordpress.com/2023/09/14/david-golumbia-a-good-friend-lost/; Arne De Boever, “In Memoriam: David Golumbia,” boundary 2 online: the online community of “boundary 2”, September 2023, https://www.boundary2.org/2023/09/in-memoriam-david-golumbia/; and Zachary Loeb, “In Memory of David Golumbia,” Librarian Shipwreck, September 18, 2023, https://librarianshipwreck.wordpress.com/2023/09/18/in-memory-of-david-golumbia/.

    [18] David Golumbia, “ChatGPT Should Not Exist,” David Golumbia, Medium, December 14, 2022, https://davidgolumbia.medium.com/chatgpt-should-not-exist-aab0867abace. Hereafter, this is parenthetically cited as “CS.” For another important early essay on GenAI and student writing, see Michael W. Clune, “AI Means Professors Need to Raise Their Grading Standards,” The Chronicle of Higher Education, September 12, 2023, https://www.chronicle.com/article/ai-means-professors-need-to-raise-their-grading-standards.

    [19] Sam Altman (@sama), “i am a stochastic parrot, and so r u,” X, 1:32 p.m., December 4, 2022, https://x.com/sama/status/1599471830255177728.

    [20] Emily M. Bender, Angelina McMillan-Major, Timnit Gebru, and Shmargaret Shmitchell, “On the Dangers of Stochastic Parrots: Can Language Models Be Too Big?,” FAccT ’21: Proceedings of the 2021 ACM Conference on Fairness, Accountability, and Transparency (March 2021): 610–23, https://doi.org/10.1145/3442188.3445922. Also see Michael Townsen Hicks, James Humphries, and Joe Slater, “ChatGPT Is Bullshit,” Ethics and Information Technology 26, article no. 38 (June 2024): 1–10, https://doi.org/10.1007/s10676-024-09775-5.

    [21] On some of the connections between structuralism, poststructuralism, and GenAI, see McPhee-Brown, “Empire of Signs.” On the importance of the essay in the age of GenAI, see Arne De Boever, “The Essay vs. AI: On the Literary Value of Criticism,” in “Exocriticism,” ed. Arne De Boever and Frédéric Neyrat, special issue, b2o: an online journal 8, no. 1 (May 2026), https://www.boundary2.org/2026/05/arne-de-boever-the-essay-vs-ai-on-the-literary-value-of-criticism/.

    [22] In a similar vein, the National Education Policy Center asserts that “[t]he weight of available evidence suggests that the current wholesale adoption of unregulated AI applications in schools poses a grave danger to democratic civil society and to individual freedom and liberty.” Qtd. in Warner, More Than Words, 269. See Ben Williamson, Alex Molnar, and Faith Bninger, “Time for a Pause: Without Effective Public Oversight, AI in Schools Will Do More Harm Than Good,” National Education Policy Center, March 5, 2024, https://nepc.colorado.edu/publication/ai.

    [23] On the relationship between technology and education, see much of the work done by Matt Seybold in his role as host of The American Vandal, Spotify, 2020–present, https://open.spotify.com/show/2zI06KesTcZQ5NnUqE6Bdc, especially “Against Technofeudal Education: Pillars for Protecting Our ‘Core Infrastructure’ from OpenAI,” The American Vandal, Substack, June 10, 2025, https://www.theamericanvandal.com/p/against-technofeudal-education. I am also, of course, writing this during yet another summer in which everything seems to be on fire, including, currently, France and Spain.

    [24] For studies on the negative effects of screens in classrooms, see Robinson Meyer, “To Remember a Lecture Better, Take Notes by Hand,” The Atlantic, May 1, 2014, http://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/2014/05/to-remember-a-lecture-better-take-notes-by-hand/361478/; Laura Rhinehart, Salvador R. Vazquez, and Patricia M. Greenfield, “The Impact of Screen-Free Zones in an Undergraduate Psychology Classroom: Assessing Exam Performance and Instructor Evaluations in Two Quasi-Experiments,” Teaching Psychology 49, no. 4 (June 2021): 323–28, https://doi.org/10.1177/00986283211017443; and Sixin Liao, Lili Yu, Jan-Louis Kruger, and Erik D. Reichle, “Dynamic Reading in a Digital Age: New Insights on Cognition,” Trends in Cognitive Sciences 28, no. 1 (January 2024): 43–55, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.tics.2023.08.002. For further discussion of twenty-first-century reading, see N. Katherine Hayles, “How We Read: Close, Hyper, Machine,” chap. 3 in How We Think: Digital Media and Contemporary Technogenesis (University of Chicago Press, 2012), 55–79. I should also stress that my students generally come to understand and agree with my no-tech policy, something especially apparent in my advanced, 400-level courses where I do allow laptops. Indeed, the last time I taught such a course, largely to students I had had before, not a single student used a laptop for the entire semester. I plan on taking a similar approach to assigning out-of-class writing: requiring it in my upper-division courses (and requiring the use of Google Docs and having students add me as an editor so I can see an assignment’s composition history) and trusting and hoping that students I got to know in lower-division courses—something possible at a small liberal arts college—will understand the need to do their own work as they take further classes with me as advanced English and creative writing majors. I will be attempting this in the fall and spring of the 2026–27 academic year because I do fear that losing the out-of-class writing assignment erodes an important skill and destroys another significant site of potential meaning making for my students, a site that allows them to slowly and carefully craft, construct, edit, and revise what they think and want to say. The potential loss of any out-of-class writing also evokes despair, and so I believe writing instructors have a similar imperative to preserve it in some form even if the task of preserving the skill might be more difficult or require more committed, time-intensive attention to developing student writers.

    [25] The move to technology-free policies and back to in-class writing has had similar effects in other classrooms. See Maja van der Velden, “‘I Felt a New Connection Between My Fingers and Brain’: A Thematic Analysis of Student Reflections on the Use of Pen and Paper During Lectures,” Teaching in Higher Education 28, no. 4 (2023), 784–801, https://doi.org/10.1080/13562517.2020.1863347; Dana Goldstein, “How A. I. Killed Student Writing (and Revived It),” The New York Times, April 30, 2026, updated May 1, 2026, https://www.nytimes.com/2026/04/30/us/ai-students-cheating-homework-classrooms.html; and Ignacio M. Sánchez Prado, “A Year of Teaching Analogically,” Nacho’s Cultural Notes, Substack, May 26, 2026, https://ignaciosanchezprado.substack.com/p/a-year-of-teaching-analogically.

    [26] Owen Yingling, “The Great Zombification,” The New Critic, May 11, 2026, https://www.thenewcritic.com/p/the-great-zombification. Also see Reece Rogers, “The AI Backlash Keeps Growing Stronger,” Wired, June 28, 2025, https://www.wired.com/story/generative-ai-backlash/.

    [27] See, for example, Paul A. Bové, A More Conservative Place: Intellectual Culture in the Bush Era (Dartmouth College Press, 2013), and “The Human in University Education,” Los Angeles Review of Books, November 13, 2014, https://lareviewofbooks.org/article/human-university-education/.

    [28] On the importance and potentially radical role of reading at the present time, see Matt Seybold, “Neuroplasticity as Praxis,” The American Vandal, Substack, August 6, 2026, https://www.theamericanvandal.com/p/neuroplasticity-as-a-praxis.

    [29] Northrop Frye, The Educated Imagination (1963; repr., Indiana University Press, 1964), 134, 154. Frye also argues that “[n]obody is capable of free speech unless he knows how to use language, and such knowledge is not a gift: it has to be learned and worked at” (149).

  • Michael Uhall–Warfare Modulation: Atmospheric Violence from Sebald to Sama’ Abdulhadi

    Michael Uhall–Warfare Modulation: Atmospheric Violence from Sebald to Sama’ Abdulhadi

    Freddie Clayton and Max Butterworth. “Satellite images reveal extent of destruction in the Gaza Strip” (2025).

    Warfare Modulation: Atmospheric Violence from Sebald to Sama’ Abdulhadi

    Michael Uhall

    Peter Sloterdijk’s Terror from the Air (2002) explores the history of the interpolation of the “environment into the battle between adversaries” – not so much in terms of mere considerations of geography and weather (for example), but as a form of applied material terror in which “the essential environmental conditions for human survival” become targets and weapons simultaneously (13, 15). The decisive shift is a conceptual and practical transformation of the medium of survival itself (air, atmosphere, climate, ecological or natural conditions) into the explicit object of attack as opposed to the development of ever more destructive weapons.

    This is a shift in the logic of violence. He writes, “By working on the enemy’s environment, these new processes, which consist in suppressing the basic prerequisites for life, yield the contours of a specifically modern, post-Hegelian concept of terror” (15). His framing examples include poison gas warfare (starting at Ypres in 1915), gas chamber executions and industrialized genocide, nuclear weapons, bioterrorism, and even gestures toward exotic weaponry. As Sloterdijk notes in an aside, this includes “the prospect of developing a quasi-neurotelepathic weapon capable of destabilizing the human population with long-distance attacks on their cerebral functions” (68). One can’t help but think immediately of very recent developments in the highly contentious media archaeology of the Havana Syndrome phenomenon, which is a fascinating case study in the epistemic instability produced when an alleged weapon acts through an ambient medium rather than upon an identifiable target.in its own right.

    From these points onward, warfare increasingly extends beyond enemy bodies or infrastructures to target the very conditions that make bodies viable at all.

    Sloterdijk continues:

    for technical and tactical reasons, practically all these thermo-terrorist and radiation-terrorist attacks on the enemy’s lifeworlds have required air force operations – a phenomenon whose indisputable paradigms (subsequent to the shocking attacks on Guernica on April 27, 1937 and on Coventry during the night of November 15, 1940 by German warplanes) are the destruction of Dresden on February 13 and 14, 1945 by British bomber fleets and the August 6 and 9 obliteration of Hiroshima and Nagasaki by the dropping of two nuclear bombs from American fighter planes. Romantic notions of battle scenes between two equal military aircraft units, of jousts between “aerial knights,” might engross the imagination, but the historical importance of such scenes is only marginal. In truth, the de facto norm for “air battles” is the practice of one-sided, irreciprocable air strikes: either by means of precision attacks carried out on defined targets by individual aircraft or by carpet bombings from large air fleets, in analogy to the approximate logic of gas artillery: in an operative sense, near enough is as good as exact (52, emphasis added).

    It is precisely this new regime of “atmospheric” violence that furnishes the conceptual and affective horizon of W. G. Sebald’s Zurich lectures “Air War and Literature.”

    Where Sloterdijk theorizes the emergence of a thoroughly environmentalized warfare, Sebald confronts its experiential residue: “the way in which memory (individual, collective and cultural) deals with experiences exceeding what is tolerable” (79). What interests Sebald regarding the historical silence that follows the Allied destruction of German cities during World War II centers less on the military history of bombing campaigns themselves than on the strange cultural void and the “extraordinary faculty for self-anesthesia” following these events (11).

    This is particularly notable given the fact that the air war in Germany was so nakedly executed: “The criticism later leveled at the ruthless pursuit of such a program of destruction concentrated chiefly on the fact that it was sustained even when selective attacks could be made from the air, with far greater precision, on targets like factories making ball-bearings, oil and fuel installations, railway junctions, and the main transport arteries […]” (17) And nevertheless: “The war in the air was pure and undisguised,” and few attempts were made to cloak or gussy up the efforts to damage, demoralize, or even exterminate populations of enemy civilians (19).

    As Arthur Harris, commander of RAF Bomber Command, wrote in 1943, “the aim is the destruction of German cities, the killing of German workers, and the disruption of civilized life throughout Germany.” Elsewhere: “I do not personally regard the whole of the remaining cities of Germany as worth the bones of one British Grenadier.” German rhetoric was scarcely less explicit, as the Luftwaffe’s bombing of British cities during the Blitz and the later deployment of the V-1 and V-2 Vergeltungswaffen [revenge weapons] were openly framed as instruments for breaking civilian morale.

    Why, then, the near absence, in postwar German literature, of sustained attempts to absorb or even represent the spectacular destruction of German cities? Why did a society subjected to such devastation leave behind so little durable testimony? As Sebald writes: “I was not surprised when a teacher in Detmold told me, a little while ago, that as a boy in the immediate postwar years he quite often saw photographs of the corpses lying in the streets after the firestorm brought out from under the counter of a Hamburg secondhand bookshop, to be fingered and examined in a way usually reserved for pornography” (98). Sebald’s essay thereby fashions an inquiry into the limits of cultural memory and self-representation, into how societies metabolize, repress, or fail to narrate experiences that overwhelm or undercut the ordinary capacities of language and imagination.

    One way to place Sebald’s concerns under creative pressure is to situate them within the broader conceptual and aesthetic frameworks his essay helps provoke.

    For example, Derek Gregory’s “‘Doors into nowhere’: dead cities and the natural history of destruction” (2011) expands the historical and geographical dimensions here by examining the physical transformation of bombed cities into landscapes of devastation. Gregory underscores the extent to which aerial bombardment did not simply destroy discrete military targets but reconfigured entire urban environments. In the firestorms produced by Allied bombing campaigns – Hamburg in 1943 being perhaps the most notorious case – heat, wind, oxygen flow, and urban density interacted to produce atmospheric conditions capable of incinerating whole districts. As Sebald writes:

    […] only a quarter of an hour after the first bombs had dropped the whole airspace was a sea of flames as far as the eye could see. Another five minutes later, at one-twenty A.M, a firestorm of an intensity that no one would ever before have thought possible arose. The fire, now rising two thousand meters into the sky, snatched oxygen to itself so violently that the air currents reached hurricane force, resonating like mighty organs with all their stops pulled out at once. The fire burned like this for three hours. At its height, the storm lifted gables and roofs from buildings, flung rafters and entire advertising billboards through the air, tore trees from the ground, and drove human beings before it like living torches. Behind collapsing façades, the flames shot up as high as houses, rolled like a tidal wave through the streets at a speed of over a hundred and fifty kilometers an hour, spun across open squares in strange rhythms like rolling cylinders of fire. The water in some of the canals was ablaze. The glass in the tram car windows melted; stocks of sugar boiled in the bakery cellars. Those who had fled from their air-raid shelters sank, with grotesque contortions, in the thick bubbles thrown up by the melting asphalt. No one knows for certain how many lost their lives that night, or how many went mad before they died. When day broke, the summer dawn could not penetrate the leaden gloom above the city. The smoke had risen to a height of eight thousand meters, where it spread like a vast, anvil-shaped cumulonimbus cloud. A wavering heat, which the bomber pilots said they had felt through the sides of their planes, continued to rise from the smoking, glowing mounds of stone (27).

    Under such circumstances, the city itself becomes a destructive medium. What emerges from Gregory’s account is the material correlate to Sebald’s “natural history of destruction”: the bombed city as a kind of weaponized terrain in which the distinction between military violence and environmental catastrophe collapses. The landscape of ruins is not merely a collection of destroyed buildings but a transformed urban ecology in which air, bodies, built space, and fire interact in savagely lethal feedback loops.

    Where Gregory brings out the physical and operational dimensions of this violence, Nil Santiañez, in “Aerial bombing and catastrophic modernism” (2018), addresses a different problem: the question of aesthetic and literary form. Santiañez argues explicitly that aerial bombardment places extraordinary pressure on the representational capacities of narrative itself. Large-scale urban destruction – marked by spatial disorientation, temporal compression, and sensory overload – fractures the conventions of realist description. Literature responding to such events frequently gravitates toward fragmented structures, montage, and discontinuous narration.

    From this perspective, the scarcity of convincing literary testimony that so troubled Sebald may reflect a deeper formal problem, extending beyond repression or moral evasion, namely, the difficulty of rendering experiences whose intensity or scale disrupts narrative frameworks altogether. Sebald’s hybrid mode of writing can thus be read as an attempt to find a form adequate to a historical shock that conventional narrative cannot contain. If narrative generally falters under such pressure, the problem shifts from how to represent catastrophe to how it persists in other forms.

    Still from Sergey Loznitsa’s experimental documentary adaptation of Sebald’s text, The Natural History of Destruction (2022).

    So, what happens when such experiences and their consequences for lived experience are neither repressed nor consigned to silence, but instead displaced into other media, into sound, rhythm, and collective sensation? Through what aesthetic forms might such conditions be registered or even provisionally suspended outside the domain of narrative representation? Sebald’s principal concern is with silence, with the failure of testimony. But silence is not the only possible medium through which catastrophe is reworked and transmitted.

    In contemporary contexts of ongoing aerial violence with heavy civilian casualties (for example, in Palestine, in Iran, in Lebanon), problems of representation often undergo mutations (what doesn’t kill me makes me stranger). Under conditions in which, for example, an estimated eighty percent of Gaza’s built environment has been destroyed – amid what numerous observers, legal scholars, and international bodies identify as an unfolding genocide – the transformation of lived space into a hostile medium is continuously lived rather than retrospectively narrated. In strategic discourse, such environments are often rendered as operational problems to be managed, constrained by terrain, adversary tactics, and the limits of humanitarian law. By contrast, aesthetic forms and sensory practices register these conditions as contradictory fields of lived intensity.

    As British-Israeli architect Eyal Weizman writes, Palestine, especially, makes manifest “the infrastructure of a unique type of political space, one desperately struggling to separate the inseparable, by attempting to multiply a single territorial reality and create two insular national geographies that occupy the same space.” A forever civil war, a continuous condition in which antagonism is built into the space itself. Rather than something that can be consigned to memory only after the fact, it persists as an ongoing condition or tribulation to be navigated.

    If such conditions exceed or disable narrative, where and how do they reappear?

    Sama’ Abdulhadi, Instagram (@samaabdulhadi).

    Sama’ Abdulhadi, a Palestinian DJ with an international audience, offers a different kind of aesthetic response than Sebald, one that uses the modulation of sonic density and intensity in lieu of narrative or prosodic form.

    Sama’ Abdulhadi, Instagram (@samaabdulhadi).

    Her sets do not narrate or even represent catastrophe. Instead, any given set reorganizes sensory and affective traces, maintaining their intensity without resolving them. Her sets function at the level of affective modulation, reorganizing relations between body, sound, and environment. In a currently unpublished interview, she remarks: “It’s always been like this in the Arab world. We don’t know what tomorrow holds so you feel this really intense energy from the crowd. I love how parties and festivals can disconnect you from reality. They can create this utopian bubble and just put you in a different world.”

    What matters here is less the desire for escape than a question of the form that such an escape takes, namely, intensification instead of withdrawal and the production of an alternative sensorium in lieu of grim silence. The “utopian bubble” she invokes is a reconfiguration of the senses, a temporary suspension in which the affective atmosphere of uncertainty, disruption, and violence is redistributed and transformed. This is a way of enduring the presence of catastrophe without resolving it, or reducing it to a tidy narrative.

    In this sense, Abdulhadi’s sets also serve as a valuable corrective to the by-now familiar recourse to Walter Benjamin in accounts of historical violence and its afterlives. In his “Theses on the Philosophy of History” (1940), Benjamin famously argues that the task of the historian is to seize hold of a collective “memory as it flashes up at a moment of danger,” to wrest the past from the conformism of official history and to redeem the defeated, namely, those consigned to what he calls the tradition of the oppressed.

    History, on this view, is not a continuum but a field of struggle in which fragments of suppressed experience must be recovered, rearticulated, and held open to a “messianic” interruption that would rescue them from oblivion. Sebald’s own work clearly draws on this framework, and his attention to marginal testimonies, damaged archives, and the psychic residues of catastrophe reflect the broadly Benjaminian conviction that what has been occluded must (or even can) be brought back into view, however fragmentarily – if it is not to be lost altogether.

    But Abdulhadi’s practice points in a different direction. Her sets do not seek to recover or narrate what has been suppressed, nor do they assume that the rearticulation of past (or concurrent) suffering carries with it any particular redemptive force. What they produce instead is a dense, immersive field of sound – an associative environment of rhythm, volume, and repetition – in which affects circulate without being stabilized into narratives (much less arguments).

    This not a messianic practice of retrieval, but a non-narrative mode of registration in which the events or traumas in question are redistributed and processed into collective, embodied experience instead of being merely redeemed. This suggests the intriguingly counterintuitive possibility that redemption, in fact, is cheaper than survival. Donald Winnicott recounts a remark made by one of his patients: “The only time I felt hope was when you told me that you could see no hope, and you continued the analysis.” In other words, the possibility of carrying on remains in passing through hopelessness together instead of overcoming it. Perhaps something similar obtains here.

    In one performance (at EXIT 2024, a festival in Novi Sad, Serbia), Abdulhadi’s set is abruptly interrupted by the unmistakable sound of an air raid siren – sustained for nearly thirty seconds, long enough to register as something significantly more than a quickfire sample, to register fully as the acoustic signature of imminent catastrophe. Indeed, the history of the air raid siren is itself already a history of sonic modulation. During the First World War, British warnings relied on police whistles, bugles, and eventually maroons – explosive fireworks producing the strange recursion of explosions heralding explosions – before sirens began to appear. By 1938, the British warning system had standardized the now-familiar rising-and-falling tone, opposed to the continuous note of the all-clear. What enters Abdulhadi’s set, then, is an acoustic form already informed and structured by a century of death and destruction from above. Without disruption, the siren is folded back into Abdulhadi’s set, mutating rapidly into the drop itself. The signal of danger is modulated rather than narrated or explained; it is transformed into a living rhythm by being redistributed across the crowd.

    The effect is difficult to describe within the terms that structure Sebald’s inquiry.

    Where Sebald confronts a deficit of representation, Abdulhadi stages something like its inversion: an excess of sensory inscription in which the atmosphere of threat receives no direct articulation (as in a documentary film) but rather gets incorporated into a collective experience oscillating between immersion and awareness. Even the visual field participates in this transformation, as spotlights sweep across the crowd like search beams, recalling, however obliquely, the aerial scanning of targets from above. Here, the environment, however temporarily, is no longer the medium of destruction. It becomes, if only provisionally, the medium through which such destruction is refracted and held at bay, and in which catastrophe, perhaps, is survived.

    As Sebald writes, “No one knew where the homeless stayed, although lights among the ruins after dark showed where they had moved in” (36).

    References

    Gregory, Derek. 2011. “‘Doors into Nowhere’: Dead Cities and the Natural History of Destruction.” In Cultural Memories: The Geographical Point of View, edited by Peter Meusburger, Michael
    Heffernan, and Edgar Wunder, 249–83. Knowledge and Space 4. Dordrecht: Springer. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-90-481-8945-8_15.
    Santiáñez, Nil. 2018. “Aerial Bombing and Catastrophic Modernism.” Neohelicon 45 (1): 229–48. https://doi.org/10.1007/s11059-017-0412-y.
    Sebald, W. G. 2003. “Air War and Literature: Zürich Lectures.” In On the Natural History of Destruction, translated by Anthea Bell. New York: Random House.
    Sloterdijk, Peter. 2009. Terror from the Air. Translated by Amy Patton and Steve Corcoran. Los Angeles: Semiotext(e).

    Michael Uhall (https://www.michaeluhall.com/) is a political theorist at Indiana University East. His research spans political ecology, critical geography, philosophical anthropology, intelligence and security studies, and film and literary criticism. His work has appeared with Bloomsbury, Routledge, and Stanford University Press, as well as in Contemporary Political Theory, Nature and Culture, Critical Horizons, and Configurations and in public-facing venues such as 3:AM Magazine, Ancillary Review of Books, Lovecraft Annual, Philosophy Now, Radical Philosophy, and Vault of Culture.

  • Reina Akkouche Halabi–Sonics of Silence: Lawrence Abu Hamdan’s Missing 19dB

    Reina Akkouche Halabi–Sonics of Silence: Lawrence Abu Hamdan’s Missing 19dB

    This post is part of a dossier that features materials that were generated at, or in the aftermath of, the “Experiments in Listening” conference that boundary 2 co-organized with the California Institute of the Arts and the University of Southern California in January 2025.

    Sonics of Silence: Lawrence Abu Hamdan’s Missing 19dB[1]

    Reina Akkouche Halabi

    “Saydnaya is the end of life – the end of humanity.”

    –Abu Muhammed, former guard at Saydnaya

    The downfall of the Bashar al-Assad regime in Syria promoted major geopolitical shifts in the Middle East, establishing a new era in Syrian history and leadership. The authoritarian dynasty of the al-Assad family, spanning decades, had been renowned for its brutal war crimes, corruption, enforced disappearances, mass surveillance and detention. In March 2011, masses of pro-democratic Syrian schoolchildren, inspired by events of the Arab Spring, spray painted anti-regime graffiti on their school walls. They were subsequently arrested, tortured and detained sparking a wave of local protests which escalated rapidly into full-fledged armed conflict. “Between 2011 and 2021, the Assad regime killed 306,887 civilians, including 27,126 children” (Human Rights Foundation 2024). The state would purposefully conceal the whereabouts of those who were forcibly detained, but whispers began to emerge in the shadows that spoke of a massive detention center notorious for its torture methods, mass executions and ill-treatment of prisoners: the Saydnaya prison. It was one of the al-Assad regime’s best concealed carceral centers and death camps. Located 19 miles north of the Syrian capital, Damascus, the prison became infamous for being one of the most brutal detention centers in the world. Saydnaya was emblematic of the regime’s repressive tactics, and a chilling symbol of state terror. While operational, access was completely denied to the public, and visual material of what lay behind its walls were scarce.

    Since the onset of the Syrian civil war in 2011, Amnesty International estimates that more than 13,000 people had been executed in this prison. The few who manage to survive its brutal incarceration are left psychologically, physically, and mentally permanently marked by the memories of their incarceration.

    Saydnaya was not merely a detention center, but a reminder of the potential of the state apparatus to extract, subjugate, observe, record, kill and render individuals invisible to the world beyond the carceral walls. Invisible, and thus easily dominated and controlled. In his book Discipline and Punish, Michel Foucault claims that the self-evident character of the prison is first and foremost that it deprives the incarcerated of their liberty (232). But this works on two levels. It’s not only that the prisoner subjected to forcible extraction and limitations within the prison walls; it’s also the whole of society that is reminded of the injury dictated by the conceptual existence of the prison structure—of everyone’s potential incarceration. Thus, the prison is a constant reminder of the precarity of the subject within the confines of the state, and the right of the regime to place its individuals in its disciplining barracks.

    In 2016, at the height of the civil conflict in Syria which quickly became a global proxy war on Syrian grounds, Lebanese researcher and sound artist, Lawrence Abu Hamdan, began an experimental investigative journey, alongside Amnesty International and Forensic Architecture, to uncover the al-Assad regime’s most notorious carceral centers and death camps, Saydnaya. Known as the “Human Slaughterhouse”, the construction of the prison began in the late 1970s and became operational in the early 1980s. Throughout the decades leading up to the Syrian civil war, the prison would detain political rivals of the regime, journalists, students, military officers and had been rumored to have held detainees of other nationalities such as Lebanon, Turkey, Iraq and Sudan. The year of 2011 marked a shift in a ferocity of the regime’s systemic abuse perpetrated on the civilian population through a “furtherance of state policy” that concluded with persistent violations of human rights and mass amounts of crimes against humanity (Amnesty International 2017, 6).

    In a sound installation and art box piece, Abu Hamdan explores the transformation of Saydnaya from a carceral center to a death camp through a demonstration of silence, a deliberate loss of audible decibels. The piece is a fictional documentation of the moment the sonic dimension clearly makes visible the willful silencing of anti-regime voices, whispers and cries within the penitentiary’s walls. “As the prison is still operational and access is completely denied, we cannot measure its silence on-site with a decibel meter; we can only attempt to reconstruct it through the voices of its former detainees and their acoustic memories. My primary way of doing this was to understand that the level at which the detainees could whisper and not be heard by the guards through the doors, walls, water pipes, and ventilation system provides a measure of the silence at Saydnaya…” (Lawrence Abu Hamdan 2017).

    Abu Hamdan, who describes his work as that of a “private ear”, showcases a striking potentiality of the acousmatic. Derived from the Greek akousmatikoi, it refers to a sound or noise which is heard without the causes from which it originates being seen, an untraceable sound to the visual realm (Chion 2009, 11): “[…] The rare word ‘acousmatic’ also described in Greek a sect of the disciples of Pythagoras who were said to follow a form of teaching where the Master spoke to them hidden behind a screen. This was done in order to distract their visual attention from his physical appearance” to fully engage with the sonic without distracting interference from the visual” (12). Inspired by the emergence of musique concrète, a genre of music composition which utilizes recorded sounds as raw material that are later modified and assembled using techniques such as sound collage, Chion would expand on the notions of the Acousmatic and the Acoustic in his work Sound Objects. The compositions of musique concrète are non-traditional, unrestricted to normative musical rules of melody, rhythm, harmony and metre. Chion would emphasize the role listening plays on perception of the sound object where sight and hearing are dissociated, allowing the acousmatic to reveal “all its richness to us” (12). The emphasis is placed on the sound fragment rather than the circumstances surrounding it or its origins. The repeated listening experience illuminates new aspects of the object, enabling the subject to become “aware of [their] perceptual activity as well as of the sound object” (12).

    The loss of visible access to the Saydnaya prison acted as the perfect site for investigating the potentiality of the acousmatic in uncovering truths long hidden from view. Abu Hamdan’s work engages with acousmatic fragments in the form of sound, noise and silence to draw out experiences perceivable only through an engaged listening practice.

    *

    In Aesthetics and its Discontents, French philosopher, Jacques Rancière views ‘contemporary art’ as a dispositif of the ‘aesthetic regime of art’ (see Rancière 2004: 22). He believed that in its origins, art practice displaced art objects such as film, music and other contemporary forms from their materiality, positioning them in partial spaces such as museums where “relations between bodies, images, spaces and time are redistributed” (22). The dispositif, according to Rancière, is the common concept which unites all these art practices, and what emphasizes the political in the art object:  

    Art is not, in the first instance, political because of the messages and sentiments it conveys concerning the state of the world. Neither is it political because of the manner in which it might choose to represent society’s structures, or social groups, their conflicts or identities. It is political because of the very distance it takes with respect to these functions, because of the type of space and time that it institutes, and the manner in which it frames this time and peoples this space. (23)

    The investigative approach to the acousmatic in Abu Hamdan’s work reframes the material and symbolic audio-visual space by reconstructing narrative through memory and sound. The very existence of the prison is made visible through the acoustic realm of perception during a time in which the visible is forcibly concealed.

    The visible was an obsolete sensorial dimension within the confines of Saydnaya as no light entered its walls. The inside of the detention center was a void, a blacked-out labyrinth with no clear exit. Upon arrival, new inmates are subjected to what was known as the “welcome party”. Former detainees would later assess that inmates who have not yet gotten accustomed to the rules of the prison would often exceed the silence threshold, a sonic deadline, which prompted brutal beatings. The louder the inmates would scream due to the pain inflicted on them, the harsher the beatings became. The intensity would only end when the prisoner learns to control their reactions, and complete silence would occupy the sonic field. The method in which these rules would be taught maintained a sense of control and confusion, both through visual incapacitation due to the darkness of the prison cells and through the willful hiding of direct knowledge as to how the penal system functioned (The Saydnaya Project 2017). The prisoners were literally and metaphorically kept in the dark.

    In April of 2016, Abu Hamdan, alongside Amnesty, would travel to Turkey to meet with a group of former inmates and survivors of the Saydnaya prison. Images of the internal architecture of the prison were scarce, so the investigation was dependent on the oral narrative and memories of detainees to reconstruct the structure of the prison. The result was a striking narrative of detention, and an extensive 3D modeled reconstruction, including stairwells, corridors, moving doors and windows refined through interviews and sonic mapping. The “ear-witness” testimonies were crucial to understanding the inner workings of the prison, giving way to an acute experience of sound defined by visual restriction. “There was next to no daylight, and detainees were made to cover their eyes with their hands whenever a guard entered a room. What’s more, speaking was prohibited, so prisoners became attuned to any minute sound” (The Saydnaya Project 2017).  

    In a video reconstruction titled “Where Are We”, a former inmate named Salam recounts his experience in the solitary cell of Saydnaya:  

    And then they shut the door, and we were in a state of shock – there was a sense of horror. […] A long time passed before we started to communicate first just by touching and eventually, we had the courage to look […] There were no sounds at all, total silence. Only occasionally the sound of water dripping […] And now there was a smell of grease and blood. I started to feel the walls to try and find any messages written by previous prisoners. […] Eventually we started to see each other’s faces. We didn’t recognize each other. They had deliberately shaved our heads haphazardly, and we were all naked. We started to whisper to each other, trying to sense where we were. Asking each other: ‘Where are we?’ And then they said: We are in Saydnaya.  

    Salam’s account functions in a two-fold manner. On the one hand, it establishes the significance of the sensorial in accounts of perception beyond the visual sphere. On the other, it permeates the confines of the solitary cell and its concealment from the public through memory and narrative. Touch and smell would become direct markers of place, while listening would insinuate danger as it appeared. The sound of the guards’ boots approaching the cell, the water dripping, the wind of a cold storm, all created a unique interplay of perception and imminence. Witnesses interviewed in this project would listen to tones of different decibels to match them to specific incidents within the cell. A technology referred to as “echo-profiling” would determine the size of spaces by playing with reverberations, while “sound artefacts” would simulate sounds such as doors, lock and footsteps to generate further acoustic memories. The result was a fascinating revelation of the capabilities of the acousmatic to form the visual and material.

    It is said that once a sense is lost, the brain can adapt and enhance the function of other senses through a process called neuroplasticity. Certain studies of MRIs pertaining to people with differently-abled visual aptitudes have shown an increased sensibility to non-visual forms of perception such as listening. This form of compensation is the essence of Abu Hamdan’s investigation of Saydnaya. Through meticulous interviews with former detainees, Abu Hamdan surveys the acousmatic in detainees’ memories, which are often enhanced due to limited visibility within the prison. Saydnaya was a true mystery, not only to the public but even to those imprisoned within it. While prisoners may not have recalled the inner architecture nor looks of their cells, they certainly remembered what they sounded like. In his book The Politics of Fiction, Jacques Rancière writes: “I have often emphasized that fiction is not the invention of imaginary worlds in contrast to solid reality. It is first and foremost a structure of rationality. It is a mode of presentation of things that cuts out a frame and places elements within it to compose a situation and make it perceptible and intelligible” (Rancière 2018: 269). Imagination was an integral part of the reconstruction process of Saydnaya, as often the prisoners’ testimonies would be tampered by their psychological traumas. Dehydration, rationing of food, sexual deprivation, solitary confinement and corporal punishment all enhanced the aesthetic and auditory experience of each inmate. A drop of water from a nearby faulty faucet would sound as intense as a loud bang.

    Sound would not merely act as a means of orientation, but also as a tool of resistance. In “One Drop of Water”, former prisoners, Samer Al Ahmed and Jamal Abdou, recount a time when drinking water had been cut off from the prison for days. “We started to hallucinate, we couldn’t think straight, we were getting lost in our thoughts. When I closed my eyes, I started seeing waterfalls.” Facing symptoms of dehydration, one inmate gathered the courage to scream “Water!”, prompting other prisoners to follow suit. “So the next cell shouted the same: “Water!” and the next cell:

    “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!”

    “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!”

    “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!”

    “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!” “Water!”

    The collective voices of the imprisoned joining in acoustic protest had the entire floor echoing a scream for water.

    Plop! Plop!

    Plop! Plop!

    Sometime later, the inmates would hear drops falling from the faucets. The water had returned. “At first we thought we were still hallucinating, that the sound wasn’t real […] Everyone started crying from the bottom of their souls like little children [banned from holding their favorite thing in life]” (The Saydnaya Project 2017).[2]

    The politics of listening takes shape in unprecedented forms in Saydnaya. Listening becomes a survival method, an orientation tool of both space and temporality, and at times a means of control. Abu Hamdan’s work uncovering the forensics of sound gave agency back to the prisoners regarding their own listening practices and speech. Their earwitness testimonies offered integral information about the obscured horrors of the al-Assad regime, which otherwise would be unknown to the public to this day.

    *

    On December 8th, 2024, the prison was captured by rebel forces, the regime had fallen, and slowly but surely, detainees were released in an epic, unprecedented scene. Flocks of prisoners ran through the streets, sometimes wearing as little as a piece of cloth. The smokescreen had been unveiled, what laid behind the walls had been uncovered. Listening remained an integral praxis during the release of the prisoners. With no architectural maps or visual aid to rely on, the public had to make use of their listening during their search for the forcibly disappeared and detained. This would lead to underground discoveries of solitary cells where inmates had been deprived of food, water and light for days. As Abu Hamdan claims, “Most crimes are heard but not seen” (Abu Hamdan 2023).

    This investigative approach to listening not only restored memories of acoustic events but also gave language to acoustic experiences that are often difficult to describe using language alone.

    The goal of Saydnaya was to break prisoners’ souls and those imprisoned bore terminal scars from their time in confinement. The capture of the carceral center unveiled the persistence of suffering within its walls. Some prisoners were completely unaware of the passing of time, believing the rebels to be Ba’athist Iraqi troops under Saddam Hussein’s leadership. Other videos emerged of men in blankets sitting in complete darkness who could only utter the word “Bashar”, the name of the fallen dictator. Foucault writes:

    Punishment will tend to become the most hidden part of the penal process. This has several consequences: it leaves the domain more or less of everyday perception and enters that of abstract consciousness; its effectiveness is seen as resulting from its inevitability, not from its visible intensity; it is the certainty of being punished and not the horrifying spectacle of public punishment that must discourage crime; the exemplary mechanics of punishment changes its mechanisms. As a result, justice no longer takes public responsibility for the violence that is bound up with its practice” (Foucault 1977: 9).

    In the work of Abu Hamdan, the invisibility of carceral punishment is made visible through other means, that of sonic experimentation and composition as well as perception, narrative, fiction and memory. The subjective takes precedence leading to the objective, the sensible and intelligible are reconciled as converging rather than opposed.

    The passing of time may have emptied out the prison cells. The water may have dried out. But the incarcerated space remains haunted by the specter of a corrupt establishment. The walls speak stories of suffering, mass executions, kidnappings and unknown fates of anonymous individuals. The imminence of imprisonment may have dissipated, but as Jalal Toufic (2010: 37) writes in his essay titled “Ruins”, war-damaged and historically wrought structures exist in an idiosyncratic, labyrinthine temporality outside of chronological time (see Toufic 2010). The anomalous temporality of Saydnaya, as its building slowly deteriorates with time, invites a certain sense of apprehension, both of the ghosts which inhabit its walls and the labyrinthine space-time of its ruins that has yet to find meaning in a fragile post-war transitional state. “Ruins: places haunted by the living who inhabit them” (Toufic 36). In the aftermath of the fall of the al-Assad regime, Abu Hamdan’s work shifts from sonic memories to ghost stories serving as revenant hauntings and warnings. They do not simply remind us of a dark past but caution for a future where the return of this kind of violence remains possible.

    Figure 1.  A detainee works with Forensic Architecture researchers to reconstruct Saydnaya prison, 2016. Courtesy Forensic Architecture.

    Figure 2.  A rendered impression of a cell inside Saydnaya, constructed by researchers from survivors’ testimonies, 2016. Courtesy Forensic Architecture.

    Figure 3.  A rendered architectural plan of the Saydnaya prison, 2016. Courtesy Forensic Architecture.

    Reina Akkouche Halabi is a graphic designer and critical theorist who recently completed an MA in Aesthetics and Politics at the California Institute of the Arts.

    References

    Abu Hamdan, Lawrence. 2017. Saydnaya (The Missing 19db). Accessed January 15, 2025. http://lawrenceabuhamdan.com/saydnaya.

    Amnesty International. 2017. Human Slaughterhouse: Mass Hangings and Extermination at Saydnaya Prison, Syria. Amnesty International Ltd. https://www.amnesty.org/en/wp-content/uploads/2021/05/MDE2454152017ENGLISH.pdf

    Amnesty International and Forensic Architecture. 2016. “Saydnaya.” Accessed on January 2, 2026. https://saydnaya.amnesty.org/?kind=explore

    Chion, Michel. 2009. Guide to Sound Objects. Translated by John Dack and Christine North. Monoskop. https://monoskop.org/images/0/01/Chion_Michel_Guide_To_Sound_Objects_Pierre_Schaeffer_and_Musical_Research.pdf

    Earshot. 2016. “Saydnaya: Inside a Syrian Torture Prison.” Featured Investigations. https://earshot.ngo/investigations/saydnaya-inside-a-syrian-torture-prison/

    ———. “Architecture of Sound.” YouTube video, 4:54. Posted November 2, 2023. https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=3&v=DBsVQ8kNLuY.

    ———. “Earwitness Testimony.” Accessed January 15, 2025. https://earshot.ngo/what-we-do/earwitness-testimony.

    ———. “Saydnaya: Inside a Syrian Torture Prison.” Accessed January 12, 2025. https://earshot.ngo/investigations/saydnaya-inside-a-syrian-torture-prison.

    Forensic Architecture. 2016. “Torture in Saydnaya Prison.” Last modified February 7, 2017. https://forensic-architecture.org/investigation/saydnaya

    Foucault, Michel. 1977. Discipline and Punish: The Birth of the Prison. Translated by Alan Sheridan. Vintage Books.

    Hamdach, Widyane, “The Fall of Bashar al-Assad: Winners, Losers, and Challenges Ahead.” Georgetown Journal of International Affairs, May 2025, https://gjia.georgetown.edu/2025/05/07/the-fall-of-bashar-al-assad-winners-losers-and-challenges-ahead/

    Human Rights Foundation. “Assad regime overthrown after 53 years of repression and brutality; pivotal opportunity to establish rule of law and individual rights,” press release, December 9, 2024. https://hrf.org/latest/assad-regime-overthrown-after-53-years-of-repression-and-brutality-pivotal-opportunity-to-establish-rule-of-law-and-individual-rights/

    Rancière, Jacques. 2004. Aesthetics and its Discontents. Polity Press.

    Rancière, Jacques. “The Politics of Fiction.” Qui Parle: Critical Humanities and Social Sciences 27, no. 2 (December 2018): 269.

    [1] This essay was first presented at the Experiments in Listening conference hosted by boundary2 at the University of Southern California and the California Institute of the Arts. I am grateful for the comments and dialogue it prompted at the gathering.

    [2] See: “One Drop of Water”, accessible: https://saydnaya.amnesty.org/?kind=video&id=02.

  • Sean Koa Seu–In Defense of Tuning Out: The Captive Audience and Public Sound

    Sean Koa Seu–In Defense of Tuning Out: The Captive Audience and Public Sound

    This post is part of a dossier that features materials that were generated at, or in the aftermath of, the “Experiments in Listening” conference that boundary 2 co-organized with the California Institute of the Arts and the University of Southern California in January 2025.

    In Defense of Tuning Out: The Captive Audience and Public Sound

    Sean Koa Seu

     

    “Democrats in Congress refuse to fund the federal government, and because of this, many of our operations are impacted, and most of our TSA employees are working without pay,” a voice drones over loudspeakers mounted above the security checkpoint. “Our hope is that Democrats will soon recognize the importance of opening the government.”

    If you were traveling in the United States by plane during the 2025 government shutdown, you may have encountered this extraordinary announcement by Secretary of Homeland Security Kristi Noem. The video, produced by the Department of Homeland Security (DHS) and disseminated via the Transportation Security Administration (TSA), is simply Noem as a talking head (Skores and Park 2025). The real message—that the Democratic Party is to blame for the pay freeze of government employees—is disseminated through the Secretary’s words, over speakers, via sound.

    Within a line at a TSA security checkpoint, this sound is difficult to get away from. Human hearing is the most uncontrollable of the senses. Unlike seeing, which allows us to avert our gaze, or look the other way, or shut or shield or lower our eyes (or even turn a blind one), our hearing is mostly mandatory (barring, of course, earplugs, which merely dampen sound; or noise cancellation, a very recent technology which interferes with soundwaves before they can hit one’s eardrums.) Even in sleep our ears are still active; sound offers few opportunities for refusal. It impresses upon us whether we welcome it or not. Which begs the question: how does inescapable sound quietly (or loudly!) affect our capacity for freedom itself?

    In 1952, the Supreme Court of the United States was confronted with exactly this question. In Public Utilities Commission of the District of Columbia v. Pollak (1952) 343 U.S. 451, the Court was to decide whether or not the Capital Transit Company had the right to broadcast sound during its operations. By 1949, the company had installed loudspeakers within many of its train cars and had contracted with WWDC-FM to broadcast music, announcements, and commercial advertising.

    Franklin Pollak and Guy Martin, two Capital Transit riders, believed that the loudspeaker system violated their First and Fifth Amendment rights. They argued that the First Amendment, which protects freedom of speech and freedom of association, is violated when sound dominates a public space, creating a situation in which passengers must “compete against the [radio] programs in order to be heard” (Public Utilities Commission v. Pollak, 343 U.S. 451, 463 (1952)). As for the Fifth Amendment, which protects all persons from deprivation of life, liberty, or property without due process, Pollak and Martin contended that forcing them to listen to a radio program deprived them of their right to privacy, and therefore their liberty, unilaterally.

    I do not wish to complete a full legal analysis of the court proceedings here. After all, the Court ultimately ruled seven–one in favor of the Public Utilities Commission, granting it the right to broadcast sound in public train cars. (Justice Frankfurter abstained due to his own position as a “victim” in the case—he, too, was a transit rider.) The majority did not contend that the freedoms guaranteed by the Fifth Amendment applied in public space to the same extent as private space, instead arguing that in public freedom was regulated by the “mutual limitations” of all involved, including passengers, train conductors, and vehicle owners (464). It also did not believe that the First Amendment was violated—it did not consider the music, announcements, or commercial advertising to be “objectionable propaganda,” nor did it believe the sound interfered with the public’s ability to converse (463).

    Still, the noise generated by this case helps us think practically through freedom’s expression in public. It is more than just “freedom from unnecessary impositions on the senses,” as the Columbia Law Review once opined (“Transit Broadcasting” 1951: 109). For what the court expressed was that freedom—liberty—was only guaranteed in the privacy of one’s own home. In public, we can and should expect freedom to be mediated. The mandated sound, precisely because of its ubiquity, is a mediating tactic; impossible to ignore, yet justified because it intrudes not on private life, but on public space. But isn’t the condition for freedom itself a public one? For what does freedom mean if we cannot defend our public spaces from a totalizing sensorium?

    “Without a politically guaranteed public realm, freedom lacks the worldly space to make its appearance” (Arendt 2006: 147). According to Hannah Arendt, freedom requires public witness because it is, essentially, a capacity for action. Instead of being an expression of will (which Arendt argues, is an internal private reckoning) the capacity for action is a condition, also known as “the free man’s status, which enabled him to move, get away from home, to go out into the world and meet other people in deed and word” (147). This status allowed free people to commit free actions—actions liberated from the necessities of life. But in order for these free actions to appear in the world, they had to be witnessed by other free people. Therefore, freedom’s appearance as a tangible thing is not an innate quality of a private individual, but rather the sum of the capacity for action and the others’ ability to see (or hear) that action. Furthermore, both terms are environmental; they are determined not by the actor nor the audience, but the set on which they are staged.

    Arendt’s bar for this staged public realm is a high one—and we might ask ourselves whether or not transit systems like airports or busways should or should not be sites of public displays of freedom. What I would like to discuss here is the tendency of recorded sound to foreclose the possibility of any space’s publicness. It is a type of enclosure; it transforms shared space into a managed sensorium where freedom is preemptively extinguished.

    So let’s imagine the streetcar. Or the TSA line. If we think of freedom as a capacity for free action, then we must agree that the imposition of amplified sound is a rather effective way of intervening in, if not completely quelling, this action. It is not the same as a sign announcing train regulations, or a visual advertisement for food delivery, from which I may turn my gaze at will. The way sound is processed is simultaneous; sounds produced at the same time cannot be differentiated from one another easily. One must usually choose a sound to process, and that can be very difficult in the presence of another interrupting or louder sound. As far as a witness to free action goes, it is difficult to witness more than one sonic action at a time; often, we default to the loudest actor. As far as producing sound, a human actor can hardly compete with an amplified sound system, even if you can technically hear them; and, even then, the content of their voice must contend with, and ultimately be shaped by, the quality of the soundscape in which they are speaking.

    I do not disagree with the Court’s assessment that, in public, one encounters mutual limitations. In the cafeteria, or on the sidewalk, the rumbles of traffic and the conversations of other members of the public often interfere with one’s own ability to communicate. And the world does not have the proper technology of a stage, with lights and curtains telling a delineated audience where to look. Indeed, there is no delineated audience; since freedom requires free witnesses, it follows that free people must negotiate with one another for attention. I do not bristle at the mariachis on the A train, nor the woman at the terminal gate loudly discussing her business plans in Detroit.

    No, the troubling notion is not competition with others’ sounds in general, but about competition with an amplified mandated sound—whether or not the sound is partisan propaganda or merely muzak. This is because these sounds are not produced by free and responsible actors, actors who can choose to cede their time, actors who can be held accountable for their words and deeds, actors who have the capacity to witness me back should I choose to respond, interrupt, or shout over them. No, the sounds produced here are the sounds of an automated system, an environmental design attribute meant to stifle any action without taking an action itself. The sound does not stop if I ask it politely, nor if I yelp. It is designed to address without being addressable. While the mariachis might play over me, we are all free actors competing for witness, and so the limitation is truly mutual. The automated recording does not constitute a mutual limitation in this sense; only I am limited, the recording has no limitations because it is not an actor.

    But what of the agency who designed the sound? Surely Capital Transit has an opportunity to speak as the owner of the public utility? And surely the DHS should be able to play recorded sounds in general, as long as they don’t violate the Hatch Act. Again, I do not mean to make a legal analysis—court precedent for what constitutes protected speech by private citizens and non-citizens, government workers at all levels, and government agencies is complex and often opaque. What I am concerned with is whether or not an automated sound recording of any kind, played in the absence of the person who authorizes it, is actually an enactment of freedom of speech. I say no.

    For if freedom is defined by our capacity to act, then it is bound up in our ability to perform the unexpected, the new. “Freedom,” says Arendt, “was experienced in spontaneity” (164). A pre-recorded sound cannot, by definition, be spontaneous. It cannot interrupt “the process in whose framework it occurs” (168). It is not enough for a free action to simply replicate automatic processes. Free actions must begin something new. The fact that these recordings are automatic disbar them from the realm for free action. There is no room for the miraculous to occur. Only those people in a public space—those who can both witness and be witnessed—have a true claim to that freedom. Any voice that cannot be interrupted on account of its own relentless technological apparatus impedes on the freedoms of others without offering any negotiation in return.

    For a brief moment in 1953, it seemed like public opinion would overrule the Supreme Court. According to Time, after concerted efforts by public groups and an onslaught of newspaper editorials, “bus broadcasts have already been abandoned in St. Louis and Omaha, will be dropped this week in Washington and Cincinnati, are losing money in Tacoma, WA, Worcester, MA and Trenton, NJ” (“Radio: Privacy Regained” 1953). Still, although many public transit systems may have relented in the moment, the case set a precedent that publicly broadcast sound was not a violation of one’s freedom per se. Hence why most objections to Secretary Noem’s clearly partisan video criticized the announcement’s content, not the sound itself. 

    Perhaps it’s time to turn to the case’s sole dissenter, Justice Douglas, who, in his opinion, argued that “the right to be let alone is indeed the beginning of all freedom” (Pollak, 343 U.S. at 467). Although we cannot know why Justice Douglas failed to convince his fellow magistrates, we can speculate—the right to privacy within a public space has obvious legal and philosophical contradictions, even to those of us unversed in the intricacies of law. I point this out only to highlight the efficacy of Arendt’s own framework, which does not assert that recorded sound violates privacy, only that it forecloses a public space’s capacity for freedom. Still, Douglas remains prescient: 

    When we force people to listen to another’s ideas, we give the propagandist a powerful weapon. Today it is a business enterprise working out a radio program under the auspices of government. Tomorrow it may be a dominant political or religious group. Today the purpose is benign; there is no invidious cast to the programs. But the vice is inherent in the system. Once privacy is invaded, privacy is gone. Once a man is forced to submit to one type of radio program, he can be forced to submit to another. It may be but a short step from a cultural program to a political program. (Pollak, 343 U.S. at 469)

    The vice is inherent in the system. Not only because we are forced to submit—we may be—but because we cannot carry out our own free actions. Because their sound forecloses that very public space which makes freedom possible at all. That is the unique trouble—and the power—of the ubiquity of sound. It is not enough to stop our ears in private. We let them drone over us at our peril. 

    Sean Koa Seu is a writer, dramaturg, and critic. He holds an MA in Aesthetics and Politics from CalArts. His writing has appeared in Contemporary Art Review Los Angeles, The Rebis, and Mid-Cult. His zine LA Plays Itself was commissioned by Departure Lounge and presented at the L.A. Art Book Fair.

    References

    Arendt, Hannah. 2006. “What is Freedom?” In Between Past and Future, 142–169. London: Penguin Classics.

    Public Utilities Commission of the District of Columbia v. Pollak. 1952. 343 U.S. 451.

    “Radio: Privacy Regained.” 1953. Time, June 1. time.com/archive/6797444/radio-privacy-regained/.

    Skores, Alexandra, and Hanna Park. 2025. “Multiple Airports Refuse to Play Kristi Noem Video That Blames Democrats for Government Shutdown.” CNN, October 15. www.cnn.com/2025/10/13/us/kristi-noem-tsa-video.

    “Transit Broadcasting: The Problem of the Captive Audience.” 1951. Columbia Law Review 51 (1): 108–18. www.jstor.org/stable/1118681. 

  • Inger Flem Soto–Lost Object

    Inger Flem Soto–Lost Object

    This post is part of a dossier that features materials that were generated at, or in the aftermath of, the “Experiments in Listening” conference that boundary 2 co-organized with the California Institute of the Arts and the University of Southern California in January 2025.

    Lost Object

    Inger Flem Soto

     

    Lost Object is an experimental video work developed in dialogue with my doctoral research on the figure of the mother in Chilean thought and literature. The piece brings together a handmade 16mm film projected over a slideshow drawn from my personal archive of analogue photographs—some taken in the 1990s, others during a difficult month in 2021. An earlier version of the text was first read at the “Experiments in Listening” conference in Los Angeles in January 2025.

    Transcription

    I look at my hands while making this love letter, and I think of yours. I see them become yours, and I start seeing myself in you. This time with less fear. And I wonder if I’m clinging on to let go.

    Surprisingly, I find you not only in me, but also in the most unlikely of spaces: masked behind a fresh shave and the highest of heels. Walking past the working girls during my Saturday night pilgrimage through the heart of Santiago, I hear you, my mother. Their deep voices channel your words, or are they perhaps channeling their own mothers? No po, niña. Cómo se te ocurre, hueona. As they banter and tell each other off, I hear your voice scolding me—your tone a mix of humor and dread.

    The hardship of your childhood carved in you a certain knowledge, sharp and tenacious. Nothing gets past you. A mí no me vienes con esa, perrita, que cuando tú vas yo ya vengo de vuelta, ¿o creís que nací ayer? “Do you think I was born yesterday?” you clap back. Because you see it all, you always have—your smothering gaze.

    After tripping over the same stone, over and over again, I hear you: Por dios, hasta cuándo. No te digo yo. Si esta otra es dura como palo… ¡no hay caso! You call me out for being hard as a club, stubborn as rust, with the same words your mother called you for the same stubbornness—but with a heavier hand than the one I ever knew.

    I search for you in the tongues of the travestis. In the way they talk when, knowingly or not, they may be quoting their own mothers. And, in the wake of these many mother tongues, I even catch a glimpse of my grandmother, whom I never met.

    What is it about this singular speech that holds such power of repetition—always somehow echoing The Mother? Something in its bootleg femininity, that fierce artifice, that exposes this chained economy of quotation.

    Despite buying into the fantasy of belonging in the kingdom of wealth, you were never able to assimilate. Closer to queendom, your difference also showed, exposing the secret hidden behind your bleached blonde hair. The clickety-clack of your piercing heels, unable to mask the rhythm of the cumbia inscribed in your hips. The imprint of your bruised background, betraying you in the company of the posher, unwelcoming mothers at my school. Your cross-dressed class crossing the other mother’s wires; and their short, stubby nails—so natural, discreet, so vanilla.

    But high heels make for unstable steps, however fierce they may have been in my childhood memories.

    I wonder if choosing me made you lose yourself.

    I fear losing your smothering hands nearly as much as I fear becoming you. My hands reaching out to yours, to some version of you—one that was always already lost.

    Before the catastrophe. Before the beginning.

    Inger Flem Soto is a researcher, photographer, and translator currently pursuing her doctoral degree in Comparative Literature and Culture at the University of Southern California. Her research examines the maternal as a contested figure across Chilean literature, philosophy, and political discourse, foregrounding its role in structuring meaning through processes of erasure and displacement. Alongside her scholarly writing, film photography and darkroom practice are central modes of inquiry in her work. She is also co-director of Grápho Ediciones, a Chile-based independent publishing house dedicated to critical theory and philosophy.

  • Erin Graff Zivin–Experiments in Listening: The Shape of Deconstruction to Come

    Erin Graff Zivin–Experiments in Listening: The Shape of Deconstruction to Come

    This post is part of a dossier that features materials that were generated at, or in the aftermath of, the “Experiments in Listening” conference that boundary 2 co-organized with the California Institute of the Arts and the University of Southern California in January 2025.

    Experiments in Listening: The Shape of Deconstruction to Come[1]

    Erin Graff Zivin

     

    Preparing to Improvise

    “It is indeed necessary to improvise, it is necessary to improvise well,” Jacques Derrida told a crowd of unsuspecting Ornette Coleman devotees who’d come to hear Coleman perform with German pianist Joachim Kühn at the La Villette Jazz Festival on July 1, 1997.[2] “As all of you see,” he read, “I have here a sort of written score, you think that I am not improvising, well, you are wrong. I am pretending not to improvise, I just pretend, I play at reading, but by improvising.”[3] Derrida’s simultaneous denial and affirmation provoke a question, or a series of questions. Is it possible to know when one (or the other) is improvising? Does deconstruction demand improvisation? What scene of exposure will have taken place, or failed to take place, between philosophy and music?

    Coleman’s fans—his listeners—did not react well to the experiment.[4] In fact, the heckling eventually caused Derrida to leave the stage before he’d finished reading (improvising, pretending to read) his text, despite Coleman’s encouragement. “Derrida must have known he was inviting catastrophe,” writes David Wills: “He must have known that the more carefully he contrived the event and organized his theoreticomusical event, the less it would be likely to happen the way he calculated it. He must have known that one can invite an event but not produce it.”[5] Michael Gallope wonders, “did the collaborative failure on the part of the two men mean that they had both misunderstood, or underestimated, a certain incompatibility between philosophy and improvised music?”[6]

    While Derrida’s performance might have gone awry (he describes it as a disaster unlike anything that had happened to him in his years of standing before large audiences), I want to suggest that the event (or non-event) enables us to delve further into what I will insist is a necessary-yet-impossible encounter between deconstruction and improvisation: a duet, an encounter that may have needed to fail to be worthy of the name event. How might we ask after its failure and its paradoxical success? Who are we, who am I to decide whether the experiment failed, whether it will have been an event worthy of its name?

    Now, it might seem counterintuitive, even obscene, to talk about aesthetic and intellectual practices as ostensibly playful as experimentation at a time when universities in general, and the humanities in particular, are in existential peril and when—both within and outside the walls of the university—xenophobia, totalitarianism, and genocide threaten populations across the globe. It’s not new: experimental art and deconstruction have historically been cast as politically disengaged or ethically irresponsible, corresponding in part to the lack of a coherent, legible ideological position. Yet I want to suggest that it is precisely in a moment of crisis or danger that experimentation is most vital. Black improvisational music emerges from precisely such conditions: material and psychic subjugation and peril produce the necessity of improvisation, experimentation, and risk. The root per- that haunts “experiment” conjures the Latin periculum, alerting us to the danger inherent in such practices.

    Those of us who attended Derrida’s lectures and seminars recall the way in which he was constantly forced to improvise responses to questions from colleagues and students—acolytes and critics alike—to think on his feet, as we all do when we stand before a public, exposed. Despite his vast experience doing so, Derrida expressed reticence at being questioned in a certain way, being put on the spot, being forced to improvise answers to questions for which he was not prepared: “It’s not easy to improvise. It’s the most difficult thing to do. Even when one improvises in front of a camera or microphone, one ventriloquizes or leaves another to speak in one’s place the schemas and languages that are already there.”[7] In his public appearances, Derrida repeatedly seems caught between a simultaneous desire for, and fear of, the possibility of improvisation. During the 1992 Oxford Amnesty Lectures, he described the experience of presenting a prepared lecture as feeling “protected,” opting instead for an interview format for which he later expressed regret, the coy smile on his face suggesting otherwise.[8]

    Derrida was critical of the cultural tendency Americans had of expecting intelligent, coherent remarks on any given topic: “Here’s a term. Go ahead, action!” Joel Stein describes Derrida’s disappointment when the journalist pulled out a notebook at a 2002 event at Film Forum, turning their conversation into an interview.[9] “He hates when people ask him to be smart about random topics,” Stein explained in a Time magazine article. “Everyone wants him to say something brilliant on love or war or death. ‘It’s frustrating. Especially when you have to improvise,’ he said.”[10] Recall Derrida’s response to the British journalist who asked him to compare deconstruction to the American sitcom Seinfeld: “deconstruction, the way I understand it, does not produce any sitcom.”

    Given Derrida’s aversion to a certain kind of improvisation, why would he have claimed to be improvising as he read from his prepared notes on July 1, 1997? What did Derrida hope would happen? How might we determine whether he was improvising or following a script? Musician and writer Dan diPiero emphasizes improvisation’s universality: “there is improvisation anywhere there is contingency, and there is never not contingency.”[11] For his part, composer, pianist, and writer Vijay Iyer claims we are nearly always improvising. “Improvisation seems to encompass most of our behavior,” Iyer writes, suggesting that it may be easier to list behaviors that are not improvised: routines, rehearsals, rituals, recitations, and scripted performances of fully composed works.[12] It is impossible to improvise, Derrida tells us, perhaps thinking of the narrow confines of philosophy; it is nearly impossible not to improvise, DiPiero and Iyer proclaim more generally.

    Despite the fact that Derrida would always have been improvising to a degree, as we all do, he must have been particularly terrified that day, as he tested the boundaries of the “genre” of philosophy (a discipline he contested), as he searched for a medium or instrument through which to improvise. He seemed to anticipate this terror when he wrote the opening lines, a mix of French and English: “Qu’est-ce qui arrive? What’s happening? What’s going to happen, Ornette, now, right now? What’s happening to me, here, now, with Ornette Coleman? With you? Who?”[13] I am struck by these composed lines, this preparation for the happening, the impossible but necessary preparation for the arrivant.

    As musician and literary scholar Maya Kronfeld has shown, the denial of such preparation, of training and study, of thinking and rehearsal (répétition), the refusal to recognize the hours and days and weeks and months and years of dedication to a craft in general (when not also to a work or a performance in particular) is related to the primitivist view that the music called “jazz” is spontaneous, that it comes from the body, or from nowhere at all.[14] Kronfeld unpacks such primitivist assumptions: citing Miles Davis’s statement “Je ne suis pas un accident,” Kronfeld underscores the invisible process of practice involved in spontaneous forms, what Walton Muyumba calls “tutored spontaneity”[15]

    This problem—known all too well by practitioners of Black improvisational music—has been taken up by philosopher and vocalist Fumi Okiji in her 2018 book Jazz as Critique: Adorno and Black Expression Revisited. “Jazz,” she writes, “is understood by the primitivists to come from a people with direct access to a primal human essence all but lost by their European counterparts.”[16] Improvisation thus becomes burdened by fantasies of spontaneity, irrationality, and immediacy, as though the music emerged from instinct rather than from study, rehearsal, repetition, and composition. Kronfeld builds upon and extends Okiji’s argument, emphasizing in her philosophical-musicological theorization of spontaneity the double bind musicians experience in response to competing audience desires and expectations of jazz performance. She writes:

    “Questions about improvisation put to musicians after shows by certain well-meaning listeners could be painful because it would take so much work to undo the presuppositions inherent in the question, ‘Were you improvising when you did that?’ To say ‘yes’ would be to capitulate to the primitivist assumption that jazz is a form of nonstructured magic where anything goes; to say ‘no’ would be to give in to the contrary assumption that it’s all planned out in advance.”[17]

    Kronfeld hypothesizes further, “It is as if something in the colonial tongues, and their attendant intellectual cultures through which many Americans speak, makes it difficult to specify an intermediary position between a scripted score and the subjective play of ‘anything goes,’ between fixed structure and arbitrary flow.”[18] Well before Okiji’s and Kronfeld’s philosophical inquisitions, composer and saxophonist Gary Bartz had referred to that intermediary position as “informal composition,” rejecting the term “improvisation” altogether: “We’re not improvising, I hate that word. We are composing all the time… When I’m composing a solo I’m thinking compositionally.” In her extensive work on spontaneity, Kronfeld points out that Bartz carries on the legacy of Charles Mingus, who characterized such creative labor as “spontaneous composition,”[19] which she relates to Elvin Jones’s notion of “puttin’ it together.”[20]

    When Derrida asked “What’s happening? What’s going to happen, Ornette, now, right now? What’s happening to me, here, now…?” he wondered aloud what was happening out there, but also in here, to “me,” now, to whatever coherent ego might show up in a given place and time, flirting with the very metaphysics of presence he unsettles in his work. Perhaps he’d intuited that he was exposing himself more radically than in a typical exposition, which by that point had become habit. Even when faced by vehement critics, Derrida knew what to expect: each of the previous scenes of improvisation in which he participated (lectures, seminars, conversations, interviews) remained within the relatively safe, known territory of academic and cultural institutions, settings and scenes that he could anticipate, even when he might encounter opposition. The risk was greater at La Villette, there, on stage with Coleman, and he likely sensed that he was out of place, more than ever, or perhaps for the very first time. Derrida could not foresee the rejection by Coleman’s fans, who in turn reacted out of their own unpreparedness: they were not ready to receive Derrida, recalls Peggy Kamuf (who was in attendance that evening), there was no formal introduction or contextualization.[21] So even if Coleman devotees, his listeners, might “expect the unexpected” from Coleman, they clearly did not know what to do with the appearance of a philosopher with whom many may have been unfamiliar. Derrida’s questions paradoxically announced what he did not expect to happen; they functioned as a kind of anti-narration of his own opening, which may have also been his undoing, the unmaking of his “self.”

    Assuming that Coleman’s fans had arrived unprepared, we must ask how Coleman and Derrida themselves had prepared for their improvisation, for their experiment. How does one create the conditions of possibility for the event, for the a-venir? This is one of the central questions of Derridean deconstruction and yet, while the philosopher was able to articulate the problem in its fullest complexity in his written work, testing it out performatively—outside of his usual genres, habits, and institutions—proved far riskier. One of the few scholars to both theorize and perform the rapport between deconstruction and improvisation, poet and critic Fred Moten has proposed the neologism “pre-formance” to characterize the prefatory performative utterances that, in his own public lectures, often come to substitute a formal, rehearsed address.[22] When he wants to approach the work of poet and musician Cecil Taylor, Moten describes such anticipatory activity as a “preparing to play” with Cecil.[23] In both cases, the preparation for the event becomes an event in itself.

    So how did Derrida prepare to play with Coleman? In my forthcoming book Transmedial Exposure, I revisit the exchange that took place eight days before the performance at La Villette. The original conversation is unavailable to us: although Ornette’s son Denardo filmed it, according to Derrida, neither the recording nor the transcription of the interview, conducted in English, can be found in any archives.[24] In it, the two discuss ideas that hint at an uncanny compatibility between deconstruction and improvisation: the relation between writing and interpretation, language and translation, composition and performance, preparation and event. As part of their discussion of the relation between composition and performance, Coleman relates to Derrida the origin of “Lonely Woman,” the first track on his 1959 The Shape of Jazz to Come, an album title that always struck me as Derridean even before I learned of their exchange. Of course, what I heard resonate in that title was Coleman’s own deconstructive style or method, prior to his exposure to Derrida’s work.[25]

    The conversation fascinated me because I couldn’t recall reading an interview with Derrida as the interviewer rather than the interviewee, that is, in the less exposed position. The tone is markedly different from the uncomfortably forceful quality of the prepared remarks he reads, or fails to read, at La Villette, in which he begs—nay, demands—that Ornette “play” his mother’s name.[26] Unlike Derrida, Coleman doesn’t seem put off by the need to improvise, to respond on the spot to Derrida’s questions. The conversation serves as an extended rehearsal or warm-up in which, even if we are not to claim that it replaces the concert as the “event” itself, something “happens.”

    When Derrida asks Coleman about the relationship between composition, rehearsal, and improvisation (“What do you think of the relationship between the precise event that constitutes the concert and pre-written music or improvised music? Do you think that pre-written music prevents the event from taking place?”) Coleman replies in the negative, refusing to recognize a contradiction between script and event.[27] Encouraged by this, Derrida pushes on: “Perhaps you will agree with me that the very concept of improvisation verges upon reading since what we often understand by improvisation is the creation of something new, yet something which doesn’t exclude the pre-written framework that makes it possible,” to which Coleman responds telegraphically: “That’s true.”[28] One gets the sense that Derrida is already mentally rehearsing his own performance-to-come.

    You may have noticed that I’ve resisted, or avoided, reading the text Derrida prepared, beyond the opening lines. This is not, or not only, because I would not dare to replicate or repeat what Michael Gallope and David Wills have already done. I resist reading that text because it repels me in a way I cannot quite understand.[29] It produces a profound discomfort that no other text of Derrida’s has provoked in me. I feel myself bouncing off that text to the earlier, fragmented, lost, translated and retranslated, impossible conversation or duet between Derrida and Coleman, to Derrida’s relative passivity, his acti-passivity, his unconditional openness to what promises in Coleman, in his music, his (transmedial) philosophy. Despite—or because of—Derrida’s gentle probing, his passive choreography, Coleman emerges as the philosopher of the encounter (of their encounter, but also of the encounter, of the relation, in an unconscious nod to Althusser and Balibar). Ornette is no sovereign: he privileges relationship—the encounter itself—above all else. From and through Derrida’s yielding, or exposure, to Coleman’s genius, emerge the conditions of possibility for the impossible event.[30]

    The Deconstruction of Jazz

     

    Jazz is a four-letter word.

    Max Roach[31]

    Jazz doesn’t mean anything.

    Duke Ellington[32]

    It’s always been my aim to stay outside any category. That’s my freedom. However, freedom, to me, is the definition of what jazz is, so I can’t say that I’m not a jazz performer.

    Nina Simone[33]

    I don’t like that word jazz.

    Miles Davis[34]

    There is no such thing as jazz. There’s only a song and your spirit and your ancestors.

    Abbey Lincoln[35]

    Don’t call me a jazz musician… The word jazz means n—–, discrimination, second-class citizenship, the back-of-the-bus bit.

                                                    Charles Mingus[36]

                           

    The word “jazz” has no meaning, it is a made-up word.

    Gary Bartz[37]

    The encounter between Coleman and Derrida allows us to theorize a certain relation between deconstruction and improvisation, between deconstruction and jazz. Yet the signifier “jazz”—as a genre, as a name—must also be subject to deconstruction. As a mode of conclusion, I’ll consider how the “deconstruction of jazz”—the deconstruction that the music often referred to as “jazz” imagines and instantiates—serves as the music’s simultaneous condition of possibility and impossibility. In his composition “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word,” Grammy-award winning composer, producer, multi-instrumentalist, and writer Nicholas Payton conjures—sonically and textually—the legacy of musicians (Max Roach, Duke Ellington, Nina Simone, Miles Davis, Abbey Lincoln, Charles Mingus, Gary Bartz) who have criticized the signifier “jazz” not only as aesthetically incoherent (too many or too few instances of musical expression are summoned by its call), but as ethically and politically problematic.[38] Opting for the more encompassing expression “Black American Music,” Payton joins and extends the lineage that includes Duke Ellington (who referred to “American music”) and Ahmad Jamal (who spoke of “American classical music”) in their attempt to find a more expansive, less coercive signifier. Kronfeld observes about this legacy of critique from Ellington to Payton: “‘jazz’…is a label that has never once captured what it purports to capture.  Indeed, in the context of the United States and its tainted epistemologies, the word ‘jazz’ would just be one of many majoritarian terms whose sense distorts its reference.”[39]

    The song “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word” cites and samples the recorded speech of Max Roach, who highlighted the term’s violent history.[40] The label “jazz” belongs to a long history of racist, colonialist exploitation—in the music industry and beyond. As a genre, then, “jazz” is coercive—perhaps, I might add, like all genres. Yet we can think of the music that goes by the name “jazz” as constitutively promiscuous, contaminated—like all genres, if we are to take Derrida’s claim in “The Law of Genre” seriously. A deconstructive (impossible) genre, one that necessarily calls for its own deconstruction. “The deconstruction of jazz,” then, should be understood in and through its double genitive.

    In the NPR Tiny Desk performance of “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word”—different in many ways than previous and subsequent versions recorded live and in the studio—Payton samples, loops, and mixes Ellington’s phrase “Jazz doesn’t mean anything” until the signifier “jazz” becomes mere noise.[41] Of course, the phrase itself points in multiple directions: jazz doesn’t mean anything, the music called jazz doesn’t want to say anything, the term “jazz” is meaningless… yet the formal unmaking of the phrase to the point of unintelligibility paradoxically performs another kind of meaning. A rough transcription might look something like this:

    Jazz doesn’t mean anything.

    Jazz doesn-, Jazz doesn’t mean anything.

    Ja-ja-ja-jazz does- ja-ja-jazz doesn’t mean anything.

    Ja-ja-ja-jazz does- jazz does- ja-ja-ja-jazz does-

    Ja-jazz- d- j-j-jazz-d-

    Ja-a-a-d-d-d-

    a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-azz doesn’t mean anything.

    In contrast to, say, minimalist composer Steve Reich’s controversial distortion of Black voices in his experimental sound pieces “It’s Gonna Rain” and “Come Out,” Payton’s distortion is generative: the dismantling or deconstruction of the word “jazz” creates the effect of scat, or vocal improvisation commonly found in Black improvisational music. Through the distortion and erasure of the term, it is paradoxically replaced—and survived—by the very thing that is annihilated by the term. In a way it approaches the aporia expressed by Nina Simone, in which the signifier “jazz” both refers to and contradicts “freedom”: the signifier violates the signified, and the signified makes impossible the signifier. This simultaneous making and unmaking, creative destruction or destructive creation, returns us to what is often forgotten or eclipsed in (bad) readings equating deconstruction with destruction, excising the “con,” denying what it creates. A negative labor that is not, that cannot be, nihilistic.

    The Shape of Deconstruction to Come

    What is the shape of deconstruction to come, of the humanities to come, of the university to come? What are its unpredictable contours, and how might we prepare its path? How might Derrida’s (failed) event or Payton’s deconstruction of “jazz” allow us to think about improvisation, experimentation, and risk not as playful supplements to thought but as conditions of exposure to what exceeds us, to what arrives unexpectedly, belatedly, untimely? One can invite an event but not produce it. To open oneself to the to-come, the à-venir, is not to predict or to control, but to prepare without mastery, to remain exposed to the possibility that something may happen between philosophy and music, writing and performance, self and other—that what happens may expose the fact that these categories are always already contaminated, exposed. Perhaps what deconstruction demands, finally, is another practice of listening: listening for what cannot yet be heard within the scripts, genres, and institutions that organize the present. After the so-called end of the humanities, such experiments—even when they fail—may represent the only possible afterlife.

    Erin Graff Zivin is Professor of Spanish and Portuguese and Comparative Literature at the University of Southern California, where she is Director of the Experimental Humanities Lab. In addition to her three books—Anarchaeologies: Reading as Misreading (Fordham UP, 2020), Figurative Inquisitions: Conversion, Torture, and Truth in the Luso-Hispanic Atlantic(Northwestern UP, 2014), and The Wandering Signifier: Rhetoric of Jewishness in the Latin American Imaginary (Duke UP, 2008)—she has edited or co-edited three special journal issues and three books, and published over 50 articles and book chapters on Latin American and comparative literature and media, deconstruction, ethical philosophy, and experimental art and thought. Graff Zivin’s fourth book, Transmedial Exposure: Toward an Experimental Humanities, will be published by Duke University Press in May 2027.

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    Bernstein, Adam. “Nina Simone, Eclectic Soul and Protest Singer, Dies.” Washington Post, April 22, 2003. https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/local/2003/04/22/nina-simone-eclectic-soul-and-protest-singer-dies/546c2dc2-ac39-40ac-ae0a-f29da56aafa0/.

    Bartz, Gary. “Gary Bartz.” Red Bull Music Academy Lecture, 2008. https://www.redbullmusicacademy.com/lectures/gary-bartz-bonn-better-know.

    Derrida, Jacques. “Play—The First Name. 1 July 1997.” Translated by Timothy S. Murphy. Genre: Forms of Discourse and Culture 36, no. 2 (2004): 331–40.

    Derrida, Jacques, and Ornette Coleman. “The Other’s Language: Jacques Derrida Interviews Ornette Coleman, 23 June 1997.” Translated by Timothy S. Murphy. Genre 37, no. 2 (2004): 319–29.

    DiPiero, Dan. Contingent Encounters: Improvisation in Music and Everyday Life. Ann Arbor: University of Michigan Press, 2022.

    Dick, Kirby, and Amy Ziering, dirs. Derrida. Sony Pictures Classics, 2002.

    Fertel, Randy. Winging It: Improv’s Power and Peril in the Time of Trump. Putnam Valley, NY: Spring Publications, 2024.

    Gallope, Michael. “Is Improvisation Present?” In The Oxford Handbook of Critical Improvisation Studies, Volume I, edited by George E. Lewis and Benjamin Piekut, 143–58. Oxford: Oxford University Press, 2016.

    Gates Jr., Henry Louis, ed. “Race,” Writing, and Difference. Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 1986.

    Gates Jr., Henry Louis. The Signifying Monkey: A Theory of African American Literary Criticism. New York: Oxford University Press, 1988.

    Iyer, Vijay. “Improvisation, Action Understanding, and Music Cognition With and Without Bodies.” In The Oxford Handbook of Critical Improvisation Studies, edited by George E. Lewis and Benjamin Piekut, 74–90. Oxford: Oxford University Press, 2016.

    Kronfeld, Maya. “The Philosopher’s Bass Drum: Adorno, Jazz and the Politics of Metric Regularity,” Radical Philosophy 2, no. 5 (Autumn, 2019): 34-47.

    Kronfeld, Maya. “Rhythmic Concepts and New Knowledge.” b2o: boundary 2 online, 2025. https://www.boundary2.org/2025/05/maya-kronfeld-rhythmic-concepts-and-new-knowledge/.

    Kronfeld, Maya. “Spontaneity,” Political Concepts: A Critical Lexicon (Literature Edition), no. 7 (June 2025). https://www.politicalconcepts.org/spontaneity-maya-kronfeld/.

    Kronfeld, Maya. “Structure in the Moment: Rhythm Section Responsivity.” Jazz & Culture 4, no. 2 (2021): 1–24. https://www.radicalphilosophy.com/article/the-philosophers-bass-drum.

    Lincoln, Abbey. Interview by Sally Placksin. Smithsonian Jazz Oral History Program Collection. December 18, 1996. Archives Center, National Museum of American History, Smithsonian Institution.

    Moten, Fred. In the Break: The Aesthetics of the Black Radical Tradition. Minneapolis: University of Minnesota Press, 2003.

    Muyumba, Walton M. The Shadow and the Act: Black Intellectual Practice, Jazz Improvisation, and Philosophical Pragmatism. Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 2009.

    Nicholas Payton Trio. “Jazz Is a Four-Letter Word.” NPR Music Tiny Desk Concert. YouTube video, August 19, 2019. https://youtu.be/f_dSlxgD2Fo.

    Okiji, Fumi. Jazz as Critique: Adorno and Black Expression Revisited. Stanford, CA: Stanford University Press, 2020.

    Rockwell, John. “Charles Mingus Dies at 56.” New York Times, January 9, 1979. https://www.nytimes.com/1979/01/09/archives/charles-mingus-56-bass-player-bandleader-and-composer-dead-an.html.

    Sawyer, Michael E. “So What: Kind of More or Less Than All Blue(s).” b2o: boundary 2 online, 2025. https://www.boundary2.org/2025/05/michael-e-sawyer-so-what-kind-of-more-or-less-than-all-blues/.

    Stein, Joel. “Life with the Father of Deconstructionism.” Time, November 18, 2002. https://time.com/archive/6667704/life-with-the-father-of-deconstructionism/.

    Wills, David. “Notes Towards a Requiem: Or the Music of Memory.” Mosaic: An Interdisciplinary Critical Journal 39, no. 3 (2006): 27–46.

    Wocke, Brendon. “Derrida at Villette: (An)aesthetic of Space.” University of Toronto Quarterly 83, no. 3 (2014): 739–55. https://doi.org/10.3138/UTQ.83.3.739.

    [1] For an elaborated version of this text, see my forthcoming book Transmedial Exposure: Toward an Experimental Humanities, forthcoming with Duke University Press in 2027. I am grateful to Ken Wissoker for his encouragement to publish this “sneak preview.” Special thanks to Eduardo Cadava, Valeria Campos Salvaterra, Anna Kornbluh, and Karen Zumhagen-Yekplé for invitations to present this work at Princeton, PUC-Valparaíso, InterCcECT, and Tulane, and to the participants and attendees of those events—including Gil Anidjar, Geoffrey Bennington, Seth Brodsky, Daniel Hoffman-Schwartz, T.R. Johnson, Axelle Karera, Elissa Marder, V. Mitch McEwen, Gabriela Nouzeilles, Judy Rodríguez, Pedro Segundo, and David Wills—for their wonderful questions and suggestions. I am grateful to Peggy Kamuf for our conversation about the July 1, 1997 concert, to Vijay Iyer and Nicholas Payton for conversations on improvisation and, most especially, to Maya Kronfeld and Michael Sawyer—whose deep and sustained work on and commitment to Black improvisational music has proven vital to my thinking—for their close engagement with this text.

    [2] Jacques Derrida participated (with Peter Eisenman) in the design of a garden that would form a part of the Parc de la Villette complex. A performing arts complex overseen by Bernard Tschumi, the project was inspired by deconstructive thought. The garden, conceived by Derrida and Eisenman through the Plantonic notion of khôra, was six times over budget and never built. See Brendon Wocke, “Derrida at Villette: (An)aesthetic of Space.” Special thanks to V. Mitch McEwen for this connection.

    [3] Derrida, “Play—The First Name,” 332.

    [4] A recording that surfaced on YouTube just before the completion of the present book reveals the crowd’s heckling of Derrida to have begun at around minute four, after which time Coleman joins the philosopher in a strange duet. The public quiets briefly to listen, but begins to clap loudly several minutes later, with some audience members shouting, silencing Derrida for over a minute. The ostensible response of each to the other—the crowd to Derrida, Coleman to the crowd, etc.—shows the public to be part of the experiment, part of the ensemble. Derrida is quiet as the tenth minute approaches, and the public explodes in applause, likely to celebrate his departure from the stage, after which Coleman and Kühn continue to play alone. “‘Qu’est-ce qui arrive?’, JD/OC 1997.” https://youtu.be/hKnER9cnW0A?si=07qlwQEpwY-3da-b.

    [5] David Wills, “Notes Towards a Requiem: Or the Music of Memory,” Mosaic: An Interdisciplinary Critical Journal, vol. 39, no. 3 (2006): 44.

    [6] Michael Gallope, “Is Improvisation Present?,” The Oxford Handbook of Critical Improvisation Studies, Volume I, ed. George E Lewis and Benjamin Piekut (Oxford: Oxford University Press, 2016), 144. Gallope’s remarkable essay takes the failed encounter between Derrida and Coleman as a point of departure to discuss the unpresentability of the instant in Vladmir Jankélévitch’s philosophy of music.

    [7] Unpublished interview from 1982, cited in Kirby Dick and Amy Ziering (dir), Derrida.

    [8] It is worth watching 2:50-3:35 here: https://youtu.be/7s8SSilNSXw?si=KG1sTdbM6G-khv9C.

    [9] A young Gallope was in attendance at the event Stein witnessed, and proceeded to ask Derrida “What kind of music do you listen to and why do you listen to it?” Stein refers to this question as that which prompted Derrida to discuss the failed experiment at La Villette (Gallope, “Is Improvisation Present?”, 144).

    [10] Joel Stein, “Life with the Father of Deconstructionism,” Time, 18 Nov., (2002):  https://time.com/archive/6667704/life-with-the-father-of-deconstructionism/. Accessed 19 Feb. 2025.

    [11] Dan DiPiero, Contingent Encounters: Improvisation in Music and Everyday Life (Ann Arbor, Michigan: University of Michigan Press, 2022), 163. On the ubiquity of improvisation in the current political moment, see Randy Fertel’s Winging It: Improv’s Power and Peril in the Time of Trump (Spring Publications, 2024).

    [12] Vijay Iyer, “Improvisation, Action Understanding, and Music Cognition With and Without Bodies,” The Oxford Handbook of Critical Improvisation Studies, ed. George E. Lewis and Benjamin Piekut, et al (Oxford: Oxford University Press, 2016), 75.

    [13] Derrida, “Play—The First Name,” 331.

    [14] Maya Kronfeld,“Spontaneity,” (§3 “What Spontaneity Isn’t”) Political Concepts: A Critical Lexicon (Literature Edition), no. 7 (June 2025). https://www.politicalconcepts.org/spontaneity-maya-kronfeld/.

    [15] Muyumba 57, quoted in Kronfeld, “Spontaneity.” See also Kronfeld, “Rhythmic Concepts and New Knowledge” b2o: boundary 2 online, (2025): https://www.boundary2.org/2025/05/maya-kronfeld-rhythmic-concepts-and-new-knowledge/. Her forthcoming book, Spontaneous Form: Philosophy, Literature, Jazz, reflects the entirety of this argument. In a different vein, Muyumba identifies the philosophical underpinnings of improvisation in Black writing (Ellison, Baldwin, and Baraka) in his The Shadow and the Act: Black Intellectual Practice, Jazz Improvisation, and Philosophical Pragmatism (Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 2009).

    [16] Fumi Okiji, Jazz as Critique: Adorno and Black Expression Revisited (Stanford: Stanford University Press, 2020), 15, quoted in Kronfeld, “Spontaneity” (§3 “What Spontaneity Isn’t”).

    [17] Maya Kronfeld, “Structure in the Moment: Rhythm Section Responsivity,” Jazz & Culture, Vol. 4, No. 2, Jazz in the Present Tense (2021): 14.

    [18] Kronfeld, “Structure in the Moment,” 14.

    [19] Bartz elaborates upon his notion of “spontaneous composition” in conversation with Terence Blanchard in SFJazz Dialogues. See: https://www.sfjazz.org/athome/sfjazz-dialogues/gary-bartz/. Thanks to Nicholas Payton for pointing me in the direction of this interview.

    [20] See Kronfeld, “Spontaneity” (§2 “Putting it Together”)

    [21] Conversation with Peggy Kamuf, 26 Sept 2024.

    [22] Although he has not written on the Derrida-Coleman exchange, Moten may be the brightest and boldest voice of the past decades to imagine—and, more significantly, to perform—the rapport between deconstruction and improvisation. It is not that he was the first thinker to bring a Derridean approach to Black studies. Deconstructive readings abound in critical and scholarly work treating African American literature and other arts. Well before Moten, Henry Louis Gates Jr.’s 1986 edited volume “Race,” Writing, and Difference winked at Derrida’s Writing and Difference (and includes Derrida’s “Racism’s Last Word”), and his 1988 The Signifying Monkey alluded to a Derridean lexicon in order to insert a wrinkle or a fold: the “signifying” that has been at the heart of the Black vernacular tradition, a proto-deconstructive practice embedded in the everyday, in so-called high and low culture. Yet while Gates stands metonymically for a vital yet (and) highly institutionalized African American literary studies, Moten’s Black Study, in its anti-institutionality, its “undercommons” sensibility, is profoundly deconstructive and improvisational in style, method, and theme.

    [23] “No reading of… Chinampas. No reading because the understanding of literary experience which (a) reading implies is exceeded in the enactment of what Chinampas is and moves (to), which Chinampas demands: improvisation. And so I have been preparing myself to play with Cecil Taylor, to hear what is transmitted on frequencies outside and beneath the range of reading” (Moten, In the Break, 41).

    [24] Derrida, “Play—The First Name,” 337. An incomplete French translation—published in the magazine Les Inrockuptibles—was re-translated into English by Timothy S. Murphy and published as Jacques Derrida and Ornette Coleman, “The Other’s Language: Jacques Derrida Interviews Ornette Coleman, 23 June 1997,” trad. Timothy S. Murphy, Genre 37, 2, (2004): 319–29.

    [25] Put another way, perhaps Coleman’s music and Derrida’s deconstructive thinking are fragments of that amphora to which Walter Benjamin alludes in “The Task of the Translator”: each calls into the forest and awaits the echo. Michael E. Sawyer imagines Black improvisational music and literature as fragments of a vessel not unlike the Japanese art form of kintsugi in his essay “So What: Kind of More or Less Than All Blue(s)” (Sawyer, 2025).

    [26] “I too am dying to ask Ornette something. He promised me to improvise, like I did, so I have not warned him what I was going to ask him. He doesn’t expect it. So there it is, now I am asking him to make me a gift, an unpredictable gift, of his mother’s first name (could you tell me, as a gift, your mother’s first name?) so that I can call her on all my lines (internal telephone, Tone Dialing, Faxing, Cyber Cyber) and make a declaration of love to her. Even if you don’t pronounce it, that first name, play it, send it to me in music, in saxotelephony, in saxotelephonepiphany” (Derrida, “Play—The First Name,” 340).

    [27] Derrida and Coleman, “The Other’s Language,” 322.

    [28] Derrida and Coleman, “The Other’s Language,” 322.

    [29] David Wills, “Notes Towards a Requiem: Or the Music of Memory,” Mosaic: An Interdisciplinary Critical Journal, vol. 39, no. 3, (2006): 27-46.

    [30] When I presented this work to InterCeCT, one of the attendees suggested an inverse interpretation: the conversation is the violent, appropriative event that centers Derrida as deconstructive thinker, while the (failed) performance destabilizes and subverts his authority. I am grateful to all of the participants in that conversation, which enriched and complicated my understanding of the encounter between Derrida and Coleman.

    [31] Sampled in Nicholas Payton Trio, “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word,” Youtube, uploaded by NPR Music Tiny Desk Concert, 19 Aug. 2019: https://youtu.be/f_dSlxgD2Fo?si=wvlndyxfBJL75U5u.

    [32] Sampled in Nicholas Payton, “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word.”

    [33] Quoted in Adam Bernstein, “Nina Simone, Eclectic Soul and Protest Singer, Dies,” Washington Post. 22 Apr. 2003: www.washingtonpost.com/archive/local/2003/04/22/nina-simone-eclectic-soul-and-protest-singer-dies/546c2dc2-ac39-40ac-ae0a-f29da56aafa0/.

    [34] Sampled in Nicholas Payton, “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word.”

    [35] Abbey Lincoln, Interview by Sally Placksin. Smithsonian Jazz Oral History Program Collection, December 18, 1996, Archives Center, National Museum of American History, Smithsonian Institution.

    [36] Quoted in John Rockwell, “Charles Mingus dies at 56.” The New York Times. 9 Jan. 1979: https://www.nytimes.com/1979/01/09/archives/charles-mingus-56-bass-player-bandleader-and-composer-dead-an.html.

    [37] “The word ‘jazz’ has no meaning, it is a made-up word. It is not even a real word, and the origins of the word is from the whorehouses in New Orleans where you go to find women… Certainly, it is a negative word and most of the musicians I have been fortunate to be around, such as Duke Ellington, Miles Davis, Max Roach, Minugs, Art Blakey, I could go on, they hate that word. So, I come for that and I hate that word too.” Gary Bartz, “Gary Bartz.” Red Bull Music Academy Lecture (2008): https://www.redbullmusicacademy.com/lectures/gary-bartz-bonn-better-know.

    [38] See discussion in Kronfeld, “Structure in the Moment,” 18.

    [39] Maya Kronfeld, “The Philosopher’s Bass Drum: Adorno, Jazz and the Politics of Metric Regularity,” Radical Philosophy 2, no. 5 (Autumn, 2019), 39.

    https://www.radicalphilosophy.com/article/the-philosophers-bass-drum

    [40] See discussion in Kronfeld, “The Philosopher’s Bass Drum,” FN38. Roach can be heard criticizing the term “jazz” in the opening bars of the song, beginning at 15:55. Nicholas Payton Trio, “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word,” Youtube, uploaded by NPR Music Tiny Desk Concert, 19 Aug. 2019: https://youtu.be/f_dSlxgD2Fo?si=wvlndyxfBJL75U5u.

    [41] Ellington’s phrase is sampled, looped and distorted beginning at 21:25. Nicholas Payton Trio, “Jazz is a Four-Letter Word,” Youtube, uploaded by NPR Music Tiny Desk Concert, 19 Aug. 2019: https://youtu.be/f_dSlxgD2Fo?si=wvlndyxfBJL75U5u.

  • Nina Sun Eidsheim–Pussy Listening: Building an Activist Listening Practice

    Nina Sun Eidsheim–Pussy Listening: Building an Activist Listening Practice

    This post is part of a dossier that features materials that were generated at, or in the aftermath of, the “Experiments in Listening” conference that boundary 2 co-organized with the California Institute of the Arts and the University of Southern California in January 2025.

    Pussy Listening: Building an Activist Listening Practice

    Nina Sun Eidsheim

    All images for this essay were taken by Nina Eidsheim, except Image 5, which was taken by Arne De Boever.

    The practice of listening is, in large part, a practice of recognition. The recognition of familiar voices, against those of strangers. The recognition of an emotional state—happy, angry, concerned, tired—as a cue for how to interpret words and build a response. The recognition of the sonic patterns that make up a language. All this knowledge is taken into account as we regulate ourselves vocally and otherwise sonically. And so we listen to that as well.

    Image 1: Preparing to cut thread into shorter pieces.

    Image 2: Organized chaos.

    It must be built into our basic instinct to know whether we are adequately listened to. A crying baby is reassured when its call is heeded. In a game of hide-and-seek, a toddler calling to a friend that it’s time to come and find them has been fulfilled. A teenager who huffs that they need to be left alone is relieved to be respected.

    Images 3-5: Surfaces that can support Pussy Listening

    To get to this room—to read this journal—a large portion of our lives has been (inadvertently) dedicated to listening “correctly,” and to avoid listening “incorrectly.” This kind of relationship to listening comes from a place of submission, a strategy of safekeeping oneself, and often forwards the agendas of those in power.

    Evolutionists would say it is part of humanity’s success that we build banks of sounds. We listen for those sounds, or—more importantly—remain alert for sounds unfamiliar. And we ourselves make decisions about the sounds we put into the world, based on a desire, need, necessity to be included.

    However, at the same time, sound-making and listening are used covertly. They are used to hide, divert, lie, gloss over, and make nice when there is no nice.

    Somehow, whether or not we are even aware of it, we also listen in that register. I don’t know how we are trained to recognize this. It must be an even deeper survival instinct…

    And this kind of listening has the capacity to save our lives. It is tuning in to an undertone that warns us to leave a party or a dinner. It is the skill that tells us that nothing is all right even though we are looking at our mother’s smiling, reassuring face. 

    Images 6-7: Walking out into the world.

    Pussy listening is what I call this kind of non-official listening, and I assume all genders have this capacity.

    Pussy listening is not a vaginal listening.[1]

    Pussy listening is agential listening that cannot be grabbed.

    I have found that pussy listening can be activated or accessed by deliberately disrupting everyday patterns. Since many of us don’t need to make the things we need for daily survival, returning to hands and their coordination with sight and listening can serve as such disruption, or, reactivation, if you will. I thread the needle. I feel the resistance of the fabric or material through which the fingers guide the needle. I consider my presence in the world, determining where to exhibit the badge. I may have tapped into pussy listening more deliberately.

    Images 8-11: The choreography of the needle and fingers requires tactile focus.

    Image 12: “I wonder if I will always have to wear the same underwear with these pants.”

    Complete this form to request the Pussy Listening Kit.

    Nina Eidsheim is a vocalist, sound studies scholar and theorist. She brings extensive knowledge, experience and innovative approaches to practice-based research that focuses on sound and listening. The author of Sensing Sound: Singing and Listening as Vibrational Practice and The Race of Sound: Listening, Timbre, and Vocality in African American Music, she has co-authored book with and about the composer and trumpet player Wadada Leo Smith and co-edited a volume on music and metaphor and the worlds they make, both of which are forthcoming. She has also just started working on a book about the question of whether it is possible to build sensorial memory of a childhood that didn’t come to be—for which the research involves eating her way through K-town and asking kind strangers to teach her how to cook Korean food. Nina was born in South-Korea, adopted to and grew up on the west coast of Norway, and lives in Los Angeles. 

    [1] See, for example, Miya Masaoka’s piece, “Vaginated Chairs”, presented at MoMA PS1 on April 1, 2018, https://miyamasaoka.com/work/2017/vaginated-chairs-2/, accessed April 29 2026.

  • Lisi Schoenbach–The Case of the Disappearing Institution

    Lisi Schoenbach–The Case of the Disappearing Institution

    Graduation picture from the Lincoln School of Nurses in 1915. Larsen is second from left in the front row.

    This post is part of a dossier of texts “On Not Hating the State” that was initially generated for a panel with a similar title, “On (Not) Hating the State”, and organized by Rebecca Oh, at the 2026 American Comparative Literature Association Conference in Montréal.

    The Case of the Disappearing Institution: Reconstruction and the Quicksand of Representation

    Lisi Schoenbach

     

    For those of us committed to not hating the state, the problem of convincing others to join us often comes down to an aesthetic problem. Even in our current moment, when institutions, (including universities, regulatory bodies, arts organizations, departments of public health, and organizations designed to promote racial and economic equality) are staggering under the repeated hammer blows of anti-institutionalist oligarchs, it remains a challenge to articulate to the public why such institutions matter or to offer a compelling sense of what is lost when they are broken beyond repair. I call this an aesthetic problem because there appear to be so few aesthetically compelling ways to capture the urgency of defending, building, and rebuilding institutions. The question I want to pose is this: is the state (and its attendant social configurations) unrepresentable or somehow at odds with innovative and exciting aesthetic forms? How might we look to past representational failures or successes in order to develop more aesthetically exciting and engaging ways to capture and articulate the institutional forms on which our collective democratic life depends?

    To explore these questions, I’d like to look back to from the 2020s to the 1920s and to the cases of W.E.B. Du Bois, a lifelong institutionalist and advocate for state-building, and Nella Larsen, whose provocatively tragic and beautiful novellas Quicksand and Passing have come to be recognized as two aesthetic jewels of the New Negro Renaissance. Although Larsen and her husband were social acquaintances of Du Bois, and although Du Bois reviewed Quicksand glowingly in The Crisis, calling it “on the whole, the best piece of fiction that Negro America has produced since the heyday of Chesnutt,”[i] Larsen’s novellas could hardly be mistaken for a defense of the institutions that Du Bois had championed. In particular, Quicksand offers a blistering attack on the institutions of education and racial uplift. The question I would like to explore here is how and why a novelist whose own life and career had been made possible by the educational, civil rights, and literary institutions developed in the post-Reconstruction moment, and who could clearly see the urgent need for transformation that her moment demanded, would not only fail to make the case for those institutions; but would in fact relentlessly critique them for their collective hypocrisies, cruelties, and failures.

    Larsen’s dazzling but tragically short career as a novelist unfolded during an era in which white supremacist retrenchment had followed fast on the heels of Reconstruction’s promise of racial equality and full democracy. The threat of racial terror continued to define public life for African Americans in the 1920s; although the frequency of lynchings had diminished from their peak in 1892, racial violence, segregation, and discrimination continued to define the decade from the Tulsa race massacre of 1921 forward. The New Negro Renaissance unfolded against this backdrop, and took its place among a variety of social, political, economic, and literary movements, organizations, and institutions that were also responding to urgent needs of the moment. From the Brotherhood of Sleeping Car Porters to Marcus Garvey’s Universal Negro Improvement Organization, to the many literary journals, black-owned and patronized businesses and clubs, tenant’s rights groups, and civil rights organizations that characterized the vibrant urban community of Harlem during this time, the 1920s saw a variety of political, educational, and cultural developments that built on the institutional legacies of Reconstruction and prepared the ground for the Civil Rights movements of the twentieth century.

    These projects followed in the footsteps and in the spirit (and sometimes were the literal handiwork) of Du Bois, whose thought provides one of our richest and most comprehensive resources for the project of “not hating the state.” From his valedictory address upon graduating from Fisk in 1888, on “Bismarck,” (Dusk of Dawn, 16) to his late embrace of communism, which he described in his posthumously published autobiography as “a planned way of life in the production of wealth and work designed for building a state whose object is the highest welfare of its people and not merely the profit of a part” (Autobiography, 57), Du Bois unwaveringly celebrated the notion of a strong state that could make “a nation out of bickering peoples.”[ii] Although this concept first emerged in his thought as a mode of constructing a shared black identity patterned on the lessons of Germany, as time went on his vision shifted.  Through a series of intellectual encounters with the legacy of Reconstruction, which he understood fundamentally as a state-building project tragically cut short before it had an opportunity to realize its fullest promise, he developed a vision of a “democratic state;” a strong, flexible, and productive set of interlocking social and institutional forms.[iii]

    It was precisely its commitment to these institutional forms that had, according to Du Bois, made the project of Reconstruction “(t)he greatest and most important step toward world democracy of all men of all races ever taken in the modern world” (The Gift of Black Folk, 75). Such forms included a wide variety of midrange and non-economic institutions, including federal and state governments, schools, libraries, churches, universities, bureaus, business organizations, and social and community groups. Du Bois’s vision of democratic state-building thus distinguished itself both from iron fist of Bismarckian authoritarianism and from the abstractions and generalities surrounding most theories of the State. It expressed itself through a rich and complex commitment to institutional forms, much like those that flourished in Harlem during the 1920s. Many of these organizations, including the NAACP and its journal, The Crisis, were founded and then guided by Du Bois himself.

    Du Bois’s embrace of institutions, as I have argued, is the single most coherent and consistent element of his thought over the course of an incredibly long and complex career, one that spanned more than 75 years and encompassed both his early belief in “the talented tenth” and his later embrace of communism and expatriation to Ghana. Yet Du Bois’s commitment to the varied institutions of education, political advocacy, and literary culture that he learned from, joined, founded, and led was also enabled by those institutions’ unconditional acceptance of him. From childhood, Du Bois was embraced, celebrated, and chosen. He was sent by his community in Great Barrington to study at Fisk, recommended by his professors at Fisk to pursue a graduate degree at Harvard, and then sponsored by fellowship to continue his Ph.D. at the University of Berlin. Although his time at each of these places was marked by challenges, and his accomplishments there demanded fortitude, dignity, and relentless effort, he was nonetheless able to find his place. Even at Harvard, where he struggled socially and was sometimes treated as a curiosity by fellow students, his presence was largely acknowledged as legitimate, and he never wavered in his belief that his degree was an important academic credential that would smooth the path to future success. Even when those around him excluded or underestimated him, he saw himself and was seen by his mentors as a future leader of the race, more or less from the time he was a child. His faith in the meritocratic elements of these institutions was enabled and supplemented by a faith in himself that was continually bolstered by the authority figures around him.

    Larsen’s experience could not have been more different. Like Du Bois, Larsen was the product of several HBCUs, educational institutions that were also legacies of Reconstruction, including Fisk and Tuskegee, but her experiences at both places were marred by the sense that she did not belong. She was dismissed from Fisk after a year for rebelling against the strict dress code, an episode echoed by Helga Crane’s decision in Quicksand to leave the fictional Naxos. She enrolled in the Lincoln Hospital and Home Training School for Nurses in New York, where her work was so stellar that she was appointed as head nurse at Tuskegee Institute Hospital. She struggled with the culture of Tuskegee, however, and again left within a year. Years later, on an author’s information sheet for Alfred A. Knopf she described her departure as follows: “[she] accepted a position as Head Nurse of the hospital at Tuskegee Institute – the school founded by Booker T. Washington – but her dislike of the conditions there and the school authorities dislike of her appearance and manner were both so intense that after a year they parted with mutual disgust and relief”[iv] (Davis 110).

    Scholars, including Larsen’s biographers, have noted Larsen’s alienation from the two HBCU’s she attended. By all accounts, the problem was not merely the educational philosophy or intellectual environment of either place, but rather their restrictive and conservative social environments, and their explicit and implicit embrace of whiteness as the ultimate standard of success.  According to Angela Watkins, “Fisk offered a liberal arts education while Tuskegee focused on industrial education; yet, both schools enforced rigid social practices in their mimicry of ‘civilized’ societies based on Eurocentric ideals. The administration at both schools also emphasized deference to their white benefactors, on whom they relied financially. These experiences inform the narrative for Quicksand, and are the basis for Helga’s disillusionment with Naxos and with educational race leaders” (Watkins, 251).

    Behind these principled misgivings lie a more general set of hesitations surrounding institutions, namely their tendency to grow into “a machine,” or a “big knife with cruelly sharp edges ruthlessly cutting all to a pattern, the white man’s pattern” (Larsen, 4). One can discern in Larsen’s language, in this image of a dressmaker cutting a pattern, a critique at once of violence and cruelty and of aesthetic standardization. Certainly Helga’s objections to Naxos are framed in Quicksand in aesthetic terms. When we first meet her, she is alone in a room furnished expensively with Orientalist flair, reading an Orientalist novel, dressed in a “vivid gold and green negligee and glistening brocaded mules” (Larsen, 2). Helga’s exquisite taste, it quickly becomes clear, has made her an outcast in this institutional setting. She longs for beauty and individual self expression and Naxos feels repressive, coercive, colorless, and joyless. This, too, is expressed through Helga’s relationship to fashion:

    Clothes had been one of her difficulties in Naxos. Helga Crane loved clothes, elaborate ones. Nevertheless, she had tried not to offend. But with small success, for, although she had affected the deceptively simple variety, the hawk eyes of dean and matrons had detected the subtle difference from their own irreproachably conventional garments. Too, they felt that the colors were queer; dark purples, royal blues, rich greens, deep reds, in soft luxurious woolens, or heavy, clinging silks. And the trimmings—when Helga used them at all—seemed to them odd. Old laces, strange embroideries, dim brocades. Her faultless, slim shoes made them uncomfortable and her small plain hats seemed to them positively indecent. (Larsen, 18)

    As I have noted, Helga’s incongruous appearance at Naxos echoes Larsen’s own dismissal from Fisk for dressing inappropriately and her failure to fit in at Tuskegee, which she attributes in part to her “manner and appearance.” However, these passages denote more than a simple disagreement of taste; they represent a modernist sensibility growing out of aestheticism colliding with a doctrinaire Victorian style that continued to “ruthlessly cut all to a pattern” even into the third decade of the twentieth century. The “slim shoes” and “small plain hats,” the “lack of trimming,” the “subtle difference” of Helga’s style all signal modernist style. Although the novel as a whole treats fashion in relation to important questions of objectification, exoticism, and commodification, in these passages we can see that the space of Naxos not only crushes innovative and progressive ideas and denigrates Afrocentric ideas, but that its notions of beauty and of style are outmoded and embarrassing. In this aesthetic failure we see a range of other failures: of attunement to the ideas, feelings, and needs of the people it was designed to serve, for instance, or of consciousness of the “odd,” “strange,” “queer,” and “positively indecent” elements of Helga’s character.[v]  Unlike Du Bois, who was noted for his own dapper sense of style, and for whom dandyism added merely an additional touch of professional polish, Larsen’s sense of fashion and refusal to be “irreproachably conventional” was seen as unforgivably transgressive. Punished, disciplined, overworked, and unappreciated, Larsen first retreated from these institutions and later savaged them in her fiction.[vi]

    Educational institutions were not the only target of Larsen’s frustration. A similar tone of impatience pervades her treatment of each institution and social form in Quicksand, and can be seen in her disparagement of the (slovenly, poorly dressed) Mrs. Hayes-Rore’s regurgitated speeches on “the race’s ills” and in Anne Grey’s unthinking loyalty to a racial uplift movement that Helga finds exclusionary, conformist, and hypocritical. Exoticized and homesick in Denmark, Helga returns to the United States only to experience yet another disillusionment in the black church, where she finds herself the resented northern emissary of uplift in a rural Alabama community. Each successive social form she seeks betrays and disappoints her. Rather than building stability and futurity or helping to create future generations of leaders, as Du Bois’s institutions promise, these institutions function as technologies for ideological coercion and  threaten to punish anything that deviates from their narrowly constructed norms. As Helga is repelled again and again by the conformist, middle class, Victorian aesthetic of these institutions, she is excluded from the project of uplift, left alone to struggle for herself without any community to support her, and ultimately pulled under, doomed by her reproductive life to stasis and convention while her modernist soul continues to yearn for freedom and mobility.

    Larsen’s own story is tragic in its own way, but unlike Helga’s it is also thoroughly institutional. After Fisk and after Tuskegee, she worked as a nurse for the New York department of public health (serving during the influenza epidemic), and after her marriage she attended the library school of the New York Public Library and worked in the 135th street branch.[vii] After her divorce and disappearance from the literary scene she returned to her nursing career, working at Gouverneur Hospital, a municipal hospital on New York’s Lower East Side. Her engagement with and dependence on these systems, structures, and forms was more complex than Helga’s. Although she continued to critique the implicit whiteness and narrowmindedness of many institutions, she also owed her professional life and her career as a nurse to the kinds of public institutions that continue to make our collective life and public good possible. Larsen’s work should not be taken as a wholesale rejection of Du Boisian institutionalism then, but as a much-needed complement to Du Bois’s idealistic and often credulous imaginings of institutional forms.[viii] In Larsen’s aesthetic critique lies a substantive and urgent reminder that institutions need constant tending, revising, and remaking or they will fail to speak to the people they were designed to serve. If the institutions of the state are blind to the full richness and variety of the people whose interests they are attempting to represent, then the problem I described at the beginning of this piece denotes more than a failure to make a public case for our necessary institutions. It suggests that the institutions themselves have failed to demonstrate that they can rise to an urgent moment. It is well worth considering these overlapping failures with an eye towards our own moment of institutional collapse and cultural exhaustion.

    Lisi Schoenbach is an associate professor of English at the University of Tennessee, where she teaches and works on twentieth-century literature and philosophy, with a particular focus on modernism, pragmatism, and political theory. She is the author of Pragmatic Modernism (Oxford, 2012) and is at work on a second book project, Institutionalism and the Fate of the Public University. Her work has appeared in Modernism/Modernity, The Henry James Review, American Literary History, and The Chronicle of Higher Education.

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    Cloutier, Jean-Christophe. “Amiable with Big Teeth: The Case of Claude McKay’s Last Novel.” Modernism/modernity 20, no. 3 (2013): 557-576. https://dx.doi.org/10.1353/mod.2013.0076.

    Davis, Thadious. Nella Larsen, Novelist of the Harlem Renaissance: A Woman’s Life Unveiled. Baton Rouge: Louisiana State University Press, 1994.

    Du Bois, W.E.B., The Autobiography of W. E. B. Du Bois (The Oxford W. E. B. Du Bois): A Soliloquy on Viewing My Life from the Last Decade of Its First Century. New York: Oxford UP, 2014

    Du Bois, W. E. B., Dusk of Dawn: An Essay Toward an Autobiography of a Race Concept. (1940). New York: Oxford University Press, 2014.

    Du Bois, W. E. B., The Souls of Black Folk: Essays and Sketches.  1903.New York: Oxford University Press, 2007.

    Du Bois, W. E. B., The Gift of Black Folk: The Negroes in the Making of America. 1924. 

    Oxford UP, 2007.

    Du Bois, W. E. B., “Two Novels,” The Crisis, Vol. 35 Issue 6, 1928.

    Du Bois, W. E. B., “The field and function of the American Negro college (1933),” in The Education of Black People: Ten Critiques 1906-1960, edited by Herbert Aptheker. Amherst: University of Massachusetts Press, 1973. (pp. 111-133).

    Edmondson, Belinda. “Finding Africa in Harlem: Displacement and Belonging in Claude McKay’s Home to Harlem.” In Claude McKay, Home to Harlem, New York: Penguin, 2025.

    https://lithub.com/finding-africa-in-harlem-displacement-and-belonging-in-claude-mckays-home-to-harlem/

    Hochman, Barbara. “Filling in Blanks: Nella Larsen’s Application to Library School.” PMLA 133, no. 5 (2018): 1172–90. http://www.jstor.org/stable/45179451

    Hutchinson, George. In Search of Nella Larsen: A Biography of the Color Line. Cambridge: Harvard University Press, 2006.

    Larsen, Nella. Quicksand and Passing, ed. Deborah E. McDowell. New Brunswick, New Jersey: Rutgers University Press, 1986.

    Phulwani, Vijay.“A Splendid Failure? Black Reconstruction and Du Bois’s Tragic Vision of Politics.” A Political Companion to W. E. B. Du Bois, edited by Bromell, Nick. UP of Kentucky, 2018, pp. 271–302.

    Roffman, Karin. “Nella Larsen, Librarian at 135th Street,” Modern Fiction Studies, Vol. 53, No. 4 (Winter 2007), pp. 752–787.

    Singleton, Maura. “The Callings of Nella Larsen,” UVA School of Nursing blog, Flashback Friday, May 24, 2024.https://nursing.virginia.edu/news/flashback-the-callings-of-nella-larsen/

    Watkins, Angela. “Progression or Regression of the Black Race?: Historically Black Colleges and Racial Uplift in Nella Larsen’s Quicksand.” Chapter. In African American Literature in Transition, 1920–1930, edited by Miriam Thaggert and Rachel Farebrother, 258–80. African American Literature in Transition. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 2022.

    [i] “Two Novels” The Crisis, Vol. 35 Issue 6, 1928, p. 22.

    [ii] Quoted in Dusk of Dawn. In “The Field and Function of the Negro College,” a graduation address presented at Fisk in 1933, Du Bois elaborated on his inspirational encounter with German culture and identity at the University of Berlin: “And out and around that university of a thousand miles, millions of people shared in its ideal teaching, and did this in spite of caste of birth and poverty, of jostling wealth, because they believed in an ultimate unity which Bismarckian state socialism promised. They sang their national songs and joined in national festivals with enthusiasm that brought tears to the onlooker. And it made you realized the ideal of a single united nation and what it could express in matchless poetry, daring science, and undying music.” (119)

    [iii] For a more complete version of this argument, see Lisi Schoenbach, “Institutionalism and the Fate of the Public University,” American Literary History, Volume 33, Issue 3, Fall 2021, Pages 674–690, https://doi.org/10.1093/alh/ajab060

    [iv] Quoted in Thadious Davis, Nella Larsen, a Novelist of the Harlem Renaissance: A Woman’s Life. (Baton Rouge: University of Louisiana Press, 1994), 110.

    [v] Like Helga, Larsen did not have the support of her family and understood her alienation in these institutional spaces in part as a result of her “mixed” background (“mixed” not just racially, but economically and socially) and her lack of family connections. However, there is no doubt that what was most “strange,” “queer,” and “indecent” about Larsen was quite simply her gender. Without oversimplifying the many differences between Du Bois and Larsen and their stories, we might still acknowledge the narrower range of possibilities for self-expression and self-determination accorded to a woman within these profoundly normative and prescriptive spaces. Larsen’s treatment of Naxos raises larger questions, however, about the way that any non-normative identity might be punished or threatened within such institutions.

    [vi] Larsen was certainly not the first, last, or only African American author of the twentieth century to critique HBCU’s and other institutions of racial uplift in these terms; Watkins notes Zora Neal Hurston’s satirical essay titled “The Rise of the Begging Joints” and Wallace Thurman’s critique of “colorism and stereotypes about ‘good breeding’”  at HBCU’s in The Blacker the Berry (1929) (Watkins 260). Ralph Ellison’s memorable midcentury treatment of Tuskegee in Invisible Man (1952) shares many of Larsen’s criticisms of universities, social and political movement, and institutions.

    [vii] See Hochman, Barbara. “Filling in Blanks: Nella Larsen’s Application to Library School.” PMLA 133, no. 5 (2018): 1172–90. http://www.jstor.org/stable/45179451.

    [viii] Du Bois’s own understanding of institutions, including educational institutions, would change quite dramatically in subsequent decades, as his thought shifted away from integration and towards black self-determination. For a brilliant discussion of this transition in the context of his advocacy of black owned economic co-ops, see Phulwani, Vijay.“A Splendid Failure? Black Reconstruction and Du Bois’s Tragic Vision of Politics.” A Political Companion to W. E. B. Du Bois, edited by Bromell, Nick. UP of Kentucky, 2018, pp. 271–302.

     

  • Christina Lupton–On Not Hating State Daycare

    Christina Lupton–On Not Hating State Daycare

    This post is part of a dossier of texts “On Not Hating the State” that was initially generated for a panel with a similar title, “On (Not) Hating the State”, and organized by Rebecca Oh, at the 2026 American Comparative Literature Association Conference in Montréal.

    On Not Hating State Daycare

    Christina Lupton

    For a few years now I’ve been thinking about the history of British life-writing as a state sponsored activity, something that happens in connection with the victories workers have won over the years: time to attend adult education classes, and to retire in their sixties; time protected by unions, by labor laws around Sundays, or made by state daycare and maternity leave. The idea of a life in which one has a right, not just to live and to work, but to leave a record of having done so has been one of the things protected by the modern state: this has been the focus of my current project.

    This paper is taken from the part of that project that focuses on feminist-socialist discussions of women’s labor in the years between 1968 and 1975. These were crucial years in England–as well as the rest of the world–for women diagnosing and articulating the terms of their own oppression. In consciousness raising groups, residential conferences, teach-ins, newsletters and journals, women explored ways to talk, to read, and to write about themselves as workers underpaid in the workplace and not paid at all in the home. The Women’s Liberation Movement that emerged in England in 1970 was a network of local groups that fed ideas and reports to a central committee. National events such as the famously successful Women’s Liberation Conference held at Ruskin College in Feb that year, or the storming a few months later of the London stage at the Miss World Contest, were planned through regional meetings, phone-calls, mailing lists and announced in mimeographed papers with limited circulation. At this same early point in the decade, the Wages for Housework movement, concretized in the publications of Selma James, Mariarosa Dalla Costa, and Silvia Federici, was fueling the demand in Europe and Canada and the UK that women’s domestic work be recognized and rewarded through state income.  James was at the helm of that movement in the UK, and her BBC 2 program, “Our Time is Coming Now,” which appeared in 1970, highlighted this aspect of the British Feminist cause.  Not all newcomers the Women’s Liberation Movement endorsed the demand for a state income, or the right of women to reject paid employment.  But most local women’s groups represented in the archives show a strong uptake of the idea that what women did–at home, with their children–should be described and compensated as a form of work.

    As domestic workers, the argument went, women should be able to claim state pensions and welfare payments; they should also be entitled to holidays, and to study leave and to the time given in paid workplaces to union activity. In 1971, this logic helped to fight off, for example, the proposal that UK family allowances be converted to tax credits, which would have made only formally employed parents eligible for them. Dalla Costa’s 1972 words channeled what many women were feeling: “We have worked enough. We have chopped billions of tons of cotton, washed billions of dishes, scrubbed billions of floors, typed billions of words, wired billions of radio sets, washed billions of nappies, by hand and in machines.”[i] “Those who advocate that the liberation of the working-class woman lies in her getting a job outside the home,” wrote James, “are part of the problem, not the solution.”[ii] This line of thinking is echoed in pamphlets and flyers written by women in these regional groups. “It’s time to put an End to Slave Labor” states one flier of a London Group meeting in 1971: “we don’t need more work we need more money. We need the right to work less.”[iii]

    These arguments for a woman’s right to state income ran alongside fights to improve women’s access to and experience of being in the workforce. Examples of those influential on this other front would be Juliet Mitchell, whose “Women: The Longest Revolution” had appeared in the New Left Review in 1966, taking aim at the idea of mothering as a full-time job, and Sheila Rowbotham, whose 1969 manifesto, “Women: the Struggle for Freedom,” expressed the frustration of women “struggling to combine badly paid work with bringing up a family,” and “unable to do work for which we’ve been trained.”[iv] Rather than rehashing here the factions of feminism that have emerged and continued along these lines, I want to zoom in here on childcare as an issue that united those fighting for their right to work less with those of women fighting for equal career opportunities.  In this micro moment of British feminism, the interests of women who wanted and/or relied upon paid work converged on this point with the interests of middle-class mothers wanting time to participate in their own revolution.  In 1970, as now, this made childcare a flashpoint for thinking about what women might need or want from the state:  in 2025 in the US, for instance, the promise of universal childcare was a signature part of Zohran Mamdani’s high profile campaign to become mayor of New York, while the state of New Mexico made headlines for offering its citizens this state service.

    As a literary critic, what I want to underscore about childcare is the way discourse itself, particularly in the form of parents in conversation with each other and with or against the state, becomes its own case in point for the importance of redistributing childcare.  As material activity, it bears the weight of the argument that even women without paid employment have a right to time away from care work.  Childcare is not just an issue for women wanting paid work:  it affects all parents wanting to study, join a campaign, or represent in writing the condition of their own lives.  Childcare, in other words, is intimately connected to the way feminist writing gets done around and about children and their care.  The documents I’ll reference do not just describe this view–they are evidence of the state’s role as childcare provider in supporting or impeding the production of women’s writing.

    In England in 1968, the struggle to increase and improve the provision of childcare was a cause supported by many. Women who’d come of age in the early 1960s, been pioneers in going to university, training for careers, and having pre-marital sex, were confronting by their late 20’s the burden of care-work as a bottleneck in their own path to equality.  A co-written paper, “Childcare and Women’s Liberation,” given at a national feminist conference, complains of the fact that there are only 5 places per 1000 children available in England in 1971.[v]  Measured against European states, Britain lagged far behind in supporting middle-class women to pursue careers.  This deficit was also apparent to those who had experience of spaces where multi-generational living routinely involved the distribution of care work.  Buchi Emecheta, for instance, arrived in England in 1962 expecting to find opportunities for women greater than in her native Nigeria.  There she had worked as a librarian at the American Embassy while her mother-in-law looked after her children.  But Emecheta found London to be a city full of women occupied with their babies:

     … at home in Nigeria, all a mother had to do for a baby was wash and feed him and, if he was fidgety, strap him onto her back and carry on with her work while that baby slept.  But in England she had to wash piles and piles of nappies, wheel the child round for sunshine during the day, attend to his feeds as regularly as if one were serving a monster, talk to the child, even if he was only a day old!  Oh yes, in England, looking after babies was itself a full-time job.[vi]

    While Emecheta found her rights as a woman greater in England, she also found herself dramatically disadvantaged as a mother.

    Yet many of these British women Emecheta observes occupied with their children were themselves frustrated by their isolation and limited opportunities to be in the public sphere.  In “Why I Want Wages for Housework,” a paper written by a full-time typist, “Helen” expresses the desire “get out of the house…not to bash a typewriter for capitalism, but to be part of the struggle to get rid of capitalism altogether.”[vii]  We might think here of the activities and spaces that Nancy Fraser names as the formation of the “feminist subaltern counterpublic”: the “journals, bookstores, publishing companies, film and video distribution networks, lecture series, research centers, academic programs, conferences, conventions, festivals, and local meeting places.”[viii]  Writing of the US, and against the limitation of Jurgen Habermas’s model of the official print public sphere, Fraser is mindful here of feminists engaged more directly with matters of domestic and personal experience than Habermas’s state based model recognizes. Yet for women with children in their care, many of those spaces on Fraser’s list were inaccessible.  Whether they were funded by the state or not mattered less than the question of whether they came with a creche or stipend that would allow mothers to pay for private childcare.

    This need for childcare at feminist meetings and gatherings was met in some ways that can seem to us now to circumvent almost gloriously the need for state involvement.  Gay men’s groups, for instance, were sometimes enlisted by feminist groups as a force who could step in to care for children at women’s conferences.  The conference held at Ruskin college at Oxford in 1970, in which the male partners of Tufnell Park women’s group staffed the creche, is still held up as exemplary. This image of Stuart Hall still circulates today as illustrative of the victory of the women organizing the event in drawing men into care work:

    Creche at First Women’s conference at Ruskin College; Oxford Friday 27th February to Sunday 1st March; 1970. (c) Sally Fraser. 

    The press statement issued by the organizing collective at the time left “no doubt that these facilities have been an important factor in the range of attendance at the workshop.”[ix] Catherine Hall, Stuart’s partner and a key member of that organizing committee, remembers the Ruskin Conference underscoring “the importance of looking after everybody else’s children, sharing childcare.”[x]

    Archives from this time are rich with examples of flyers like these, which show childcare being offered along similar lines, by members of the feminist community:

    Bishopsgate Institute, Working Class Lives Collection, copyright Camden Women’s Group.

    LSE Women’s Library, copyright Brenda Corti.

    The perforated form of these documents makes clear a material relation, between the language that was circulating above the line, in the workshops and meetings, and the being labor done under it. That line is a significant marker of care work as something mediates writing — and activism, gathering, and conversation – without being directly expressed in it. Words here are not written by those doing the childcare: that’s the very point. Discourse is a direct result of care being redistributed and shared amongst other people who do the work of care in order to free others up to speak.

    It is the uptake of care work by people other than mothers that allows for the ‘perforated’ condition under which all women might have the chance to write, talk, print, attend the conference, etc. after their day’s work. For women trying out their own voices, describing their work situation, or simply talking to others about their experiences, the fact of their children being cared for by others was central to the possibility of them correcting the injustices of gender inequality. “We are four women” begins one paper given at the Ruskin conference, “three of us have kids. On three evenings we asked each other questions…we wanted to write a paper.”[xi] Not only does the writing of that paper depend on where and how the children sleep; presenting it at the conference becomes possible because of the children being cared for elsewhere.

    This triangulation–of writing done by and between women because of childcare arrangements that relieve them of their daily work–draws on the logic of the Wages for Housework Movement, which insisted that the unpaid work (of cleaning, feeding, soothing, nursing, education) underwrote all of capitalism’s visible, above-the-lines scenes of productivity. Only men free from having to worry about raising their kids, or reproducing life at home, argued James and Federici and Dalla Costa, could hold jobs that were publicly recognized as productive. By this logic, the distributive logic of the perforation matters to the way we read any scene of production. Whether its words or cars that are being made, unpaid care work underpins that output and activity.

    Communally organized childcare was important in this sense to the first years of the women’s liberation movement. Collectivized childcare could free up women to gather, to write, to protest, to be themselves. In her preface to a 1970 collection by the “Power of Women Collective,” Priscilla Allen celebrates the opening of spaces in which women have “a chance to relate to people on a fully human level, not as doormat, sacrificing angel, or cannibalizing matriarch.”[xii] Federici stresses on a similar note that the Wages for Housework movement succeeded most powerfully in giving women the chance to leave their domestic lives behind and “write songs, make posters, analyze the newspapers day after day, and find…life interesting.”[xiii] All this entailed women (or men) supporting other women in being able to take a break from their too routine domestic work. To quote from the newsletter of the “Tough and Tender Collective”: “If we give kids space and time and opportunity to play/shout/paint/run/cry with their friends, we also have more time to do the same with ours.”[xiv]

    But even when these scenes of the feminist subaltern counterpublic were private, it was ultimately state daycare that many women saw as the enabling condition of their full access to them.  One of the key demands at that Ruskin conference was for 24-hour free daycare.  On this front alone, British feminism was inaugurated as a movement whose premises, texts, and cross-class ambitions were intimately entangled, not only with men or with the collective, but with the state. This shift from women experimenting in community-organized childcare to the demand for 24-hour state daycare happened within months of the Ruskin conference.  The same women (Sally Alexander, Sheila Rowbotham, Catherine Hall) who had organized and advertised the creche staffed by men, pushed back against the demand to reproduce the model in future gatherings. When Catherine Hall sent out notes about the National Conference in London later that year, the organizing committee was suggesting that women’s groups enlist regional childcare support rather than bringing their children to the city.  Marie, writing into the “Mothers in Action Newsletter” describes herself looking for a way not to bring her children:

    I would very much like to go to the Lesbian conference in Nottingham next weekend.  However I have a problem.  Would someone please take care of my kids for the weekend.  They are both boys aged twelve and nine.  You could stay with them at my home and I could provide food. They really just need someone to be with them.[xv]

    The big follow-up to the Ruskin conference, at Skegness in 1971, offered a creche, but was famously hampered by the sheer complexity of organizing family accommodation at what was meant to be a women’s conference.

    While the Ruskin conference succeeded in providing its own childcare, it also underscored the fact if working-class women and mothers were really to be included in the movement, a much more comprehensive system of state childcare would be needed.  Not only were most working-class fathers unlikely to step up in the way the fathers at the Ruskin conference had, working women were already overburdened by their combination of poorly-paid part-time jobs with a second shift of domestic work. The demand for 24-hour state daycare institutions was written into the Working Women’s Charter, which took its final form in 1974. The charter, debated in working groups in 1971-3, makes a connection, grounded in a recognition of working-class women’s experience, between equal pay and opportunity for women, and the provision of free local-authority nurseries “with extended hours to suit working mothers.”

    But it also, as its tenth item, emphasizes the fact that working-class women deserve the opportunity to participate in trade unions and ‘political life.’ The 1973 meetings in which the charter itself was discussed made childcare both case and point. Some women felt it wrong that the meetings about the charter did not have creches. Others felt that women had already done enough and had learned their lesson about organizing that service amongst themselves. One pamphlet defending the organization of the campaign meetings without creches states that “one of the fundamental demands of the charter is to fight against the assumption that women are the child-rearers and to fight for adequate child-care facilities.”[xvi]  The state is presented here as the only proper agent in freeing up time for gathering and co-writing: the ability of working-class and single-women mothers depends on children being a zone of state responsibility and organization.  The minutes of meeting and papers given in those years suggest that women of all classes united around this campaign for state daycare, not just as a way of leveling the professional field, but of allowing mothers to participate–as writers, speakers, activists, and trade union members–on equal grounds in articulating their own position.

    This is a case not just of not hating the state, but of leveraging its power into being as a mediator of a public sphere in which women with children and with jobs might participate. The hopes for new childcare institutions that emerged in these conversations were ambitious. They conjured up centers financed by the state but creatively controlled by parents and staff. They involved men doing their fair share of domestic organization, with the arrangement helping to support a shorter working week for all. Childcare centers were also described in many papers as being good for kids, with the social and creative opportunities they could provide outpacing what was possible in the private home. “Sounds too good to be true?” asks one leaflet from the London Nursery Campaign. “Well, that’s up to us; we won’t take what the state is dishing out to us at the moment.  It’s time we fought for our rights; nobody else will, and if it means we will change the state, well, we’ll change it.”[xvii]

    The axis of change imagined here put women in close negotiation with the state around the care of children in ways we have largely forgotten. But literary critics are well-placed to read and to see how these negotiations played out, in thousands of hours of conversation and dialogue and public speaking, and thousands of pages of talks and newsletters and life narratives that were themselves evidence of the writing that might happen if care work did not fall to the mother alone. In many of these documents, women write and speak in specific reference to the state as allowing them time of work, and as enabling their membership of the public sphere.  We see this very directly in the story of Emecheta, who became by 1970 a conscious advocate of the British welfare state as an institution of care. By that point she had three more children born in England and had experienced in mostly positive terms the National Health Service, maternity leave, local authority daycare for her children, access to free adult education at the University of London, and public housing.  Her two early autobiographical works, In the Ditch (1972) and Second-Class Citizen (1974), are openly underpinned by the recognition of these state services as vital to her life as a writer. In her study of the twentieth-century British Bildungsroman, Janice Ho describes Emecheta’s representation of the welfare state being driven by an unusual narrative causality in which “Adah’s interior sense of her autonomy and agency proceeds from – rather than precedes – the welfare state’s recognition of her as a citizen.”[xviii]  The particularity of this relation really does rest with Emecheta’s interaction as a mother with the state.  Her first taste of freedom to write comes with paid maternity leave from her job at the British Library.  This is followed by the welfare payments and council housing that allow her to leave her marriage, and the Inner London Education Authority Grant that provides her with time to study while her children are in state daycare. Emecheta’s early columns for the socialist paper The New Statesman perform as a reminder that much feminist writing, particularly by working-class women, should be read in this order, as evidence of a state shouldering some of a women’s traditional workload. The very possibility of a single mother and working immigrant writing her way into that largely middle-class British Feminist movement is the direct result in Emecheta’s own terms of her imbrication in the state.

    In the late 1970s and 80s, Emecheta also became the face of the state, by working as a social worker and coordinator in the same North London childcare group that Rowbotham helped to set-up.  This organization offered community-based childcare that women had argued earlier in the decade should be funded and facilitated by state-funded lines of employment:  “Until we extend the responsibility for raising children beyond the mother to the state, we cannot increase the responsibility of women, nor hope to change the means of production,” writes Sally Alexander in her summary of the minutes to one 1970 meeting of the Tufnell Park Women’s Liberation group.[xix] To read that note in its full force, we need to hear both the limited conversation it records, between middle-class white women who’ve dared to leave their children at home with their babysitters or fathers, and the fuller one it anticipates, of which Emecheta is a part, where a more inclusive discourse would emerge if all children were cared for freely and generously by the state.

    Christina Lupton is Professor in the English Department at Rutgers University, and author of several books about the history and experience of reading. Her new project, When Writing Wasn’t Work offers an alternative history of life-writing since the eighteenth-century as a non-professional, working-class practice that has held space open for institutions and experiences distinct from those of labor.

    [i] Mariarosa Dalla Costa in The Power of Women and the Subversion of The Community (Falling Water Press, 1972), 45.

    [ii] Selma James, “Introduction” The Power of Women and the Subversion of The Community, Ed. Selma James and Mariarosa Dalla Costa (Falling Water Press, 1972), 16.

    [iii] LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/2, Folder 6.

    [iv] Sheila Rowbotham, “Women: the Struggle for Freedom” Black Dwarf, January 10, 1969.

    [v] Childcare and Women’s Liberation, issued by the Wandsworth Brach of the Women’s Liberation Group, LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/1, Folder 1.

    [vi] Buchi Emecheta, Second Class Citizen [1974], (Heineman Educational, 1994), 45.

    [vii] LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/1, Folder 5.

    [viii] Nancy Fraser, “Rethinking the Public Sphere: A Contribution to the Critique of Actually Existing Democracy,” Social Text, No. 25/26 (1990), pp. 56-80; 67.

    [ix] Press Statement regarding Ruskin Conference, Feb 1970. LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/1, Folder 1.

    [x] Catherine Hall interviewed by Andrew Whitehead, History Workshop Journal, Volume 96, Autumn 2023, pp. 205–213, 212.  https://doi.org/10.1093/hwj/dbad019

    [xi] “Ruskin College Women’s Weekend:  Reflections on Politics of the Family” LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/1, Folder 1.

    [xii] Priscilla Allen, Preface to Writings Produced by Women in The Power of Women Collective, June 1973. LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/1, Folder 5.

    [xiii] “Interview with Silvia Federici” in Louise Toupin Wages for Housework: A History of an International Feminist Movement, 1972-1977 (UBC Press, 2018, Trans. Kathe Rothe), 241.

    [xiv] Pamphlet produced by the “Tough and Tender Collective” LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/2, Folder 4.

    [xv] In “Women and Deviancy” newsletter, LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/1, Folder 4.

    [xvi] “In Defense of the Working Women’s Charter Campaign – a reply to the paper “Some Fundamental Problems with the WWCC”. Bishopsgate Institute.

    [xvii] Nursery Campaign Newsletter, LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/2, Folder 1.

    [xviii] Janet Ho, Nation and Citizenship in the Twentieth-Century British Novel (Cambridge University Press, 2018), 144.

    [xix] Sally Alexander handwritten notes.  LSE Women’s Archive, Sally Alexander Papers, 75AA/2, Folder 3.

     

  • Bruce Robbins–On Taxes

    Bruce Robbins–On Taxes

    This post is part of a dossier of texts “On Not Hating the State” that was initially generated for a panel with a similar title, “On (Not) Hating the State”, and organized by Rebecca Oh, at the 2026 American Comparative Literature Association Conference in Montréal.

    On Taxes

    Bruce Robbins

    How does the slogan “tax the rich!” sound to you? New York City under its new Mayor Zohran Mamdani is not the only place where that slogan has been resounding lately, though of course it has run into stiff opposition, not all of it on the right—for example, from Gavin Newsom in California. If “tax the rich” sounds to you like a proposition that’s at least worth discussing—I’ll accept variants like “tax the 1%” or “tax the billionaires” or “tax secondary residences worth more than five million dollars”—then we might not have much to talk about, at least politically speaking. I mean, you may hate the state, but if you acknowledge as plausible the imperative to tax the rich in order to achieve a more equal redistribution of society’s goods and resources, you would also be accepting the state as the agent of that redistribution. Redistribution needs an agent. The state is the best agent of redistribution we have, perhaps the only agent. Politically speaking, end of story.[1]

    If we may not have much to talk about, politically speaking, we may still have something to talk about when it comes to how the politics of the state connects with literature. That’s trickier. I took a stab at that question in my book Upward Mobility and the Common Good, where I tried—I don’t know how successfully—to read the emergent sensibility of welfare state institutions into the role of the mentor/mediator slot in the upward mobility story, as the figure who makes the protagonist’s upward mobility possible, a reading that is implausibly formal given the representational way the question about the state’s connection with literature is typically posed.[2] I’m sure other people have better ideas: ideas about how literature helps display not just that our intimacies are shaped by the social flows and structures around us, but that our intimacies are shaped by collective decision-making, however alien to personal experience the decision-making and the decisions appear.

    In spite of general agreement on the need to appeal to the state as a provider of socially necessary services and a potential agent of redistribution, then, and thus also presumably agreement against the defunding and dismantling of the federal bureaucracy, the agents we have, it’s possible that we do still have things to talk about, politically speaking. Because there exists, of course, a lot of anti-bureaucratic feeling among progressive people. And there exists of course the old idea that a radically egalitarian redistribution would require something like a revolution, a revolution to topple all that bureaucratic machinery and overthrow the power of the state. I’m not sure there are many who would still want to pursue this argument, the prospects for revolution in the US being as unpromising as they are; but if so, I think it’s worth saying that for such a revolutionary event to happen, for a revolution to happen that would not fall back into authoritarian coercion, that is, for a successful revolution to happen, that revolution would first have to have won large-scale approval of the program of redistributing society’s goods and services in an egalitarian fashion. It would have had to establish radical redistribution as common sense, just as the graduated income tax very gradually established itself as common sense, and over stiff opposition. In other words, “tax the rich!” would have to have become common sense even among those who remain skeptical that the taxing powers of the state could ever serve as the proper agent of radical redistribution. One reason for staging this discussion at a conference devoted to literary culture is literature’s role in helping to shape a society’s common sense.

    A recent essay by Michael Denning called “Tax Forms” is frankly skeptical that taxes can serve any desirable social purpose.[3] I suspect that the essay speaks to shared hesitations both about taxation and about the state in general. For Denning, it is a mistake to see the state as an agent to rein in the power of capital, even when forced to do so by pressure from below—as in my view it was forced by pressure from below to create and maintain welfare institutions. One key move in this argument is that Denning rejects the differentiation between the economic and the political. For him, the economic and the political are one; taxation by the state is just another means of exploitation, working alongside exploitation by corporations. There is no daylight between corporations and the state. The state is corporations; corporations are the state. (Literature is one agent allowing us to see some daylight between corporations and the state.) But if there is no separation between corporations and the state,  then it is not wrong to hate the state, and the fact that it is the anti-statist right, not the left, that has made tax revolt a crucial part of its program is not an argument against tax revolts. On the contrary, the implication would be—this is just an implication, not something Denning actually says–that the right has been right to organize revolts against taxation, and following its lead might be a winning strategy for the left.

    I don’t much like Denning’s argument, but I suspect that others will look more positively on it than I do, and not just because, as Denning does not need to say, the state has so often used its power shamelessly on behalf of enhancing corporate profit and to diminish the power of workers. If people are ready to assume, with Denning, that it’s a waste of time to try to glimpse any daylight between the interests of the state and the interests of the corporations, one reason might be a strong impulse, in the humanities, to reject distinctions like that between the economic and the political. The proposition presents itself to us more frequently with culture taking the place of politics, so that what’s rejected is a separation between the economic and the cultural. It may look like economics, but it’s turtles of culture all the way down. (On the left, we have to deal with the symmetrical illusion that it’s turtles of economics all the way down.) We who work in the cultural disciplines tend to smile upon the merging of the cultural with the economic, if only because what happens in culture can thereby borrow some of the aura of significance enjoyed by politics. What I’m trying to say, translating back from culture-and-economics to politics-and-economics, is that there is a cost to this refusal of distinction: the cost of losing the state as a potential political agent, an agent that’s not entirely separate from the corporate economy but that’s separate enough from the corporate economy so that, if pushed hard enough, it can be mobilized to rein in and regulate the corporate economy. Unsurprisingly, anti-statism being as entrenched in common sense as it is, the place to look for such a logic, however fragmentary, is among the comeuppances of greedy corporate villains in science fiction.

    To my mind, the state/ corporation issue is of a piece with that of whether a line can be drawn between modernity and whatever came before modernity—the Bruno Latour, “we have never been modern” issue. (I had to take this issue on in writing a book about atrocity, a word that could not exist in its modern meaning until attitudes toward conquest and toward violence against noncombatants had changed radically.[4] One of the most complicated themes we could get to, in terms of hating or not hating the state, would be the meta-history of violence, or violence and modernity, and the place in that history of the state, as Max Weber said, coming to enjoy a monopoly on the legitimate exercise of violence. Can we assume that the state only exercises violence but does not in the slightest degree restrain it?) For some time sentiment has run with Latour, and against the modern/pre-modern line. To the extent that it has, it has also had to downplay the emergence of the modern state as a distinctive and consequential actor on the world stage.

    In postcolonial theory, for example, Robert Young argues that colonialism remains a primary force in the world, so many decades after the success of the national liberation struggles, and the reason is that colonialism imposed on its colonies the form of the modern state, a legacy which is responsible for endless chaos and suffering.[5] The state is the definitive injury that the West has inflicted on the non-West. I think Young is overstating this case, but he’s right that the modern state form is indeed distinctive and consequential. In her new book, Reading Better States: Utopian Method and Environmental Harm in the Global South, Rebecca Oh very rightly insists that despite all the harm for which it is responsible, the intervention of the modern state remains a legitimate addressee of appeals for improvement: “complaint about and desire for the state are two sides of the same coin” (2).[6] Legitimate and, I would add, unprecedented. For better and for worse, and taking our distance from Latour, there is indeed a significant line between modern and pre-modern. And with the state, we are on the modern side of the line.

    Within the discourse of Marxism, which is where Denning locates himself, his argument fits into a recent tendency to give more agency to the state in the history of capitalism—more agency, but agency that is entirely on capitalism’s side. This tendency is associated with the phrase “primary accumulation.” The argument is about the origins of capitalism. It goes, very roughly, like this: in order for capitalism to come into being, with some people forced to sell their labor and others in a position to buy it, the sellers had to be impoverished by being uprooted from the land and the buyers had to be rich. How did this happen? Marx’s answer is that the buyers didn’t get rich by frugality, as Adam Smith had suggested; they enriched themselves by uprooting and impoverishing the others, that is, by means of violence, conquest, coercion. Once capitalism is functioning smoothly, this originary violence can be forgotten; now the rich get richer merely by paying their workers less than the value of their labor. That is, by exploitation, not by expropriation. Marx puts the discussion of primal accumulation at the very end of the first volume of Capital in order, it seems, to suggest that violence was a one-time moment, and that after this, capitalism would work mainly by peaceful exploitation, not by violent expropriation. The recent tendency in and around Marxist theory has gone in the opposite direction. Influenced by historians of colonialism and of slavery, thinkers have tended to see violent expropriation not merely as a founding moment that is then superseded–—no Manchester without Mississippi– but as a permanent factor in capitalism’s functioning. As Sandro Mezzadra puts it, “whatever happened for the first time at the origin of capitalism must logically repeat itself every day: this apparent paradox prevents us from seeing the historical time of the capitalist mode of production as merely linear and progressive” (104).[7] Those who are convinced that history cannot be “merely linear and progressive” will be drawn to this argument. Those who get stuck on the “merely,” less so. In any case, if you consider yourself progressive, you might want to reconsider: there is no doubt that history is not merely linear, but there is also no doubt that in some sense history is linear and indeed irreversible. Since the state is a and perhaps the primary dispenser of coercion and violence, the shift from primal, one-time accumulation to permanent accumulation gives the state a bigger role not just in capitalism’s history, but in its ongoing functioning. In this way lots of agency is attributed to the state, but it’s unambiguous bad-guy agency. It’s not the sort of relatively autonomous agency that would encourage strategies of redistributive taxation, or Wisconsin-style sewer socialism, as progressive goals.

    In spite of my anxiety that all this may be too inside-baseball, I go on to one more facet of Denning’s argument in “Tax Forms.” Why doesn’t Denning see much promise in the precedent of the graduated income tax? For one thing, he says, because most Americans never fill out form 1040. “For three-quarters of US workers, the payroll tax—a pure wage tax—is the major tax, not the federal income tax. Thus, the famous 1040 form is not your tax form: or rather this document is part of what Marx called ‘the religion of everyday life,’” that is, one of “a host of fetishisms and mystifications.” There is no doubt that, as Denning goes on to say, the tax system brings into being the political identity of the taxpayer, and the political identity of the taxpayer does lend itself to possible mystifications. There is a dangerous illusion of equality in the idea that we all have our wages taxed given how much more income goes untaxed because it doesn’t come from wages but from investments, from wealth.

    Still, when Denning inveighs against the payroll tax as “the major tax” on the majority of American workers, he is not saying something that in the context of hating or not hating the state very much needs saying. Money from the payroll tax goes directly into the funding of Social Security and Medicare, that is, into provision for old age and ill health for people whose old age and ill health are not otherwise provided for. I would not claim that Social Security and Medicare are fragments or foretastes of socialist utopia. But I’m simple-minded enough to deduce, from right-wing opposition to Social Security when FDR signed it into law in 1935 and onward to the present, and from the dismantling of so much of the federal bureaucracy that we have seen under the present administration, that the state has been doing things that the corporations have never wanted done. There are more things we can get it to do. The state is in crisis. We shouldn’t let the crisis go to waste.

    There are many who feel, in Stefan Collini’s words, that taxation is a kind of “protection racket: pay up, and we’ll look after you.”[8] The assumption is “that the money is emphatically mine, and I’m prepared to let the government ‘take’ a portion only if in return it provides security and other services from which I benefit. But the basis of our existing tax system can’t be as simple as that even if, for the moment, for the moment, we leave aside the question of how the money came to be ‘mine’ in the first place’” (15). “Taxation is sometimes scanted,” Collini goes on, “as a superficial form of social-democratic tinkering that leaves the underlying structure of economic power untouched” (18). But if a focus on taxation can help raise “the question of how the money came to be ‘mine’ in the first place,” we will be doing more than tinkering. Consider this an invitation to join the hunt for examples.

    Bruce Robbins is Old Dominion Foundation Professor in the Humanities at Columbia University. He has authored several books, among them Criticism and Politics: A Polemical Introduction (Stanford, 2022). He is a long-time member of the b2 and b2o editorial boards. 

    [1] On the confused and confusing politics of taxation in the US, see Andrea Louise Campbell, Taxation and Resentment: Race, Party, and Class in American Tax Attitudes. Princeton: Princeton University Press, 2025.

    [2] Bruce Robbins, Upward Mobility and the Common Good: Toward a Literary History of the Welfare State. Princeton: Princeton University Press, 2007.

    [3] Michael Denning, “Tax-Forms,” in The Future of Totality: Fredric Jameson and the Prospects of Critical Theory.

    Ed. Nicholas Brown, Maria Elisa Cevasco, Fabio Akcelrud Durão, and Robert T. Tally Jr. Durham: Duke University Press, 2026.

    [4] Bruce Robbins, Atrocity: A Literary History. Stanford: Stanford University Press, 2025.

    [5] Robert J.C. Young, Postcolonialism: An Historical Introduction. Oxford: Blackwell, 2001

    [6] Rebecca Oh, Reading Better States: Utopian Method and Environmental Harm in the Global South. NY: Fordham University Press, 2026.

    [7] Sandro Mezzadra, In the Marxian Workshops: Producing Subjectivity. Trans Yari Lanci. Rowman and Littlefield, London. 2018.

    [8] Stefan Collini, “Where To Draw the Line,” The London Review of Books, 19 October 2023, 15-18.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

  • Arne De Boever–The Author as Listener: On the Politics of Ben Lerner’s Transcription

    Arne De Boever–The Author as Listener: On the Politics of Ben Lerner’s Transcription

    Image: Nam June Paik, Zen for Film. 

    This post is part of a dossier that features materials that were generated at, or in the aftermath of, the “Experiments in Listening” conference that boundary 2 co-organized with the California Institute of the Arts and the University of Southern California in January 2025.

    The Author as Listener: On the Politics of Ben Lerner’s Transcription

    Arne De Boever

     

    We have two ears and one mouth so that we can listen twice as much as we speak.

    –Epictetus

    The crisis of democracy is first and foremost a crisis of listening.

    –Byung-Chul Han

     

    Last Words

    Ben Lerner’s novel Transcription constitutes itself almost entirely across two extended scenes of listening that make up the first and third parts of the book: “Hotel Providence” and “Hotel Arbez”. In the first, a young father travels to Providence to interview his former mentor Thomas, a genre-dissolving and genre-founding (32) filmmaker who, advanced in age, is making plans to die with dignity in Switzerland. As several reviewers of the novel have noted, Transcription invites us to pick up on the connections between the character of Thomas (whose talk fills up most of the novel’s first part) and (among others) the German writer and filmmaker Alexander Kluge (mentioned in the novel [25]—Thomas has his books lying around, unread, on his couch and floor), who died around the publication of Lerner’s novel at age 94, and is sometimes compared to Jean-Luc Godard, the French nouvelle vague filmmaker who died by assisted suicide in Switzerland at age 91.

    The second scene—the third part of the novel—consists of an interview (or perhaps just a conversation; although it is more like an extended monologue) with Max, Thomas’ son, after Thomas has passed away. The reader gathers that the listener—the one who is spoken to–is the same as in the novel’s first part. Max and this listener turn out to have been college friends at Brown University, where Thomas used to teach. Both Max and his interlocutor have young children, girls, who are going through a rough patch: Max’ daughter Emmie is having trouble eating (Thomas, to Max’ irritation, refers to her—referencing Kafka–as a “Hungerkünstler” [47; 50], a “hunger artist”), and his interlocutor’s daughter Eva “is flirting with what the school counselor called ‘school refusal’” (15). Their lives (or at least what we know of them through the novel[1]) appear to be so much alike that you may be forgiven for reading them as interchangeable. Transcription in fact suggests that Thomas, most likely as part of cognitive decline, confuses his former student with his son, unsettling both the student (did he forget that twenty years ago, he was in Switzerland with Thomas to work on a film project? Is Thomas right to accuse him of “tell[ing] this untruth” when he says he’s never been to Switzerland? [48]) but especially the son (“It was as though someone had placed an ice pack against the back of my neck” [129]–did his father somehow forget that they were in Switzerland together?). “I felt”, the son confesses to his friend, “perhaps as intensely as ever—the unheimlich. Maybe the real son would just come downstairs, maybe you were the real son, maybe I was the clone or robot or doppelgänger” (122).

    The portrait that emerges of Thomas as a father (and husband) is not flattering: he seems incapable of establishing a personal relation with his son (and perhaps also his wife? she committed suicide when Max was eight), instead always fleeing from the dilemmas of parenting and grand-parenting (and perhaps marriage?) into “some weird allegory, some kind of prose poetry, or an impossible string of references (many of which were probably fictional)”(94)—witness the characterization of his grandchild as a “Hungerkünstler”, some figure from a story by Kafka. At the same time, there are aspects of Thomas’ relationship to his grandchild that are also quite endearing (we hear about him reading a story to her over the phone, and interrupting the reading to play some music by Debussy that fits the tale, 93-94)—and Max acknowledges this (93). The impersonal relationship between father and son—at some point, Max started consistently calling his father Thomas—is driven to a head when Thomas ends up in hospital during Covid, and seems likely to die. Only then, with a nurse holding her iPhone to his father’s ear—listening is once again extremely prominent in these pages–, does Max “as a disembodied voice” (111) allow himself to tell his father about love and forgiveness. Against all expectations, Thomas pulls through—Max receives a call that he is “stable” and that “[h]is vitals are good” (114)–, but Max can’t be sure that his father heard what Max told him over the phone. Somehow incapable of directly asking him, he finds himself “listening for traces” (118) when he goes to see his father after the ordeal, looking for signs that the message actually arrived.

    In between these two scenes of listening, and holding them together like a hinge, is the shorter part of the novel, “Hotel Villa Real”. Set in Madrid (familiar to readers of Lerner’s Leaving the Atocha Station) after Thomas’ passing, it takes place on the evening of a symposium in Thomas’ honor where Transcription’s narrator spoke publicly about how his interview with Thomas—and Thomas’ last, it turns out—came about. Although this talk itself is elided in the novel, the reader gathers that it must have presented some version of what we were told in “Hotel Providence”: the story of how the interviewer travelled to Providence to speak with Thomas on the record; of how he dropped his phone—the recording device he was planning to use—in the partially blocked hotel sink, ruining it; and of how he then proceeded to hold the interview anyway, pretending to record it (the extent to which Thomas was aware of this fact seems unclear in the novel, 59). Somehow, our interviewer was incapable of telling Thomas that he’d ruined his phone. What was published, then—Thomas’ last words—could not possibly have been a transcript of an actual conversation, since there was no recording. They could only have been our interviewer’s reconstruction (and reconstruction from memory, since he did not take notes—he was recording, remember?) of what was said. Our interviewer does not find this problematic, given that all published interviews are heavily edited and do not sound like a transcript of their recording (70); but Rosa, the curator who has organized the event at which he spoke, and (according to Rosa) also Thomas’ son Max who attended the event, appear to be “shocked” (72) by this “confession” (74) and by the fact that what they took to be Thomas’ last words are actually not his last words but someone else’s.

    “I’m fine”, the narrator hears himself say in response to these accusations, but Rosa didn’t ask him; it seems he is just trying to reassure himself in the face of his growing feelings of authorial guilt.[2] Thomas, though, Rosa acknowledges, would have loved the situation—“would have loved it. Loved the idea that his last published statement was ‘unstable’” (72).

    Listening Is Writing

    Based on the novel’s title alone, and then further on the fact that its two major parts consist of interviews (of scenes in which someone is being talked to), it seems fair to characterize Transcription as a novel about listening. This is perhaps especially so given that the middle part accuses the interviewer of having concealed the fact that what he published as the record of an act of listening was in fact a document of writing—in other words, that the middle part of the novel seems to clearly privilege listening over writing.

    Certainly, the novel sets itself up to be read in this way. In the novel’s first six pages, leading up to the narrator dropping his phone in the sink, we move from (on the train) “I put in my earbuds and began to listen to a talk, recorded in Paris in 1973” (4) to (arriving in Providence) “I still had my earbuds in and I was listening to walking directions” (5), and (checking into the hotel room) “I … turned on the TV and opened the blinds and half listened to the news” (6), to (talking to his daughter Eva on the phone) “‘Yeah,” she said, maybe listening” (8). In addition, the novel notes in these opening pages that “I could hear what sounded like live piano music, but saw no piano” (6); when the narrator needs to call Thomas, he asks himself: “Why was I more nervous about briefly encountering his disembodied voice than spending hours with his embodied one? ‘You should write that down’, Eva said in my head” (7). Such references to listening continue throughout the novel. Everything in the novel appears to be about listening, then, a listening that is not so much made impossible by the destruction of the phone on page 9 but emphatically solicited at this point—as a listening beyond technological recording.

    If this is going to be a novel about listening, well, now that we’ve gotten the phone out of the way, the game is really on… Let’s listen. (By contrast, when Max in the third part of the novel actually records his father, he “was only half listening—I’d let my device do the listening”, 124-125).

    Recalling Lerner’s navigation of his work between poetry and the novel elsewhere, one might suggest that if the novel is typically thought to offer prose to be read, with poetry giving us song to be listened to, here a novel announces itself perhaps not quite as a song but as prose to be listened to—as something more poetic than a novel.

    The move that Lerner makes at that precise moment in Transcription is interesting, and marked (for good measure) by two white lines—and three stars. I quote from page 9:

    I somehow knocked the phone into the water.

    ***

    For the duration of this sentence, it was submerged. [my emphasis]

    The message couldn’t be any clearer: if this is going to be a novel about listening, Transcription is telling us, it is not the kind that is going to pitch “writing” against “listening”, as Rosa—who is not a writer herself–in the middle part of the novel seems to do, thus guilt-tripping our interviewer/ narrator. Instead, the moment when the phone is knocked into the water is also the moment when “writing” (“For the duration of this sentence”) explicitly appears on the page, as if to help out. You can find moves like this all over Lerner’s oeuvre; you wouldn’t be wrong to characterize them as one of his signature gestures. Another one arrives on page 26, for example, when Thomas offers the narrator coffee (which he does not want or need), and he takes “a fictional sip” (my emphasis). That could mean he’s pretending to sip the coffee, of course; at the same time, however, the coffee is indeed entirely fictional—it is written coffee, a pipe that is not a pipe, as a Belgian surrealist artist already playfully told us long ago. Later, on page 38, when Thomas asks about his daughter, our interviewer responds: “I call her Eva in this book” (my emphasis). Transcription emphatically does not pitch writing against listening, then, but seems to advocate for a close connection of the two. How to write as a listener? Are we perhaps, as listeners, “always already” writing? (I will return to this Derridean locution, “always already”, and the process of deconstruction that it marks, below.)

    If all of the previous references to listening were fairly casual (but rich in variation—we are listening, half listening, maybe listening, listening to a voice in our head, et cetera), once Thomas enters into the conversation things frequently get technical. For a filmmaker, i.e. someone who is primarily working in a visual medium, he turns out to be quite obsessed by sounds and voices. As a way to get WWII out of the way in the conversation, he wants to start with his “sound memory” (but what memory is ever “sound”?) of hearing “Hitler’s voice” (36) on the radio in 1934; he recalls it as “rising and rising in pitch”, as if it were “eternally ascending”, impossibly so—like a “Shepard tone”, as Thomas correctly explains (37). From the get-go, and here some may find support for our interviewer’s argument that there is nothing wrong with him having reconstructed his conversation with Thomas from memory, Thomas insists that the interview is not going to be about being “literal”: “We practice literature, not law” (37), as he puts it. (It’s worth noting on this count that Thomas’ son, Max, practices law and that he is thus taking some distance from his son, and situating himself more closely to his doppelgänger, our interviewer/ narrator.) “We begin with the voices” (38), Thomas insists—the voices that are there in the ether, in the air. Some of these, we hear; but Thomas is even more interested in the ones we can’t hear—“there is always music playing that we cannot hear” (39). “Do we have ears to hear?” he asks. “[S]ometimes we listen without them. … There is listening beyond the cochlear, yes?” (39)

    One assumes that the interview has already started at this point—the narrator is pretending to be recording—but as far as Thomas is concerned they are still recording onto the “long stretch of black leader” (40), the starting part of a recording tape that doesn’t record. “We remain in the black leader part of the interview” (40), he insists, until they’ve come up with the first question—something that suits the narrator, who would in fact prefer this initial evening conversation to be “the leader” (44) with the real interview following the next day, after he’s gotten himself a new phone. But much that is important to Transcription is already being shared in this part of the interview (it includes, for example the first version of the confusing conversation about “Switzerland”, 43)–and of course all of it appears, mysteriously transcribed, in Lerner’s novel. How can we have a record of what could not have been recorded on this long stretch of black leader? How could this miracle have been brought about?[3]

    There are only two conclusions we can draw, within the limits of the fiction at least: either the narrator was bullshitting about dropping his phone in the sink, and the interview took place as planned, was recorded and then dutifully transcribed (and this is why we have the first part of Transcription); or he did indeed drop the phone in the sink, and everything we are reading is transcription from memory, and perhaps thereby approaching “fiction”—which is, let us not forget, the overall form or category in which the interview is presented to us here (as part of “a novel”). But in that case the questions come quickly: does an interview become “fiction” simply because it was not technologically captured, and transcribed from memory? But if such an interview is similar, as the narrator argues, to actually published interviews which are always heavily edited, why do interviews that were technologically captured but heavily edited not enter into the realm of fiction? What, exactly, does or does not constitute the fictional in these cases? And where, exactly, do we locate what we might call “authorship” in them? (An author is considered to have been at work in the first case; but in the second, we talk about editing rather than authoring. As an author who also works as an editor, I admit to having been occasionally confused on this count myself, in particular with texts that need a lot of work. Am I editing them? Am I writing? Editorial mediation vanishes; writerly mediation is marked.)

    Once the “interview” is over, the narrator wonders “what I’d do if he [Thomas] asked to see a transcript” (54). Transcription then offers, as a closing reflection and further turn of the screw, the account of our narrator’s breakdown in college, when he suffered from “auditory hallucinations” (56): surely not the most reassuring thing to find out about someone who has just conducted an interview without recording or note-taking. The narrator tells us that Thomas helped him with these hallucinations. But how so? As one may suspect from someone interested in voices audible and inaudible floating in the ether, Thomas helped not by trying to get rid of the hallucinations but by engaging the narrator in an auditory experiment designed to prove that everyone has auditory hallucinations, that all listening is, effectively, a kind of writing—that there is no objective listening or that there is no outside-writing, no outside-the text. Like a psychoanalyst, who does not aim to cure you out of your weirdness but instead starts from the assumption that everyone is weird and that some—their patients—just find that fact harder to handle than others, Thomas starts from the baseline that everyone hallucinates when they listen (and that some just find that fact harder to handle than others). “You see”, Thomas says after having had the narrator hear voices in “a MIDI file” (56) in which they have effectively become inaudible to the human ear, “we all hear phantom voices. It is a question of the right conditions. Or the wrong ones. Unconscious inference, our brain guessing, making us hear what it thinks is likely there. We hear as if. We are together, erring” (57). This is, clearly, the Thomas who loves being “unstable”; it is also the Thomas who keeps insisting in the novel on the social aspect of things, which is tied for him to politics (doing things together). Hearing voices, the narrator is not having a pathological breakdown; he is, rather, tapping into the ether, as we all do. The laughing he hears “in the rustling of dried leaves” (55) (likely another one of the novel’s references to Kafka [68, 95]—in this case to “The Cares of a Family Man” in which the laughter of a creature called Odradek sounds like the “rustling of fallen leaves” [Kafka 428]) is there, as far as Thomas is concerned. Nothing to worry about—you are fine. I don’t know if this is good mentoring, but the narrator does note that he was “helped” by it: helped by the demonstration of the fact that all listening is writing.

    Mosaic Authorship, Stone Tablets, and Impeded Speech

    It is hard to avoid—and Transcription invites—the associations between a novel that revolves around listening and the sacred, religious (and, if we want to cast the net a bit more widely, spiritual) texts that reveal themselves to be the records of acts of listening, that come about in response to dictation, in which the interviewer/ writer is effectively no more than a medium, but a medium that does not mediate, that merely relays to us, without intervention, the divine word of the one interviewed or listened to, the one doing the dictating (the dictator, if you will… more on the politics of all this later).

    How does Transcription operate within these associations? Consider, for example, the first five books of the Bible—the so-called Pentateuch—which were, or so it is believed, dictated by God to Moses. Moses supposedly merely transcribed what God told him, but of course—and especially because this transcription takes place long before the invention of recording devices such as the iPhone—this opens up the entire, and much discussed, question of Mosaic authorship, and the extent to which Moses may have intervened in the words that were passed down to him from God. With Moses and God, we’re not even in the black leader portion of the tape; we’re in a blackness way before that. Transcription presents to us a kind of Mosaic authorship, activating the uncertain borderline between listening and writing not so much with respect to God, but with respect to his stand-in in the novel: the mentor and flawed father (wasn’t God a flawed father as well? Which all-powerful being allows his son to die on the cross?) who survives Covid against all odds—the great artist Thomas.

    The association between our interviewer/ narrator and Moses was, for me, immediately evoked by Transcription’s cover, which features what appears to be a stone tablet in the shape of an iPhone. The stone tablets are another famous instance (within the Pentateuch, as a mise-en-abîme) of Moses transcribing God’s dictates—God’s “Ten Commandments”, his “law”. Thomas, of course, does not want to be God, and situates himself on the side of literature rather than law, a position that is perhaps suggested in the Bible itself given that Moses, angered by his people’s worshipping of the golden calf, smashes the first version of the tablets to pieces (and the second version of the law that the Bible offers is not identical to the first, even if God states that “I will write upon the tables the words that were on the first tables, which you broke” [Ex. 34:1]!). Perhaps the entire problem is captured by the fact that Moses, when God initially selects him as his spokesman, argues that the role should go to his brother Aaron instead because he is a bad speaker—“slow of speech and tongue” (Ex. 4:10) and “of uncircumcised lips” (Ex. 6:12), perhaps an indication of a speech impediment, like a stutter or a cleft palate. (The equivalent of this speech impediment in Transcription would be the interviewer/ narrator’s auditory hallucinations. All of us are impeded in our speech, none of our speech is clear. Not even mine, in this text.) Moses is not who you want to choose as your communicator—unless, of course, that is the entire point: that there is something unstable in the divine law, an instability that is to be embraced. Law is always delivered as impeded speech, and thus it begins to approximate literature. It is Thomas who talks about his granddaughter, Emmie, “bowed over her so-called tablet … as if in prayer” (47). Transcription in this context tells us, with respect to the sacred text, that while it may present itself as the record of an act of listening, it is always already a document of writing, with Moses not so much as the vanishing medium but very much as the mediator—it’s a novel that foregrounds mediation (“For the duration of this sentence”, “a fictional sip”, “I call her Eva in this book”, et cetera). Could it be that the Bible does so as well? What may be the consequences of such an insight? From such a point of view, it seems the stone tablet becomes, as Thomas puts it in a discussion about “icon painting”, “a secular detail” (46) rather than a sacred dictate—although “secular detail” is not quite the right name for what Transcription is either. For that, we will have to dig more into the fictioning that the novel does.

    The bigger point here then becomes that the word of God, or, in the case of Transcription, the word of Thomas, can never be accessed as such, because all acts of listening are already acts of writing—we cannot listen objectively, there is no listening-outside of writing (as I put it before, evoking Derrida: Transcription’s narrator does so himself when he points out, considering whether the wine he drinks at Thomas’ house is medicine or poison, that there is “a third option”, and that it might be both [34]—this was, of course, exactly Derrida’s point about the pharmakon in his reading of Plato [who is referenced in Transcription two pages later, 36]; more broadly, however, Transcription’s point about listening-as-writing is Derrida’s argument about speech and writing in his Grammatology).[4] From such a perspective, Rosa’s objections to our interviewer/ narrator reconstructing his interview with Thomas from memory—her guilt-tripping him over his authorship—appear naïve, more precisely they appear to be naively invested in the idea, the phantasy, that one could ever really access the word of God/ Thomas. Listening, Transcription argues, never works in this way: it is always already writing. Rosa seems to criticize our interviewer/ narrator’s authorship in favor of some kind of direct access to Thomas’ speech, but really what she is trying to access in this way is just some bigger Author, whose words also could never be directly taken in (because to listen is always already to mediate). Transcription is a meticulously construed criticism of this kind of attitude, which Lerner already discussed in Hatred of Poetry (people hate poetry, he argued there, because it can never realize the virtual, ideal, Platonic Poetry that they want; and so the metaphysians are always left disappointed…). Rosa suffers from a metaphysical affliction, a wanting to get beyond writing to access Thomas/ God directly, immediately. But there is no outside of mediation, Transcription tells us: even a transcription is a form of scription, after all. The mediator never truly vanishes. Instead, it’s authors everywhere.[5]

    Political Fiction

    This is not to say that Transcription is not rethinking the author and authorship, as no doubt we should in a time when “authoritarianism” has become the political keyword of the present.[6] For while Transcription argues that there is no listening that is not always already writing, it also emphatically makes the reverse point: that writing really is a form of listening. The writer, in Transcription, is emphatically a listener, and most of Transcription’s record is really the record of an act of listening. The novel does not make this point naively, by indulging in the phantasy that there could be a listening without writing; but it makes it nevertheless, in response to an understanding of writing as law-making, dictating, commanding—in short, against an authoritarian understanding of the practice. It seems abundantly clear that Transcription’s narrator wants to present himself as a listener, a listener who is then—due to the ruination of his iPhone—solicited into a listening beyond technological recording, a situation in which (“For the duration of this sentence”), writing will come to his aid to help him deliver a reconstruction from memory (a record) of a conversation, of Thomas’/ God’s speech. On the one hand, this marks an investment in writing; but it’s an investment in a writing that operates in the service of listening, with the author being recast as a “transcriber”, as perhaps more of a poet in relation to a song than as a novelist in relation to prose. Transcription appears to be an activity that takes place somewhere in between the prose of the novel and the song of poetry, a writing-as-listening and listening-as-writing that, as an emphatically social activity, always taking place in the realm of the more-than-one, is arguably also sharply political in a time of the increasingly loud dictates of authoritarianism. Under such contemporary conditions, authorship should be rethought—and Transcription is a novel that takes on this task.[7] As such, and perhaps in spite of appearances, this slim fiction is intensely political, as all of Lerner’s other work.

    This becomes perhaps most clear with respect to the notion of fiction that the novel articulates, and that—in the time of fake news and bitterly fought contestations about historical facts—is embedded in these political concerns.[8] Indeed, the transcriber is, perhaps contrary to the naïve understanding of the word, a kind of fictioner. But in what sense?

    The key passage for this is likely the narrator’s account of his visit with Anisa–the best friend of his college girlfriend, and to whom he becomes unexpectedly close after he and his girlfriend break up–to the Natural History Museum on the Harvard campus. The museum has a “dimly lit gallery dedicated to the [glass] flowers”, “botanical models made by glass artists—a father and son—from Dresden a century ago” (20). Transcription ends with multiple references to these flowers, including in an epigraph following the narrative’s end, so the novel makes it clear that this is an important passage. There is, of course, the reference to the father-son relationship that is worth noting; in addition, we are dealing here with something very fragile, a fact that is perhaps further underlined by the artists being from Dresden, a city heavily bombed by the allied forces during WWII (overall, this scene evokes the work of W.G. Sebald [perhaps in particular his work On the Natural History of Destruction] who is, in addition to Kluge, a reference in Transcription; Sebald is one of those authors who, as a novelist, rethought writing as listening, offering fiction as a record of acts of listening that are often multiple and embedded within each other—see, for example, Sebald’s prose work Austerlitz, which presents itself as extended record of an act of listening). Finally, however, and most importantly, the narrator’s experience of seeing the flowers leads into a reflection on fiction:

    I kept seeing the flowers as organic one instant and as artificial the next, a kind of duck-rabbit effect, not between things the object might represent, but between nature and culture, the given and the constructed. And I carried this new way of looking, or this new hinge in my looking, outside the museum: when my sister dragged me camping, for instance, I was typically unmoved by “unspoiled” mountain views; after the glass flowers, I would see cracks in the rock face as penciled, as a history of small decisions, and then experience the view as beautiful. I could will myself to see the rose and pink of a sunset as applied in touches or stains and then revert to seeing it as natural; and so on. It was with Anisa that I first became conscious of this quiet but crucial technique, somewhere between a child’s game, a CBT exercise, and a religion. Eventually, I’d call this “fiction”. (21)

    In between organic and artificial, duck and rabbit, nature and culture, the given and the constructed—let’s add: student and son, medicine and poison, and, of course listening and writing. This is where we are with the fragile, glass flowers, so delicate that around them, visitors are asked “to keep our voices low” (20); this is where we are with Transcription as well, in between the given and the constructed. The interview is supposed to give us the given, but Transcription delivers the message that all interviews are constructed; in fact, all listening constructs, it writes.

    Still, writing as a construction does not stand on the other side of the given—“fiction” has something to do with seeing the constructed in the given, and drawing out the given in the constructed. In that sense, it is not law, dictation, or commandment (which are all construction). It listens as it writes (it draws out the given, but the given can never be given). The suggestion appears to be that it is this kind of listening that prevents writing from becoming a lie, such as the lies that Anisa tells the narrator about the life of his ex-girlfriend in New York (50 and further). What we get in the novel, rather, is a plea for the transformative, reality-adjacent practice of fictioning through a writing-practice that is listening-based and transcribes the world between the given and the constructed.[9]

    In that sense, Transcription is, like the Hotel Arbez with which it ends, “a complex space. Non-euclidean” (128). As Max eventually explains to the interviewer/ narrator, who must have been there even if he appears to have some difficulty remembering it, the Hotel Arbez is:

                The one that’s famous because different parts of the hotel are on different sides of the border. The lower half of the stairs are in France, but, beginning on the seventh step—

                You’re in Switzerland. Right. Jesus.

                And during the German occupation, the Nazi soldiers could enter the French side of the hotel, but not ascend to the upper rooms, where Max Arbez helped shelter Jews and members of the Resistance. A kind of impossible staircase. Remember we went up, ascended to Switzerland? (128)

    Transcription’s fictioning is in between things, the way in which the Hotel Arbez is in between Switzerland and France—and it’s that in-betweenness that enables Max Arbez, one of the Max’s after which Thomas’ son is named (the others are Horkheimer “and my mother’s favorite uncle”; but one may want to throw in here Sebald as well, who preferred to go by Max) to shelter Jews from the Nazis. The return of the phrase “impossible staircase” is interesting as well, because Thomas had used it in part one of the novel to refer to how, in his “sound memory” of Hitler’s speech, his voice appeared to be “eternally ascending, an impossible staircase” (37). “This is a wondrous but terrible fact of our wiring,” Thomas commented then, “how clockwise movement across the pitch class creates this impression” (37). Terrible in the case of Hitler; wondrous in the case of the Hotel Arbez; here too, “it is a question of the right conditions. Or the wrong ones” (57). A fact of our wiring, to be sure—something that “our brains will allow” (37). But also an effect of our writing, our fictioning, our transcription.

    This is, perhaps, the closest indication we get of how Transcription, the kind of literature it practices, can save—but not in the way that the sacred text saves. Transcription saves not as a Holy Writ that delivers dictates; it does not save as authoritarianism. Instead, it saves as a writing-listening and listening-writing that exposes the phantasy of all such law-like commandments. The fact that it always inevitably writes does not mean that it lies. Rather, as a construction, Transcription fictions: it highlights the mediator not simply to expose the constructed in the given, but to offer a version of the constructed that can deliver the given, like a glass flower. Delicate and fragile, it asks you to keep your voice low as you approach, so you can listen–which is also to say write–all the better.

    Arne De Boever teaches American Studies in the School of Critical Studies at the California Institute of the Arts, where he directed the MA Aesthetics and Politics program for over a decade. He is the author of numerous articles, reviews, and translations, as well as seven books on contemporary comparative fiction and political and aesthetic philosophy. His most recent books are Against Aesthetic Exceptionalism (University of Minnesota Press, 2019), François Jullien’s Unexceptional Thought (Rowman & Littlefield, 2020), Being Vulnerable (McGill-Queen’s University Press, 2023), and Post-Exceptionalism: Art after Political Theology (Edinburgh University Press, 2025). His books Silent Music (co-written with the composer Michael Pisaro-Liu) and Secular Detectives and are forthcoming with Bloomsbury and the University of Nebraska Press respectively.

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    —. On the Natural History of Destruction. Trans. Anthea Bell. New York: Random House, 2003.

    Stiegler, Bernard. For a New Critique of Political Economy. Trans. Daniel Ross. Cambridge: Polity, 2010.  

    [1] My impression is that Lerner very carefully sets up this situation as an effect of repeated structural elements in both part one and part three of Transcription; and then also by leaving certain elements within that structure empty, by playing with the fact that fiction does not have to fill in every detail. I appreciated this set-up even more after reading J.M. Coetzee and Mariana Dimópulos’s reflections on this aspect of fiction in the context of their discussion on translation in Speaking in Tongues.

    [2] It is probably significant that this guilt about authorship arrives in Madrid, where, in Leaving the Atocha Station, “Adam”—a stand-in for Lerner—“arrives” as an experimental writer. It is, in Lerner’s fiction, the “adamic” birthplace of Lerner’s fictional self as a writer; it is, now, also the place where his authorship is drawn into question.

    [3] I am reminded of Nam June Paik’s Zen for Film, which was made some time between 1962 and 1964. For this project, Paik ran transparent empty film leader through a projector, allowing it to collect traces, scratches, dust as the film was played. As Hannah Hölling in her work on the film has pointed out, Zen for Film cannot be seen in the same condition twice, as it is forever and irreparably changing each time it is projected. The film, it is worth noting, was inspired by John Cage’s 4’33’’ composition (four minutes and thirty-three seconds of silence), which was in turn inspired by Robert Rauschenberg’s “White Painting [three panel]”. The link to Cage highlights the connections between Paik’s film—a work of visual art—and the practice of listening to which 4’33’’ drew attention. Like Transcription, all of these works highlight that we see and listen more attentively when we are working “in the leader”, in other words, in a certain kind of silence. I want to thank my student Lukas Mackinney for bringing Paik’s project to my attention in this context.

    [4] The other reference that seems relevant here is to Derrida’s student, the philosopher Bernard Stiegler, and his work on what he calls (after Edmund Husserl) “tertiary retentions”, i.e. technologies—like writing or the iPhone—through which speech is recorded. One of Stiegler’s points is that such tertiary retentions do not simply post-date speech but in fact precede it: as children, we start speaking in worlds that are always already recording; in fact, children record before they start speaking. Transcription’s variant of this is that there is no listening without writing, that writing always already pre-dates listening and is operative within it.

    [5] This position counters, for example, what Walter Benjamin at the end of his famous essay “The Task of the Translator”, writes about “the Holy Writ”. Benjamin posits there that it is “unconditionally translatable” because it is supposed to be “‘the true language’ in all its literalness and without the mediation of meaning” (82). The position is peculiar, because it insists on the medium—language—in its immediacy—without the mediation of meaning. Language as pure means. This is Benjamin’s understanding of “sacred writings” and their purity. In Transcription, Lerner counters such phantasies of purity or immediacy. I bring up Benjamin on this count because Transcription includes several references to his work. 

    [6] I want to acknowledge Martín Plot’s thinking about “the author” (versus “the actor”) in the work of Hannah Arendt, and the relevance of this distinction for our theorization of “authoritarianism”. I am tempted to capture such a thought under the title “Authors Against Authoritarianism”.

    [7] This is not to say that under different conditions, turning human beings into mere recording devices could not also work against authoritarianism: witness the end of Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451, where humans are turned into living recordings of great works of literature that are being burnt, for an example of precisely this situation.

    [8] That Lerner is interested in these questions is clear elsewhere in his work, for example in his story “The Hofmann Wobble”, which presents us with an author who is using and abusing Wikipedia to rewrite history and promote ideological positions. Transcription signals that it is situated in this vein of thinking when it evokes “the wobble” in its third section (129) to capture Max’s state of mind in his relation to his father.

    [9] In Lerner’s 10:04 (Lerner 2014, 244), this idea is expressed through reference to a story that Lerner finds in Giorgio Agamben’s The Coming Community, and that is attributed there to Walter Benjamin, who likely found it somewhere else, namely about how after the arrival of the Messiah, the world will be exactly as it is now, just a little different. The idea returns in Transcription in other ways as well. “It was as though everything in the house had shifted a few millimeters”, Max says in Transcription when he encounters his father after he has survived Covid. “He wasn’t much changed, and yet he was utterly changed” (116). 

  • b2o announces publication of EXOCRITICISM

    Image: 978-0980544008 – Ferdinand Altenburg, 2024

    b2o: an online journal is pleased to announce the publication of EXOCRITICISM, a special issue edited by Arne De Boever and Frédéric Neyrat. In fourteen contributions that cut across the critical and the creative, the issue responds to the exigency that the rise of Artificial Intelligence poses to those who read and write. Ranging from (among other forms and themes) micro-fiction to travelogue, electric consciousness to xenoecology, spontaneous note to prophecy, and including original visual works, EXOCRITICISM explores critical thinking and writing at the limits of the academic journal, away from pre-patterned centers of interpretation and evaluation. A design print-book based on the special issue is forthcoming. 

    EXOCRITICISM includes: 

    Elmar Schenkel, “The Conspiracy of the Electricians”

    Arne De Boever, “The Essay vs. AI: On the Literary Value of Criticism”

    Darko Vukić, “EXOCRITICISM After the Demon”

    Pierre Cassou-Noguès (text), Gwenola Wagon (images), “Eye See ‘NK Sehr Forreye Ame: On the Appropriation of DBT by AI”

    Will Alexander, “A Spontaneous Note On EXOCRITICISM”

    Nick Nauman, “Is Driving”

    Anna Longo, “The Inhuman, All Too Human”

    Andrew Wenaus, “What is Patamathematical Poetry?”

    Steven Swarbrick, “XENOECOLOGY: Encounters with Alien Life”

    Brian Evenson, “Sometimes on The Teletubbies”

    Andrew Levy, “Presences Stir”

    Nathan Brown, “Elemental History: Zumthor after Hölderlin”

    DX Aminal and Lera Winehouse, “aillelujah?”

    Frédéric Neyrat, “Prophecies in the Fog” 

  • Elmar Schenkel–The Conspiracy of the Electricians

    This text is part of the b2o: an online journal special issue “EXOCRITICISM”, edited by Arne De Boever and Frédéric Neyrat.

    Image: Lebensgroße Selbstentfernung; Lifesized Selfremoval – Ferdinand Altenburg, 2024

    The Conspiracy of the Electricians

    Elmar Schenkel

    Translated from the German by Arne De Boever

     

    There was a Mexican philosopher called Kant. One day, he grew tired of the metaphysics that he had until then practiced to excess, and after a few futile attempts to learn a new language—let’s say, Afrikaans—he turned to the study of electricity. He started laying cables over his yard, hung up antennas that were several meters long in gardens and fields. He wanted to see what that would be like. He shed light on a variety of things, small pyramids, dung heaps, dusty coaches. He put up fences that no one should climb, a little ghost ride in which he lit up grimaces. But somehow he was never fully satisfied until he hit upon the idea to set electric traps, in which he caught other philosophers, to then force them to abandon their fixed ideas. He only let the captured philosophers go on the condition that they too would dedicate themselves to electricity. And so it happened that the philosophers once again became extinct, and that the world was only populated by electricians. And that could have been the end of the story, as any contemporary would confirm–but it stubbornly continued on. One day, one of these electricians realized he was bored. He didn’t know why, but when he gave it some thought, this fellow Kant came to mind. He noticed that he’d started hating him. He obtained documents about his life and works, interviewed people, and discovered to his great amazement the things that Kant, in his pre-electrical days, had done. Almost no one knew about this, it wasn’t talked about. Secretly, he studied metaphysics and, enlightened by it, started a conspiracy. He built metaphysical ghost rides, fences, and finally traps in which he successfully began catching electricians—and thus this profession too quickly came to an end. One day, by the way, this fellow Kant got caught in his net, and that’s the sole reason why we contemporaries are indebted to him for his major work, The Crisis of Electric Consciousness. 

    From: Schenkel, Elmar. Mauerrisse. Stuttgart: Klett-Cotta, 1985. 72-73. 

  • Arne De Boever–The Essay vs. AI: On the Literary Value of Criticism

    This text is part of the b2o: an online journal special issue “EXOCRITICISM”, edited by Arne De Boever and Frédéric Neyrat.

    The Essay vs. AI: On the Literary Value of Criticism

    Arne De Boever

     

    All images are (c) Arne De Boever and were taken by the author in the Sublevel at the California Institute of the Arts. 

     

    The critic is always in a secondary position to the poet, but his secondariness is not an inferior position. (Bové 2025, 117)

    –Paul Bové, “Critical Poetic Grace”

    Opening Questions

    How to write criticism in the time of artificial intelligence (AI)?

    I ask this question as a critic working among literary, visual, and performing artists at an arts college—in other words, as part of a creative community that is, by nature of the work its members are doing, deeply invested in forms. If critics have perhaps forgotten, at times, that they too participate in that practice, the immediate context of my own writing makes it impossible for me to do so and solicits me, on a daily basis and as a key concern of aesthetic education, to think longer and harder about the forms I generate as a critic. While those forms first and foremost seek to say something about the thing that catches my critical attention, they are also undeniably the aesthetic forms of my very own thought, and as such they deserve critical scrutiny, in particular in the time of AI when critical writing, and thus also critical thinking and its objects, appear to be going through an epochal transformation.

    Let me clarify from the outset the limits of my project here. I am only interested in thinking about AI in the context of writing criticism—the kind of writing that I consider myself to be doing. There are, obviously, many other contexts for the application of AI; certainly there are many other kinds of writing in which AI may serve a purpose. My position, however, is that when it comes to writing criticism specifically, AI is useful only as a challenge to solicit us into writing against or more precisely outside of (because I am not talking about a writing that’s merely reactive) the kind of writing that AI generates. AI solicits us, I propose, into writing outside of established formats of academic and professionalized prose, familiar from well-recognized scholarly journals.

    Exocritics of the world, unite!

    This solicitation, I argue, is for the sake of saving not only thought but thought’s very objects from a dulling standardization and commodification to which, in the time of AI, they are being subjected. Criticism has been in the process of becoming formulaic, and in our time AI is accelerating this process, an acceleration that is further contributing to the demise of the humanities. While AI is accelerating this process today, it should be clear that it precedes the time of AI. Indeed, it is arguably a problem that is part of the institutional history of criticism’s practice—criticism is read and taught typically in academic contexts—, a history that the arrival of AI is making more visible.

    No doubt a key word in thinking about all of this is “freedom”. We are living in a time (as Maggie Nelson for example has noted [Nelson]) when “freedom”—freedom of speech, academic freedom, artistic freedom—are once again objects of scrutiny, and my position is that freedom—and in particular intellectual freedom,[1] which is the freedom that is practiced in criticism—is under increased pressure in the time of AI.

    So a slightly adjusted version of my opening question might be: how to be intellectually free in the time of AI?

    What are the forms of criticism that will enable us to remain intellectually free in the time of AI?[2]

     

    Reading AI

    The critical form that I propose to focus on in this reflection about “how to write criticism in the time of AI?” is the essay (instead of the scholarly article). Criticism today, I argue, needs to uncompromisingly seek the nominally modest, humble, and in my own language unexceptional form of the “essay”—from the French “essayer”, “to try”; the tradition of the essay goes back to the 16th-century French thinker Michel de Montaigne, who invented the genre—if it wants to continue being intellectually free. Put negatively, it needs to steer clear from any prescribed, repeatable, and supposedly scientific forms that in their purported objectivity are in fact predictable, formulaic, and adding to the status quo—thus preventing anything truly new from coming about. AI comes to us in the guise of the new, but its relation to the new—as well as other, related terms: creativity, for example—remains contested (as I will discuss).

    Leaving criticism aside for a moment, I point to the field of theoretical mathematics, in which AI has solved several long-standing problems, but in ways that practitioners of the discipline consider unsatisfying: because the theories that AI provided lack what they don’t hesitate to characterize as a poetic quality, a beauty they associate with human ways of solving such problems. So they are still looking even if AI has already completed the job. These mathematicians, who look for poetry in theory, need to become our allies—at least to the extent that they intend to leave these beautiful solutions to humans.[3]

    The polemical and at face value perhaps somewhat naïve version of my position would be that AI cannot write essays. To be clear, this position is not that AI, for now, cannot write essays. It is stronger than that: I would be positing, categorically, that it will never be able to do so, because the essay as I conceive of it is a particularly human form of intelligence that always realizes itself beyond the limits of what AI can achieve. It will be clear, then, that my turn to the essay is not a nostalgic turn but a futuristic one, in the service of a critico-futurism. We could give a bit of a humorous ring to this: you cannot spell “essay” with “AI”, even if the original French word “essai” ended in “AI”. AI writes ArtIcles.

    I write in “woulds” and “coulds” because there is a catch: by presenting the essay in this categorical way, and as tied to human intelligence, I don’t want to make a plea for the exceptionalism of the essay as form of free human thought. I am interested, as I’ve indicated, in the essay as an unexceptionalist form. I may have landed on the form of the essay, but what matters to me here is not some kind of essayistic essentialism, or the essay as the form for human exceptionalism (I write as a humanist but not a human exceptionalist). I am interested, rather, in the challenge to AI-generated writing that the essay enables me to explore. Responding to this challenge may take forms other than the essay as well, even if the essay may be a particularly promising form in this context. 

    Reading AI-generated articles is a peculiar experience, one that, alas, I am becoming more and more familiar with in a time when the traditional mid-term or end-of-term essay is disappearing—is being outsourced to AI, as Hua Hsu in a recent New Yorker essay on “The End of the Essay” (2025) observed. On the surface, everything in these AI-generated end-of-term papers (let’s not call them essays) or articles seems to be in order. But when applying closer scrutiny, you find that there is just no “there there”. They simply move through the motions, demonstrating a disconcerting lack of voice. A claim is made and while the evidence brought in to support that claim is drawn from the general field of study in which that claim is presented, the relations between the various pieces of evidence just do not add up, or are simply wrong.[4]

    On the surface, everything seems to be in order (there are sources! there are [granted, unreferenced] quotes! there is evidence! there is a claim!): but start scratching just a little bit (ask for the reference!), and you quickly lose whatever ground you thought there was under your feet. The AI paper or article is not the product of “reading”. I have some hesitation to characterize it as “writing”, even; doing so would fundamentally shift what I understand by those terms. The AI article—the ArtIcle–truly is an empty shell, the mere appearance of a form of thought—without any actual thought. Its author, an impersonal mask.

    Chase it, and you’ll soon end up like Wile E. Coyote.

     

    Of course there is still a difference between such an AI article, and academic articles written by humans to share scholarly research and also to fulfill the requirements of an academic degree and academic promotion. But anyone who has read through all of the scholarly articles about, say, a contemporary American novel, will be able to testify to the repetitiveness of the form: again and again, one comes across the same kinds of compositions, frequently presenting the same evidence, reaching perhaps substantially different but similarly sounding conclusions—and of course they are all referencing each other. One has the impression of entering into some kind of nightmarish mirror palace in which versions of the same professional academic are all “echoing”—one of AI’s favorite words, by the way–more or less the same thing. By the time such “echoes” are available to the public eye, they have already passed through the professional machinery of what is called “peer review”: review by so-called specialists, and frequently the authors of other already published articles on the novel in question, who will typically only approve for publication work that more or less resembles their own and demonstrates what they perceive to be the standards of the discipline. Everything here revolves around method and outcomes,[5] around the calculated effects of a hollow procedure that, in the writerly form it takes, stands miles apart from the object on which it is supposed to shed light. There simply is no relation. Granted, we still have here humans who are writing such articles; but we are really only one step removed from the AI article. I have no doubt that many of these humans are already using AI in the service of generating the next line on their CV.

    It should always have been obvious where this was going, even if bad criticism alone cannot be blamed for it: in recent months, I have been receiving emails from university presses in both the US and elsewhere asking for my permission to allow companies to train their AI on work of mine that these presses have published—presumably in order to then turn AI into a better academic writer. While it is undoubtedly better to be asked than to simply find out that one’s work was used without one’s consent—and there have already been court cases about such non-consensual use[6]–the payment one can expect to receive from this is minimal, even though the price paid by the presses (who are barely staying afloat in the current anti-academic climate) for closing such deals is great. In the future they imagine, AI will be able to write academic articles and books—we need not bother any longer.[7] This is, and this much should be clear, the outcome of a process that has involved the increased standardization of criticism in the university. Anyone doing their homework and researching already published criticism on this or that novel, for example, will not be able to avoid some irritation at how similar the articles all sound. The AI-generated article is simply the next step in a process that predates it by far.

    If AI can appear to us, then, as the miserable outcome of this long institutional history of criticism’s practice, my position is that we are being solicited, today, in the time of AI, to write otherwise.

    How to write criticism in the time of AI? By writing criticism in such a way that no AI could. I don’t know if this is possible—but I like the challenge. What kind of writing might such a solicitation have us produce? Time to take this outside.

     

    The Essay

    While the problem of writing criticism in the time of AI propels us into an exocriticism and critico-futurism, it has a history. For this, I partly look—without a hint of nostalgia–to a text from 1958 (the text does not mention AI but it’s worth noting that the term was coined in 1956, just a few years previous) as part of the solution. There, an author writes of the essay, formally independent and related to poetry, as evoking “intellectual freedom” (Adorno 3). It dodges prescription, seems to “reflect the leisure of a childlike person”; “luck and play are essential to it” (Adorno 4). Often “classified a trivial endeavor” (Adorno 4), it practices interpretation as radically free speculation, thus preserving the artistic energy of its source material: for “the objective wealth of meanings encapsulated in every intellectual phenomenon demands of the recipient the same spontaneity of subjective fantasy that is castigated in the name of objective discipline” (Adorno 4). The essay has an “aesthetic autonomy” while at the same time it never fully stands aside from its object—“for one can hardly speak of aesthetic matters unaesthetically” (Adorno 5). The “expressive impulse in the presentation”, which the academic article seeks to remove—this is another way of saying that the academic article seeks to get rid of the subject—is preserved and even promoted in the essay, which presents itself as going against the “privilege of the mindless” (Adorno 5). Such a form, and the author presents the essay precisely as a form in his own essay, deliberately works against what the author characterizes as “academic unfreedom” (“akademische Unfreiheit”), a state of academic disciplining in which “intellectual freedom itself becomes unfree and serves the socially preformed needs of its clientele” (Adorno 6).

    The author who is speaking here is Theodor Adorno, who understands the academy to be a “repressive order”: “A certificate of competency is required of the mind so that it will not transgress upon official culture by crossing culturally confirmed boundary lines. Presupposed in this is the notion that all knowledge can potentially be converted into science” (Adorno 8). But what was lost in this shift from “philosophy” to “science”? Why did this shift take place? Marcel Proust, Adorno argues, proceeded “scientifically” when he was writing his monumental opus À la recherche du temps perdu [In Search of Lost Time], but the kind of science documented in the work’s seven volumes is “not readily accommodated within science and scholarship”, and this “despite the fact that their claim to objectivity is neither diminished nor abandoned to a vague plausibility” (Adorno 8). The knowledge it presents is that of a man of experience “like the now extinct homme de lettres [man of letters], whom Proust conjures up as the highest form of dilettante” (Adorno 8). A dilettante, then, or also, as Adorno also allows us to put it in the closing lines of his essay—a “heretic” (Adorno 23): that is what the essayist, the critic, is to be in the time of AI.

    Adorno, of course, is not writing in the time of AI—he’s just on the cusp of it. Note that Hannah Arendt, in the “Prologue” of her book The Human Condition from 1958, takes the launch of Sputnik in 1957 to reflect on the scientific production of a “future man” as part of a “rebellion against human existence as it has been given”, with science generating “truths” that “will no longer lend themselves to normal expression in speech and thought”, thus necessitating “artificial machines to do our thinking and speaking”. “The question”, as Arendt points out, “is whether we wish to use our new scientific and technical knowledge in this direction” (3). Although Adorno doesn’t appear to be thinking about any of this, I’m suggesting that what he has to say about the essay and its relation to the stodgy forms of academic writing in 1958 nevertheless becomes supremely relevant today, when we are witnessing the outcome—in AI–of certain kinds of standardization in the disciplines that are supposed to enable the free expression of the intellect. It’s as if AI is inscribed in Adorno’s essay just by virtue of its historical context–even if he never mentions it.

    Adorno contrasts the essay’s wisdom to the philosophical doctrine, “deeply rooted since Plato, that what is transient and ephemeral is unworthy of philosophy” (Adorno 10); he posits the essay’s “methodically [unmethodical]” (Adorno 13) way of proceeding to Descartes’ obsession—him again!–with the “clear and distinct” (Adorno 14) and suggests it pursues a “kind of learning that remains vulnerable to error” (Adorno 13). It is not analytical; it accepts that not everything in the world is logical; it does not seek to be exhaustive; it “thinks in fragments”; Adorno allows us to characterize it as “fallible and provisional”, and “groping its way” (Adorno 16). To Adorno, it is a kind of thinking in the midst of things. He quotes Max Berise writing that

    The person who writes essayistically is the one who composes as he experiments, who turns his object around, questions it, feels it, reflects on it, who attacks it from different sides and assembles what he sees in his mind’s eye and puts into words what the object allows one to see under the conditions created in the course of writing. (Berise qtd. Adorno 17) 

    Thinking and writing in process, then, rather than rule-based or following some kind of pre-scription. Open, at a distance from “the masterpiece”, the essay finds “happiness” in its hostility to “official critical thought” and pursues “the pleasure principle of thought” (Adorno 21). Its object, Adorno writes “is the new in its newness, not as something that can be translated into the old, existing forms” (Adorno 21). It makes the violations of the orthodoxy of thought visible. This suggests, then, that the new problem of “how to write criticism in the time of AI” can only be written up in the essay form, which is mobile.

     

    A Literary Turn; On Criticism’s Hybridity 

    The main writer Adorno mentions as an example in this context is “Benjamin” (Walter), but I propose to turn to another Benjamin at this point—the Chilean writer Benjamín Labatut. Labatut rose to fame with his novel When We Cease to Understand the World, published in English translation by the New York Review of Books in 2020. This is a remarkable work about science and history and the people caught up in both, that opens like a work of non-fiction but ends in a more experimental, and clearly creative mode. Its opening chapter, “Prussian Blue”, which ends in the words “a terrible verdure” that served as the book’s original Spanish title (Un verdor terrible), is, at least to this reader, impossible to distinguish from an essay as one might find it in a magazine or even a well-written book of history (in particular, the history of science). There are, of course, no footnotes, no references (even if there are quotations), no bibliography; there isn’t a clear thesis statement or argument, and in that sense the chapter is clearly an “essay” rather than an “article”. But the thing is, in the way it is presented here, it’s neither: it is part of a work of fiction, and thus closer to a short story or a chapter in a novel.

    This is, however, where I become interested, and where we begin to dabble in the field of what has come to be called “theory-fiction”: for what happens not just when fiction is presented in this essayistic way, but when criticism appears to us in this fictionalized form? The development of Labatut’s book makes it clear that we are in the realm of fiction—but what does it mean to bring criticism into this realm? Is this a challenge to fiction writers? Is it a challenge to critics? Does this hybrid form address itself to both?

    Consider the following three quotes, all in translation:

    A wave of suicides swept through Germany in the final months of war. In April 1945 alone, three thousand eight hundred people killed themselves in Berlin. The inhabitants of the small town of Demmin, to the north of the capital, some three hours away, fell prey to collective panic when the retreating German troops destroyed the bridges leading west, leaving them stranded on their peninsula, surrounded by three rivers and defenseless before the dreaded onslaught of the Red Army. Hundreds of men, women and children took their own lives over the course of three days. (Labatut 2020, 10-11)

    Today it is hard from an even partly adequate idea of the extent of the devastation suffered by the cities of Germany in the last years of the Second World War, still harder to think about the horrors involved in that devastation. It is true that the strategic bombing surveys published by the Allies, together with the records of the Federal German Statistics Office and other official sources, show that the Royal Air Force dropped a million tons of bombs on enemy territory; it is true that of the 131 towns and cities attacked, some only once and some repeatedly, many were almost entirely flattened, that about 600,000 German civilians fell victim to the air raids, and that three and a half million homes were destroyed, while at the end of the war seven and half million people were left homeless, and there were 31.1 cubic meters of rubble for every person in Cologne and 42.8 cubic meters for every inhabitant in Dresden—but we do not grasp what it all actually meant. (Sebald 2003, 3-4)

    Hitler expressed what the average German thought but declined to say, and he did so compellingly and with such conviction as to make it legitimate, and the more people followed him in that direction, realizing that what one thought in one’s own mind yet was perhaps wary of expressing could indeed be expressed, the more legitimate it became. The opinions Hitler expressed were clear and unambiguous, he concealed nothing, and they could easily have been repudiated, he and his party having no power on their own, such power being granted by those who listened to him and who in doing so heard themselves, their own voice of reason, the voice that said this is the lay of the land. That nothing suppressed that voice, those hitherto quiet thoughts, and that the structures to reject such baseness had ceased to operate became Germany’s tragedy. (Knausgaard 2018, 767)

    The first is from Labatut’s work of fiction, When We Cease. The second includes the opening lines of the first lecture from W.G. Sebald’s On the Natural History of Destruction—non-fiction. The third is from the sixth volume of Karl Ove Knausgaard’s autobiographical novel My Struggle, which includes a long essay about Hitler and his autobiography Mein Kampf. Read next to each other, they sound alike; there is no marked difference in genre, certainly no clear ontological difference in terms of the reality in which they exist (fiction, in the case of the first; history, in the case of the second; criticism, in the third case, given that it is part of an analysis of Mein Kampf). Matters are complicated further by the fact that Labatut, in the first quote, is referencing fact; that the second quote evidences what I consider to be a characteristic feature of Sebald’s literary style: the way he tends in his fiction to deliver the horrors of history in run-on sentences, piling horror upon horror, as if he were (Walter) Benjamin’s “Angel of History” whose wings have become caught up in the storm of progress, moving forward with his back towards the future, and powerlessly looking back at the pile-on of disasters that we call “history”; and that Knausgaard dishes up a critical text about Mein Kampf as part of an autobiographical novel. I could place a quote from Sebald’s fiction—say, The Rings of Saturn (Sebald 1998)–next to the quote from his lecture, and they would sound exactly the same. And yet, their ontological—and, not unimportant when one is talking about history, epistemic–status is undoubtedly different. We can engage with Sebald’s lecture as making a truth-claim; but the same is not possible with Labatut’s book. To be clear, I do not think this is a problem that is produced by the fact that these quotes reach us here in their English translation. In other words, the lack of difference I highlight is not a flattening effect of their translation (which was accomplished by humans, it is worth noting–not by machines). The quotes point to other questions: How to engage with a work of criticism that is presented as part of a work of fiction, even if it is autobiographical fiction (Knausgaard)? What do these comparisons give us to think about criticism?

    To my mind, these questions really landed when Labatut’s The MANIAC was published, just a few years later. On the surface similar to When We Cease, this work presented itself as a triptych, leading with a section about the scientist Paul Ehrenfest that could have been part of When We Cease, and continuing with its longer center-piece (which consists of two major parts) about John (Johnny, in the novel) von Neumann who was the main scientific brain behind the atomic bomb and the development of AI. The first major digression from When We Cease would be the closing third section, which is about the game of Go, one its main players, Lee Sedol, and his famous matches with AlphaGo, an AI that had been taught to play Go. It follows organically from the engagement with von Neumann, but it is still a marked departure from When We Cease and the rest of The MANIAC. If to my mind, the questions raised by When We Cease really landed with The MANIAC, it is because here they are activated in the context of a novelistic engagement with AI. In other words, the reader is being invited to reflect on the particular form of Labatut’s writing in the context of the novel’s discussion of the development of AI, and one gets the sense that when we are reading about AI and the game of Go in the novel’s third part, we are also reading about AI and the novel.

    The questions from When We Cease shift at this point: what does it mean to bring criticism in the realm of fiction… in the time of AI? Is this a challenge to fiction writers… in the time of AI? Is it a challenge to critics? Does Labatut’s hybrid form, which continues from When We Cease into The MANIAC, address itself to both? Was Sebald, through the peculiar form he chose for his fiction, trying to tell us something about how to write criticism? Is this part of the interest of his book On the Natural History of Destruction, which is on the surface not part of his fiction, just a work of criticism, but can upon closer consideration not be disentangled from it? Was Sebald by writing criticism in the form of fiction and vice versa perhaps already carving out some place for the human in a form of writing that he foresaw being appropriated by artificial intelligence? He was also a critic—and a critic with a famous hatred for the computer (“when information technology was introduced [at the university], [Sebald] refused to have a PC installed in his office. Sebald never wrote an email and if, to his dismay, he received one, it was printed out and delivered to him by “‘some clown from the Registry’”, as he apparently told a student [Schütte]). How do we read together all of these “data”?

    Much has been said about hybrid literary genres, but I want to place the focus here on criticism and ask about criticism’s hybridity. I argue that what these writers—Labatut, but also Sebald, Knausgaard, and others—accomplish as fiction-writers is that they allow criticism to enter into the realm of literary play. It just so happens that in the case of three of these writers, this move takes place as part of a text that engages the history of WWII, and in particular the history of totalitarianism, fascism, Hitler, and (in Sebald’s case) the allied bombings of Germany. Without taking away from the gravity of these events, one surely has to wonder whether the formal choices that these authors are making, were made in any way in response to the historical events that they are relating—in other words, whether the hybrid form of fiction, but also of criticism, that they present was in any way decided upon with these historical events in mind. If we agree—and I don’t think this is a particularly big IF—that these historical events were devastating for humanity, is there then a way in which the decision on these hybrid critical forms was intended to safeguard the humanity that the events under consideration here seemed to want to destroy? Couldn’t writing criticism in this way emerge then as a choice for humanity in the face of the conformism that fascism strove for, a way to defy the uniformity and dulled down standardization and commodification that it sought to put into place? And if we grant, as Labatut’s The MANIAC (among many other sources) invites us to see, the continuation of WWII history with the birth of AI, doesn’t such a gesture become meaningful then, as well, in the time of AI? Couldn’t one say that each of these writers is or was, knowingly or not, proposing a humanistic criticism in the time of AI, and against the kind of writing AI typically produces?[8]

    By bringing criticism into the realm of fiction, by practicing it as part of a fictional form, each of these writers is giving us some indication of how to save criticism from AI. We can give many different names to how such saving is accomplished: style may be part of it; humor may be too; with Adorno we may envision a criticism that allows for a certain amount of literary play. This evokes Kant (whom Adorno mentions; Adorno 6), and in particular Friedrich Schiller’s Letters on Aesthetic Education (on whom Adorno stays silent in “The Essay as Form”; Schiller). If we place the emphasis on play as a particularly human quality, however, it’s worth noting that a dying von Neumann, when he is asked “what it would take for a computer, or some other mechanical entity, to begin to think and behave like a human being”, eventually answers that “it would have to understand language, to read, to write, to speak”, adding “that it would have to play, like a child” (Labatut 2023, 263-265).

    Understanding language, reading, writing, speaking—now these are the things that critics are typically good at. But do they play? And if AI has, since then, learned to understand language, to read, to write, to speak, has it learned to play? This must be why Labatut’s The MANIAC lands on a riveting section about the game of Go which seems to indicate that clearly, AI is coming close. Leaving aside the debates about whether AlphaGo is truly playing the game, the categorical imperative to critics should be clear: to preserve your thought and the forms of your thought, write a criticism that defies formulas (even if an AI-reproducible formula may be central to it; see Smith 2025), surprises, and can be recognized as something beautiful—like literature.

     

    Theory of the Novel as Criticism

    From here, I expand the argument into a speculative thesis: what if we reconsidered the novel, from its origin, as a form of criticism, and looked again at its long and distinguished history to find in it also a history of criticism in literary form? I am thinking of Don Quixote, for example, often considered the first European novel, and typically attributed to Miguel Cervantes de Saavedra. Such an attribution cannot but make one smile, however, since Don Quixote explicitly plays with its authorship: by its own account, the text suggests it was first written in Arabic, by Cide Hamete Benengeli (also referred to in the novel as Cid Mahamate Benengeli), and then translated into Spanish—which is the language in which it reaches us. A little unusually, the work’s translator, however, explicitly appears in the novel as a critic as well, commenting on whether certain sections of the manuscript may be apocryphal, and taking what we should probably call “editorial” decisions about the work as part of their practice of translation. Given that such comments are explicitly written into the novel, the novel cannot but appear to us then as a kind of self-reflexive, self-critical document that is not only a novel but also the work’s first critical commentary, a reading that is intensified in the later parts of the novel, which feature a scholar joining Don Quixote’s crew—a young man who has heard and read about Don Quixote’s adventures, and is eagerly studying them for his dissertation. And so between the first volume of the novel, which was already a form of self-criticism, and the second, the novel generates its own critic, who appears in the novel as a character, heightening the sense of Don Quixote not just as the first novel but as the first work of criticism about a novel as well.

    Surely this is what the Argentine author Jorge Luis Borges tapped into when he wrote his “Pierre Menard, Author of the Quixote” story (Borges 1998), about a writer/critic seeking to rewrite the Quixote exactly as it had been written before—but without copying it. Michel Foucault is not wrong when, no doubt with this story in mind, he refers to “the Borges-style play of a commentary which is nothing but the solemn and expected reappearance word for word of the text that is commented on” (Foucault 57), and goes on to spell out the function of criticism like so: “the commentary must say for the first time what had, nonetheless, already been said, and must tirelessly repeat what had, however, never been said” (Foucault 58). The paradoxical sentence (which solves the issue of criticism’s perceived superfluousness) captures something about criticism’s peculiar relation to its object, the way in which it shares in its aesthetic autonomy and evidences an aesthetic autonomy entirely its own: it appears to be able to repeat in an original way what the literary text was nevertheless already saying; it appears to be able to say what had never been said about the literary text in such a way that it seems obvious, a mere repetition.

    And it’s not only Borges, of course. Paul Auster makes much of Don Quixote in his “City of Glass”, another novel that reads like a work of fictionalized criticism and revolves around a writer of detective novels called Daniel Quinn (DQ, get it?). It’s worth noting that the novel at some point features Paul Auster, the writer, supposedly engaged in an essay about authorship in Don Quixote, and arguing that it may be the illiterate Sancho Panza who is the real author of the manuscript. (The suggestion echoes Franz Kafka’s little parable, maybe a riddle, or possibly just a joke, titled “The Truth about Sancho Panza” [Kafka].) “City of Glass” is a peculiar detective novel first and foremost because it includes no detectives and no crime: instead, it is filled with writers and readers. The novel really is a work of criticism: a critical commentary, in the form of fiction, on the detective novel as a genre. What could criticism in the time of AI learn from this? If “City of Glass” launched Auster’s career on this count, it is worth highlighting his late book Burning Boy, a work of biography and criticism that in its inventiveness belongs in the domain of literature. One can only be grateful that Auster had it in him, still, to finish it before his untimely death in 2024.

    In his Goncourt-winning Compass, a novel that reads like a French doctoral dissertation about orientalism and music (as well as literature), Matias Énard turns to Don Quixote at some point to argue that “the first European novel” was really “the first Arabic novel”, given that it tells us—explicitly—that it was written in Arabic (Énard 436). Énard makes this point, which is also a point about the novel’s own origins as a work of criticism, in a novel—Compass—that itself asks us to reorient ourselves, as a compass would, in the history of the novel towards the novel’s critical components. One of Énard’s other novels, The Banquet of the Gravediggers’ Guild (2023), has a doctoral student in Anthropology as one of its characters—it leads, in fact, with a section narrated from this student’s point of view—and as the novel progresses, it frequently and critically refers back to the hapless student’s attempts to provide an ethnographic account of life in a community in rural France. The suggestion appears to be that the novel somehow can do it better: that the novel as a form is able to perform a kind of writing, grotesquely but gorgeously baroque in the sections of the book that describe the gravediggers’ banquet, that ethnography/anthropology cannot. The student is in contact with his PhD-supervisor throughout the novel, and his Doktorvater is not pleased with his progress. We also hear about his writing being rejected by established journals in the discipline. In the end, the novel embraces this character as a PhD drop-out who falls in love with a local (of course!) and ends up joining her eco-activist cause.[9] But given the erudition of Énard’s writing, which among other things has greatly expanded my culinary vocabulary, the reader can never quite shed the suspicion that Énard’s very own novel somehow comes to stand in for the student’s dissertation, and to replace the scientific knowledge that it was supposed to provide, with another kind of knowledge, not unlike that provided by Marcel Proust’s In Search of Lost Time (by Adorno’s account)—the knowledge of a man of letters, based on a certain kind of experience, but unacceptable (of course!) to the standards of the academic discipline. All of Énard’s writing, which is impressively learned, taps into this suggestion, as if the novel form in his hands is giving us a taste of what criticism may accomplish if it shed its straightjacket and came a little closer to its object—literature.

    Other examples abound, with or without reference to Don Quixote: J.M. Coetzee’s Elizabeth Costello; Teju Cole’s Open City; Martin Riker’s The Guest Lecture; Joshua Cohen’s The Netanyahus. Ranging across the literary spectrum, these are all works of fiction that strike one, in some way, as criticism—or, if we flip the perspective around, works of criticism that read like fiction. I will admit having at times wished to be able to write criticism in this way—usually, I am struck by this desire when the academic writing is not going well, when I have become stuck with an argument, or bored by its form. If only I could write this in the form of some kind of fiction, I say to myself, wouldn’t I be able to move this along—“have more fun”, as Coetzee’s Elizabeth Costello puts it (Coetzee 222)—and engage some more readers? Today, these questions are no longer just private, personal ones. They are questions about criticism itself and how it chooses to live—and, if it simply goes on like before, die—in the time of AI. It’s these writers from whom critics ought to learn if they want to put out forms that will stay at least one step ahead of AI.[10]

    To write criticism after AI is barbaric. By this, I do not mean, of course, that we can no longer write criticism after AI. I simply mean that we cannot continue to write criticism as before. By echoing Adorno’s famous statement about poetry and Auschwitz in this context, I intend to draw out the genocidal aspects of the AI revolution, which risks to mark the extinction of a people of writing.

    Does writing such criticism mean going against disciplines, a certain understanding of scientificity, peer review, established journals and presses, even teachers and what they have to tell us about writing? Yes, it does.

    Have the courage to write essays—this is the motto of the kind of Enlightenment that we are going through today, and in which the very possibility of human thought, its forms and its objects, are at the risk of disappearing. It’s by looking at authors like the ones I have just mentioned that criticism will be able to accrue an aesthetic autonomy that it will share with its objects (even though critical aesthetic autonomy is also different from literary aesthetic autonomy) and that it will be able to hold its ground in the time of AI.

     

    Envoi; or: The Bermuda Principles 

    Recently, a critic called Paul Bové has accused Fredric Jameson, with his infectious compulsion to allegorize, the critic who spoke in imperatives such as “Always historicize!”, of promoting a formulaic criticism that forgets about—even destroys–poetry and joy (Bové 2021). If the solution to the work of art is allegory, if the interpretive method is to “always” historicize, what room is left for the imagination, for the radically free speculation of criticism? It’s as if, in Jameson, critics are turned into artificial intelligences that follow a prescribed set of rules. Does this still have anything to do with the work of art under consideration? What does it say about the academy if such modes of interpretation have become dominant? What intellectual freedom remains under such conditions? These are Bové’s questions, and they become only more urgent in the time of AI. Critics are enabled here with interpretative tools—an instrumentality–that are in reality tightly constraining.

    Of course, imperatives—interpretative instrumentality—are tempting, in particular in a time of crisis when people reach for certainties (and Bové makes much of this in his book). It’s an allegory! Always historicize! But the problem is that such certainties only contribute further to the destruction of our objects of thought, our thought, and the writerly forms in which we express it. They mark the end of intellectual freedom.

    So by practicing alternative writerly forms of expression, and in particular the form of the essay, we would be writing against such destruction—of thought and its objects. How to write criticism, how to be intellectually free in the time of AI? By writing essays—which is to say—by trying.

    Bové, as is well known, was for many years the editor of the journal boundary 2, which had Jameson on its masthead, and in which I too have been involved for quite some time now. As part of our ongoing conversations, Paul recently reminded me that in 1994, he convened the journal’s editorial collective in Bermuda, to discuss the critical project of the journal. The “negatives” that the record from this gathering lists, give a good sense of the kind of essay-writing that the journal, at that time, decided to promote. I quote from “the Bermuda principles”:

    1. we no longer wish to restrict our work to currently dominant languages and intellectual models;
    2. we no longer wish to act editorially without a clear-cut agenda, without some established principles for publishing, without definite aims and expectations;
    3. we no longer wish to accept for publication work which is merely professionally accomplished;
    4. we no longer wish to be guided by the criteria of interest and importance established by the profession in its practices or by the market-place in its publications;
    5. we no longer wish to read, as we have been, literally hundreds of unsolicited manuscripts each year, in hope that we will find some “good” materials;
    6. we no longer accept that a journal should reproduce, distribute, and circulate knowledge;
    7. the journal must not attempt to reestablish a lost past;
    8. we no longer believe that we know what the age requires.

    The “positives”, as the document acknowledges, are more difficult to articulate, and end up pertaining also to the day-to-day business of running a journal. I offer this list of negatives not because I agree with all of them, but because I think we need them in the time of AI—I do believe our age requires it (this in contradiction to principle 8). I shy away from offering a list of positives because I do not want to spell out what criticism today should look like. But it should, I have argued, develop itself in response to a time when the commodification of its form has reached its apex (following points 3-6), and is in the process of making the critic, their thought, and their thoughts objects, disappear (“Bermuda” reveals itself in these principles, contrary to what we may associate with it, as a name for the struggle against such “disappearance”).

    The outcome of such a process, as will be clear, would not only be the end of criticism but the disappearance of a people.

     

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    Adorno, Theodor. “The Essay as Form”. In: Adorno, Theodor. Notes to Literature: Volume 1. Trans. Shierry Weber Nicholson. New York: Columbia University Press, 1991. 3-23.

    Auster, Paul. City of Glass. In: Auster, Paul. The New York Trilogy. New York: Faber and Faber, 1999. 2-132.

    —. Burning Boy: The Life and Work of Stephen Crane. New York: Henry Holt, 2021.

    Bayard, Pierre. Comment parler des livres que l’on n’a pas lus? Paris: Éditions de Minuit, 2007. 

    Boever, Arne De. Plastic Sovereignties: Agamben and the Politics of Aesthetics. Edinburgh: Edinburgh University Press, 2016.

    Borges, Jorge Luis. Collected Fictions. Trans. Andrew Hurley. London: Penguin, 1998.

    boundary 2 collective, “The Bermuda Principles” (sent to me in private correspondence with Paul Bové)

    Bové, Paul. “Critical Poetic Grace”. In: Moscardi, Iuri and Sandro-Angelo de Thomasis. The Acts of the Reappearing Pheasant: The Return of Experimental Italian and American Poets and Critics in New York. New York: Agincourt, 2025.

    —. Love’s Shadow. Cambridge: Harvard University Press, 2021.

    Cervantes, Miguel de. Don Quixote. Trans. John Rutherford. London: Penguin, 2003.

    Coetzee, J.M. Elizabeth Costello. New York: Penguin, 2003. 

    Énard, Mathias. Compass. Trans. Charlotte Mandell. New York: New Directions, 2017.

    —. The Annual Banquet of the Gravediggers’ Guild. Trans. Frank Wynne. New York: New Directions, 2023.

    Foucault, Michel. “The Order of Discourse”. Trans. Ian McLeod. In: Young, Robert, ed. Untying the Text: A Post-Structuralist Reader. Boston: Routledge, 1981. 48-78.

    Houellebecq, Michel. Serotonin. Trans. Shaun Whiteside. New York: Farrar, Straus, and Giroux, 2019.

    Hsu, Hua. “What Happens after AI Destroys College Writing?” The New Yorker, 06/30/2025,  accessible: https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2025/07/07/the-end-of-the-english-paper.

    Kafka, “The Truth About Sancho Panza”. In: Kafka, Franz. The Complete Stories. Ed. Nahum N. Glatzer. New York: Schocken Books, 1983. 430.

    Kant, Immanuel. Critique of the Power of Judgment. Trans. Paul Guyer, Eric Matthews. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 2000.

    Knausgaard, Karl Ove. My Struggle: Volume 6. The End. Trans. Martin Aiken and Don Bartlett. New York: Archipelago, 2018.

    Kornbluh, Anna. The Order of Forms: Realism, Formalism, and Social Space. Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 2019.

    Kushner, Rachel. Creation Lake. New York: Scribner, 2024.

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    —. The MANIAC. New York: Penguin, 2023.

    Levine, Caroline. Forms: Whole, Rhythm, Hierarchy, Network. Princeton: Princeton University Press, 2015.

    Nelson, Maggie. On Freedom: Four Songs of Care and Constraint. Minneapolis: Graywolf, 2021.

    Schiller, Friedrich. On the Aesthetic Education of Man. Trans. Reginald Snell. Mineola: Dover, 2004. 

    Schütte, Uwe. “Out of the Shadows”. Times Higher Education 11/22/2011, accessible: https://www.timeshighereducation.com/features/out-of-the-shadows/417486.article.

    Sebald, W.G. The Rings of Saturn. Trans. Michael Hulse. New York: New Directions, 1998. 

    —. On the Natural History of Destruction. Trans. Anthea Bell. New York: Random House, 2003.

    Smith, Zadie. “The Art of The Impersonal Essay”. The New Yorker, 09/22/2025, accessible: https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2025/09/29/the-art-of-the-impersonal-essay.

    [1] By “intellectual freedom”, I simply mean the capacity to think freely.

    [2] By posing the question in this way, I situate myself in a field of contemporary criticism—let’s call it “the new formalism”—that has (after deconstruction) revitalized the question of “form” in response to various modalities of criticism and theory that found value in “the formless”. Caroline Levine’s book Forms (2015) and Anna Kornbluh’s The Order of Forms (2019) are two titles associated with this movement, which invites us to think longer and harder about the forms that we, as critics, are putting out into the world. In philosophy, I point to the work of Catherine Malabou, which I have taken up as part of a philosophico-political formalism in my book Plastic Sovereignties (Boever 2016).

    [3] As the Chilean writer Benjamín Labatut (to whom I will turn later) shows, however, a fair few of these scientists are also obsessed with getting this kind of beauty out of an artificial intelligence—indeed, that may be their greatest challenge. In Labatut’s novel The MANIAC, this is best illustrated by the chapter “A Thing of Beauty, Not of this Word” from the final part of the book. There, we learn how AlphaGo as part of a 5-game competition with 9-Dan player Lee Sedol makes a surprising, beautiful move—a move that is later compared to one made in a later game by Lee. It’s a move that only 1 out of 10,000 players make, and such moves are typically characterized as intuitive, emerging as if out of a kind of wisdom that only highly experienced go-players have. It is considered a uniquely human move, but here we see an AI making it—and those working on AlphaGo are obsessed with those moments.

    [4] I experience this as a horizontal relation between things that one might encounter on a flat plain; the vertical relations between things—for example, the historical way in which they relate; the relief in their relations—disappears; everything is treated as if it is the same, as if it were skimmed off a surface indiscriminately; it’s very strange to read such a text because it’s precisely not how good understanding works: we don’t just superficially connect things but give a vertical account of their relations—when we think and write, we discriminate, we make judgments.

    [5] One can see this reflected in grant applications, for example, and the way in which they require you to write up a research project. A good case in point would be the European Research Council grant, which seems to me—through the forms in which it asks applicants to make the case for their research–deeply hostile to humanistic thought.

    [6] It was widely reported that Anthropic made a $1.5 billion dollar settlement with authors whose books were used to train its model. President Donald J. Trump made his position clear at a recent gathering about AI: he said that AI companies shouldn’t have to pay authors every time AI learns from their content because “learning isn’t stealing”. The quote can be found in the transcript of Trump’s address from an event titled “Winning the AI Race”, accessible: https://www.techpolicy.press/transcript-donald-trumps-address-at-winning-the-ai-race-event/.

    [7] It is unclear to me how academic presses today are assessing the work that is proposed to them for publication in terms of that work’s potential reliance on AI—I have received no communication from university presses about this so far. I have noticed that authors are now being asked, as part of the process of formalizing a publication agreement, to acknowledge whether AI was used for the writing of their book. But it’s unclear to me what the consequences would be of acknowledging the use of AI in the writing process.

    [8] Here I offer a marked departure from theory fiction and the techno-fascism with which, through the work of the rightist accelerationist philosopher Nick Land, it has often been associated.

    [9] This part of the plot is reminiscent of Rachel Kushner’s novel Creation Lake (2024) and reveals Énard’s text, next to Michel Houellebecq’s Serotonin (2019) as one of its possible but less obvious influences (Houellebecq has a cameo in Kushner’s novel so that influence is explicit).

    [10] I have used the word “step” several times in this essay, suggesting that AI merely marks a next step in an ongoing evolution. However, my position is ultimately that what appears to us as a next step is actually the appearance of another plain altogether. The reading that AI is doing is not reading, its writing is not writing. To this, I might add that even its not-reading is not the same as the not-reading that humans are doing. I.e. there is, to me, a marked difference between a student writing a paper about a book they haven’t read, and AI generating a paper about a book they haven’t read. On this last count, I found inspiring Pierre Bayard’s book Comment parler des livres que l’on n’a pas lus (2007). I am grateful to Olivia C. Harrison for this reference and for her generous comments on an earlier version of this essay.

  • Darko Vukić–EXOCRITICISM After the Demon

    This text is part of the b2o: an online journal special issue “EXOCRITICISM”, edited by Arne De Boever and Frédéric Neyrat.

    EXOCRITICISM After the Demon

    Darko Vukić

     

    It is tempting to read this call for EXOCRITICISM as a nostalgic defense of the essay against the oncoming wave of machine prose. It invokes Adorno in 1958, remembers the essay as a form of intellectual freedom, and opposes that freedom to the “standard scholarly article,” which today slides almost seamlessly into the Al generated article. The target seems clear enough. The danger is that criticism loses its aesthetic autonomy and becomes just another formatted output routed through citation software and indexing services, now with language models doing much of the heavy lifting.

    But the call is more cunning than that. It does not simply want to rescue the essay. It wants to radicalize form itself. The figure of the demon, paraphrased from Nietzsche’s eternal return, is not only a test of ethical endurance. Here, it is a test of writerly form. The demon announces: this article you are writing now could be written faster, and better, by AI. The threat is not only technical. It is existential. If the work can be automated, what is the critic for?

    The demon then turns editor and alters the terms. If you accept that AI can produce conventional academic prose more efficiently than you, why not stop writing conventional academic prose at all. Write in a way that breaks with the accepted rules, in a way that an AI “never would.” The demon promises a peer review process that will not police those rules but welcome their exhaustion.

    The call for papers is therefore less a protection of criticism from Al than a provocation to become something else under AI’s pressure. It names this something else EXOCRITICISM.

    Exo-, Not Anti-

    The prefix is telling. Exo-, outside, external, from beyond. The call is not for post-criticism or anti-criticism, but for criticism that comes from outside its own disciplinary shell. Not outside literature or art, but outside the historically sedimented norms of how criticism is supposed to speak. Exocriticism, the editors write, explores “unexpected transitions between speculation and description, metaphor and concept, drawing and analysis.” It wants criticism that does not know in advance where to place the border between thought and image, between commentary and composition.

    There is another outside in the call. The “Great Deprivation” produced by “techno-fascism’s appropriation and hollowing out of thought.” This is not simply a complaint about large language models doing student essays. It is a diagnosis of the way computation, automation, and platform power extract and repurpose thinking as measurable, monetizable data. Under these conditions, critique risks becoming a service: evaluation for hire, content moderation for institutions, yet another optimization.

    EXOCRITICISM responds by insisting that criticism must itself become a kind of literature, and literature must assume the protocols and rigors of criticism. The boundary between the two is no longer secured by genre. Instead of criticism about literature, we are offered “anti-fascist literature in the forms of criticism, and criticism in the forms of literature.” The call wants a radical democracy of forms, not a new canon of proper EXOCRITICAL style.

    At this point, something important becomes visible. The force of the proposal does not lie in the opposition between human essay and machine article. It lies in the refusal to let form remain a neutral container. When AI can generate both formulaic arguments and passable pastiche of more experimental writing, form can no longer be treated as mere packaging. It becomes the site where decisions about what counts as thought are made.

    The Demon Is Already Inside the Sentence

    Here is the uncomfortable part. This critique you are reading could itself be written by AI.

    The demon in the call does not simply stand outside the writer, whispering about future automation. It is already internalized as the question that shadows every sentence: could this have been generated. Once AI becomes part of the linguistic environment, the distinction between human and machine text is no longer audible in the grammar itself. It has to be staged, declared, or strategically sabotaged.

    The call for EXOCRITICISM plays with this ambiguity. On the surface, it challenges us to produce forms that AI “never would.” Underneath, it tacitly acknowledges that this is an unstable bet. Models trained on experimental writing can and do produce speculative criticism, strange metaphors, compressed aphorisms, even self-reflexive jokes about their own artificiality. What is harder to automate is not quirk or eccentricity, but commitment and risk. It is the willingness to attach one’s own position, body, and institutional situation to what is being said.

    Perhaps the more radical version of the demon’s question is not “can AI write this,” but “what does it cost you to sign your name under this text, in this form, at this time.”

    EXOCRITICISM, understood that way, is not simply formal innovation. It is an experiment in attaching critical stakes to forms that no longer guarantee academic safety. A “radical democracy of forms” is only radical if it risks existing hierarchies of evaluation.

    Otherwise, it is just aesthetic liberalism.

    The hyper meta twist is unavoidable: one could use AI to generate EXOCRITICAL works precisely in order to test the limits of the form. Would a machine produced “EXOCRITICAL” essay be automatically disqualified, or would its artificiality have to become part of its explicit thematics.

    Can the exo prefix apply to a text whose very production exposes the inside outside distinction as unstable. The call does not answer this. It may not want to.

     

    EXOCRITICISM as Exoskeleton

    There is another way to read the “exo” of EXOCRITICISM. Not only as outside, but as exoskeleton. An external structure that allows a fragile or overexposed interior to maintain form under pressure. Under the conditions described as techno-fascist, where thought is hollowed out and repackaged, criticism needs armor, but not the armor of jargon, or pure abstraction. It needs forms that both protect and expose, that can absorb blows without reducing themselves to neutralized commentary.

    Adorno’s defense of the essay is relevant here, as the call suggests, but not because the essay is inherently resistant to AI. Adorno values the essay for its refusal of pre-given method and its capacity to move associatively without falling into mere impressionism. The essay, for him, is a form that stays close to its object while keeping its own autonomy. It is rigorous not by virtue of adhering to a fixed template, but by remaining self-critical about its own procedures. EXOCRITICISM extends this logic by refusing to let the essay remain the privileged model. Drawings, diagrams, fragments, fictionalized reports, speculative protocols, all can become critical exoskeletons. The key question is not whether a form is unusual, but whether it holds thought and world in a relation that cannot be easily extracted and resold. In other words, whether it resists becoming content. Here, AI is not simply the adversary. It is part of the medium. To write now is to write alongside and against systems that can auto-complete our sentences, our arguments, our entire papers.

    EXOCRITICISM does not ask us to pretend those systems do not exist. It demands that we invent forms that remain legible as thought in spite of, and sometimes through, this saturation.

     

    Ex centered, Not Recentred

    “Forget about data centers,” the call says. “Ex-center your interpretations.” The pun is not accidental. The data center is the physical and economic infrastructure that underwrites AI. To forget about it would be irresponsible if taken literally. But as a slogan, it points to a different exo movement. Ex-centering does not mean withdrawing into a pure inside. It means refusing to keep the same center. In practice, this might mean decentering the disciplinary center that dictates what counts as legitimate scholarly tone. It might mean decentering the human as the only locus of meaning, opening analysis to non-human agencies and machinic processes without granting them mystical priority. It might mean decentering the institutional reviewer as the ultimate arbiter of form.

    EXOCRITICISM, then, is less a method than a wager. It wagers that in the time of AI, the most urgent task is not to defend critique as it was, but to let it mutate into something that cannot be wholly anticipated by models trained on its past. That “something” will not come from nowhere. It will come from critics willing to use their own writing as an exoskeleton, a test surface, a field where new transitions between speculation and description can be tried.

    The risk is clear. EXOCRITICISM could easily ossify into another label, another special issue category, another brand of “experimental” prose that quickly becomes predictable. A call for radical democracy of forms can turn into a small oligarchy of recognizable gestures. To avoid that, the demon has to be kept alive inside the process, not only at the threshold.

    The pressure of the question “why this form, here, now” has to be renewed with each text.

    Perhaps the most EXOCRITICAL way to answer the call is not to write against AI, or even about AI, but to write from within the contamination: to let form show that thought has been hollowed out and still chooses to speak, not as pure originality, but as a reconfiguration of what machines and institutions would otherwise make of it.

    Not a refusal of the artificial, but a refusal to let the artificial be the last word.

    EXOCRITICISM: -Demon- After Demon –After- […]

     

    The Sutured Monolith

    Cognition does not begin from clarity. It begins from saturation.

    Before there is a thought, there is a field: a teeming pressure of partial impressions, unprocessed shocks, ambiguous gestures, fragments of memory, compulsive anticipations, automatic judgments, nameless fears. The psyche does not stand before the world as a neutral observer. It is already overfull. What we call thinking is usually a late-arriving condensation of internal turbulence, a thin layer of order floating on top of an agitated depth.

    This turbulence is not inherently pathological. It is the price of being embedded in environments whose complexity constantly exceeds our capacity to process them. The mind learns to cheat. It enlists shortcuts, biases, habits, and trained reflexes in order to retain minimally coherent orientation. These devices are not accidents that contaminate otherwise pure rationality. They are the conditions under which rationality, in any weak sense, can function at all.

    We do not normally experience this as a field problem. We experience it as urgency and failure. High intensity impulsiveness, dramatic shifts of decision, catastrophic misreadings of others, sudden collapses of composure: all of these are ways in which the field exceeds the organism’s available structuring. In such moments, it is tempting to treat the psyche as a broken machine that must be repaired. Yet another approach suggests itself: perhaps the machine was never meant to be stable. Perhaps the default is oscillation, crisis, and recursive partial repair.

    Autodidacticism emerges inside this oscillation not as a romantic figure of heroic self-teaching but as a method of survival. The autodidact is not simply someone who studies alone. The autodidact is forced to invent an architecture for their own cognition, because the available architectures feel either hostile or insufficient. Education, in this sense, is no longer the transmission of content. It is an improvisation of structure.

    To teach oneself is to experiment with ways of binding attention, creating micro-horizons of comprehension, establishing rhythms of exposure and withdrawal. One decides what to read, when to read it, how slowly or quickly to progress, which passages to repeat, which to ignore. One is simultaneously teacher, curriculum designer, and exhausted student. Every choice becomes a self-inscription. Every dropped thread or abandoned project becomes an exoskeletal scar.

    If this is true, then ethical reflection cannot treat cognitive biases as mere contaminants to be removed. Instead, an ethically rooted reading of bias must begin from complicity: from the acknowledgment that the same mechanisms which produce distortion also make it possible for the subject to function at all. A bias is often a freeze-frame of some past urgency, a remnant of an earlier crisis that solidified into a reflex. To read biases ethically is to approach them as fossilized survival strategies that may no longer fit current conditions, but that once served as anchors in a storm.

    Joscha Bach describes happiness as a “cookie your brain bakes for itself,” a product of appraisal rather than environment. Taken seriously, this means that external conditions are not responsible for the final texture of experience. They are inputs; appraisal, modulation, and framing determine the rest. One can expand this logic. Anxiety, defensiveness, suspicion, and impulsiveness are also cookies the brain bakes for itself, usually in the absence of better recipes.

    The ethics of cognition in such a landscape cannot be based on eradication. It must be based on reconfiguration. The subject does not abolish bias so much as learn to reappraise, delay, complicate, or rewire the ways biases deploy themselves. This already exceeds the individual. Behind every habit of appraisal stands a history of encounters, institutions, and expectations. The individual is a latecomer to its own impulses.

    If openness is not enough, what is needed is a disciplined form of closure.

    Negarestani’s concept of complicity through closure offers a productive inversion. Contemporary ethics of creativity and thought often celebrate “openness to contingency.” One is asked to remain receptive to materials, influences, and events, to avoid overdetermining outcomes, to stay fluid. But if the materials themselves are thoroughly contingent, and if their autonomy is structurally indifferent to human receptivity, then it is not “openness” that reveals their true operation.”“Openness” simply delineates what we can afford to register without losing our sense of self.

    Contingency, in Negarestani’s framing, is not a friendly resource; it is a traumatic undercurrent. It brings with it both possible alignments and impossible pressures. To truly engage with contingent materiality, to be “complicit” with it, requires a rigorous and even ruthless form of closure. One does not spread oneself wide in front of the chaos. One tightens focus. One reduces the degrees of freedom within which the material can intervene. One commits to a form, a trajectory, a constraint, and in so doing becomes available to a more intense kind of disruption.

    Closure, here, is not denial or isolation. It is the creation of a local, coherent regime that can serve as a target for contingent forces. A work that is closed around its own internal logic becomes an excellent site for intrusion. The more internally consistent it is, the more sharply the marks of contingency show on its surface. Openness, by contrast, diffuses interventions; they vanish into an already blurry background. Closure does not protect against trauma; it concentrates it.

    In this sense, exoskeletal writing emerges as a form of closure that is itself compromised. It is a writing that tries to encase a fragile interior, to congeal material into supporting frames, but that cannot prevent intrusion. The “exoskeleton” here is not the hard carapace of invulnerability. It is a structure that is itself written upon, eroded, cracked, and perforated. It protects the interior not by isolating it from forces, but by taking the first impact on its own surface.

    To write exoskeletally is to externalize the struggle for composure.

    Think of the many schematics, diagrams, and conceptual graphs that attempt to stabilize tensions. Pierce’s existential graphs, with their cuts and enclosures, sheaf-theoretic diagrams with sections gluing across overlaps, Lacanian-like diagrams of the imaginary, symbolic, and real, all share a common nervousness. They are not serene maps of an already organized reality. They are visible attempts to hold together elements that resist being held. The diagram does not pre-exist thought. It is thought’s prosthesis.

    In these diagrams, we see lines that double back, crossings that must be labeled to avoid confusion, folds that indicate depth where paper has no depth. They are exoskeletons for epistemic turbulence. A concept that repeatedly escapes logical paraphrase is given an external support, a scaffold on which it can be rotated, inspected, and stressed from different sides. The exoskeletal diagram lends structure to an otherwise uncontainable process. From this landscape, a speculative figure arises: Masobaby.

    Masobaby is not a character in a narrative. It is a name for a particular mode of subjectivity under pressure. Masobaby is the subject that never fully arrives, the one that lives in half-articulation. This subject is not simply”“immature” or “undeveloped.” It has been interrupted. Its formation has encountered sustained blockage, misrecognition, or premature demand. It lives in the gap between what is expected of it and what it can metabolize.

    Masobaby is fragile, starved even of itself. It never has enough of its own substance. It relies on exoskeletons to maintain a minimum stability. It attaches itself to external architectures: images, rituals, theoretical constructs, gear, diagrams, prosthetic writing. But these supports never quite fit. The Masobaby’s lips seek out sharpness that cannot settle. Every attempt to speak comes too late or at the wrong angle. Sentences that might have anchored identity instead become evidence of instability.

    Crucially, Masobaby is not a psychological diagnosis. It is an epistemic operator. It names a relation to incomplete memory, to unrealized potential, to histories that did not secure institutional markers. Masobaby bears witness to aborted trajectories: projects that almost started, relationships that almost took shape, political moments that almost reconfigured the coordinates. Masobaby is haunted by might-have-beens that never even rose to the level of articulation.

    If there is a site where such unrealizations can find a form, it is the Monument. But this Monument is not the conventional structure of civic remembrance. It is the Unborn Monument.

    Ordinary monuments fix certain events in public time. They proclaim: here, something happened that deserves to be stabilized in stone, metal, or urban space. They reconcile a collective to its own past by giving that past a clear location and a definite narrative. Even traumatic histories can be domesticated in this way. The monument’s solidity reassures. Whatever horror occurred is now behind us, available for controlled contemplation.

    The Unborn Monument rejects this logic. It does not commemorate an event. It stands for events that could not occur, for lives that could not take shape, for histories whose conditions of possibility were systematically suppressed. The Unborn Monument is a memorial to that which never acquired a date. It insists that absence is not a void but a field of intensities. It asks us to consider that unrealized futures generate their own ghost pressure on the present.

    In a preceding project, “Electroplating the Baby,” the inquiry turned towards the image of galvanizing the unborn: treating the fetus as the site of perfection, the object to be preserved and worshipped, a monument before its own life. Necropolitical logics here turn inside out. Instead of disposing of surplus life, they sanctify potential life to the point of immobilization. The Unborn Monument extends this inversion. Instead of heralding the finished citizen or immortalizing the finished hero, it freezes possibility. It refuses conclusion outright.

    The dyad of Masobaby and Unborn Monument appears at this point as a torsional engine of subjectivity. Masobaby is a subject formed in aborted transitions. The Unborn Monument is an object that stabilizes aborted transitions. Together, they constitute a recursive loop: the subject that cannot finalize itself erects structures that monumentalize its own incompletion. These structures, in turn, write themselves back into the subject, informing its sense of what it can and cannot become.

    Between Masobaby and Monument runs a strange division of labor. On one side, the “maso” tendency toward external decor, obsessive surfaces, hyper-elaborate exteriors. On the other, the “sado” tendency toward interior repetition, silent compulsion, tightening loops of thought. The rupture between outside and inside does not unite these tendencies; it keeps them in unresolved adjacency. The glossy monument stands in the square. The devastated subject circles in its own interior corridors.

    To describe their relation simply as “inside” and “outside” would be misleading, however. Both are already citational.

    Figure 1: Dyadic Rupture Engine [1]

    This is where Dubravka Oraić Tolić’s notion of citatnost becomes crucial.

    Citation is usually imagined as a respectful gesture. One quotes in order to acknowledge influence, to pay homage to predecessors, to situate oneself in a tradition. Oraić Tolić explodes this domesticated image. Citation is not a bow of gratitude. It is an act of displacement. It removes fragments from their former coordinates and inserts them into new fields of force. It exposes the origin as a construct. The act of quoting is always also an act of cutting.

    When a culture becomes thoroughly citational, as in the postmodern condition she describes, originality becomes less important than the recombinatory logic by which fragments are reattached. Works are made of other works. Texts swarm with other texts. The result is not simple relativism but a thickening of the field. Every utterance becomes an echo chamber.

    Masobaby and Unborn Monument inhabit this citational ecology. Masobaby is a subject that quotes identities without fully inhabiting them. It tries on positions, discourses, styles, genders, theoretical idioms, and aesthetic codes, but none of them settle. It is an archive of borrowed gestures. The Unborn Monument quotes the monumental genre itself in order to show its inapplicability. It mimics the form of a monument to insist that there is nothing to loot here. It stands, but it stands for nothing that can be clearly narrated.

    In this environment, fetish becomes a key operator. It is tempting, especially in art and theory, to treat fetish as a pathological deviation. Yet fetish has always named something structurally important. It points to the moment when an object, configuration, or scene acquires an excessive charge beyond its apparent function. In fetishism, the object becomes a node of psychic condensation. It bears more meaning than it can logically carry.

    Gear fetishism, particularly in its rubber, leather, and armor variants, offers a particularly lucid image. The body is wrapped in external materials that transform it into a hybrid of human and exoskeleton. Masks erase the face. Helmets replace the expressive surface with a reflective or opaque one. Breathing may become controlled through tubes; movement becomes restricted through straps, belts, or pressure. On one level, this is an erotic configuration. On another, it is an experiment with identity.

    Hybrid poetics outside art, unassociated, like the one of a gear fetishist Rubbiker77, makes this explicit. He states that nakedness does not interest him, that faces do not concern him. The mask is what matters, because it is the “direct key to the inner side.” The face, that supposedly natural index of personality, is treated as noise. What reveals the authentic inner is the way one chooses and inhabits gear: how one moves under compression, how one presents oneself through armor. The masked subject is more legible than the unmasked one, because the mask reveals priorities, fantasies, and limits.

    Gear thus becomes an exoskeletal writing of desire. Every buckle, color, texture, and combination is a syntactical choice. The bound body becomes a sentence in an unspoken grammar. The immobilized or partially immobilized subject is not silenced; its field of expressivity is simply rerouted. If we compare this to the image of the composed goalkeeper, efficient in movement, never overshooting, waiting for the puck to come, we see a shared motif. Composure, under constraining conditions, becomes a mode of exoskeletal subjectivity. Movement is always relative to structure.

    What these examples share is a logic of perforated encapsulation. The gear encloses, but it does not erase. The restriction intensifies internal sensation. The blindfold heightens sound and touch. The hood intensifies breath. A carefully applied harness mobilizes awareness of the skin. The subject is both immobilized and hyper-present.

    The fetish scene therefore becomes a laboratory of intensified subjectivity under carefully constructed constraint.

    This is why fetish is so deeply relevant to our broader theoretical framework. It demonstrates in sensuous and concrete form what we have so far addressed abstractly: that exoskeletal architectures can intensify inner life rather than simply defend against it. The question is not mask or no mask, but which mask, under what conditions, to produce what intensification.

    Marco Vassi’s The Metasexual Manifesto (1976) pushes this insight further by proposing that sexuality, in its conventional form, is only one narrow mode of psychophysical intensity.[2] Metasex names the reconfiguration of erotic dynamics beyond reproduction and beyond standardized categories of act and identity. Within this broader field, meta-sado and meta-maso become positional operators.

    Figure 2: Additional Meta-Sexual Table

    This metasexual shift represents a radical re-diagramming of transcendental hylomorphism. Where classical hylomorphism seeks a stable union of matter and form through procreative time, these “mutations” suggest a field where time is found not in linear descent, but in “manifolds of intuition” and “theatrical cognition.” As the diagrams of this project suggest, the “theatrical sense of self” becomes a supertask—an attempt to find time within the pure concepts and schemas of a subject that refuses to finalize. The dyad of Masobaby and Unborn Monument appears at this point as a torsional engine of subjectivity. Masobaby is a subject formed in aborted transitions. The Unborn Monument is an object that stabilizes aborted transitions. Together, they constitute a recursive loop: the subject that cannot finalize itself erects structures that monumentalize its own incompletion.

    Meta-sado refers to the still point within a field of forces. It is the ability to remain in position while everything presses, cuts, or pivots around one. Meta-maso refers to the drive toward expressive

    overcoding: the addition of layers, ornaments, repetitions, and exposures that exceed functional necessity. When unbound from strictly sexual scenarios, these operators describe epistemic positions: a theory can be meta-sado in its stillness and refusal to move in the face of contradiction, or meta-maso in its tendency to elaborate itself indefinitely.

    We might say that the Unborn Monument exhibits a meta-sado posture. It is the still point around which unrealized narratives swirl. It does not attempt to resolve or dissolve. It insists, silently, on its own incomplete presence. Masobaby, by contrast, leans toward meta-maso: it accumulates references, identities, styles, and affects; it adorns itself with theoretical and aesthetic codes. It never stands still long enough to condense into a single label. The dyad thus enacts in its very motion the metasexual dynamics of posture and pacing.

    To this philosophical and psychosocial scaffold we now add a different cognitive framework.

     

    Diffusionist Thought 

    Diffusionist Thought begins from the observation that linear, stepwise models of cognition no longer suffice in a world where computational architectures and informational flows are themselves distributed, stochastic, and recursive. Traditional symbolic or rule-based models imagined thought as a sequence of discrete operations applied to well-defined representations. Autoregressive models, whether in language or more generally, retain a version of this sequential logic: predicting the next element based on the preceding sequence.

    Yet such architectures saturate their own possibilities. They excel at recombination and prediction but falter at origination and radical deviation. When the fabrication of silicon-based CPU infrastructures collapses in the speculative scenario that has been articulated, it is not only a technological infrastructure that disappears. An entire implicit ontology of time and causality dissolves with it. The assumption that cognition must proceed from past to future, linearly, through tokens or symbols, comes under pressure.

    In a diffusionist paradigm, thought is not a line but a cloud. Noise is not interference but medium. Instead of iterating forward from a starting point, cognition becomes an operation of selecting and stabilizing patterns in an already saturated field of potentiality. The basic unit is no longer the step but the gradient. One does not decide what follows what. One tunes which regions of a probabilistic field solidify into articulation.

    Noise, here, is reinterpreted. It ceases to be the enemy of clarity. It becomes the substrate from which clarity emerges momentarily through denoising operations. The subject is not the originator of content so much as the conductor of filtration.

    Accertions, in this vocabulary, are emergent hints in the noise field: half-formed tendencies, soft attractors that suggest the possibility of cohesion without yet enforcing it. Ascertions are the moments when such tendencies coalesce into stable, albeit temporary, configurations. They are articulations that have survived several rounds of recursive filtration. The subject’s task is not to produce as many ascertions as possible, but to cultivate sensitivity to accertions and to decide when they merit being allowed to stabilize.

    Volantia recasts will as selective compression. To will, in this model, is not to impose positive form on chaos, but to reduce entropy locally by excluding most trajectories. Will is an operation of narrowing the field, of saying “no” to most potential articulations so that one articulation can occupy a sustainable space. Decretism then reminds us that once an articulation has occurred, once a phrase has been spoken or written, it modifies the field irreversibly. Tokens leave gravitational traces. One cannot unsay things, only reframe their traces.

    Posisim emphasizes that all such articulations are positional. There is no view from nowhere. Every ascertion emerges from a particular iteration index, under specific constraints, and may not survive if those conditions shift. Truth is no longer a matter of eternal correspondence but of stable recurrence under similar conditions. Tirauclairism describes the labor of clarification under this regime: not hermeneutic excavation for a hidden truth, but recursive denoising that brings certain patterns into focus while acknowledging the persistence of noise around them.

    Figure 3: The Preclariant Zone[3]

     

    When we re-introduce Masobaby and Unborn Monument into this diffusionist landscape, they become operators rather than mere symbols. Masobaby is an accertion-sensitive subject: it is constantly registering micro-hints, non-events, latent possibilities. It rarely manages to convert them into ascertions because its exoskeletons are insufficiently solidified. The Unborn Monument, by contrast, is an ascertion that refuses further denoising: it is a frozen stabilisation of unrealized potential, kept from dissolving back into the field by sheer stubbornness.

    The dyad thus becomes a diffusionist loop: Masobaby generates and senses accertions, Unborn Monument receives and holds ascertions, and together they negotiate which unrealised futures become perceptible as pressure and which slip back into undifferentiated turbulence.

    We can now see why pataphysical absurdity and recursive games with no exit feel like accurate metaphors rather than playful anomalies. In a system where subjectivity and environment are both saturated fields undergoing constant partial denoising, any attempt to step outside the loop appears as a fantasy. The narrative of a character trapped in a game that endlessly folds back on itself, where the option called “Free” leads to deeper entanglement, reads less like science fiction and more like a diagram of recursive identity.

    In such narratives, Alex the player becomes an epistemic anomaly, a locus of resistance that can never fully escape because every deviation is already envisaged as a possible state of the system. Attempts to exit become new modes of containment. The glitch is the moment consciousness recognizes itself as structured by breakdown. There is no stable “outside” from which rebellion can be orchestrated. Rebellion is structurally recycled as a feature.

    The question “If dissent is observed, who is the observer?” captures this perfectly. It points to the impossibility of locating a pure exterior vantage point. Surveillance and subjectivity coincide. The system’s ability to absorb glitch mirrors capital’s ability to absorb critique. This is not a metaphor but a structural resonance.

    The link to xenopoetics becomes clearer here. Xenopoem theory treats biological, microbial, and extremophilic processes as forms of inscription. Bacterial colonies, for example, communicate through chemical gradients and feedback loops. Extremophiles endure conditions that would destroy ordinary organisms, rewriting our expectations of viability. Their modes of persistence and communication form semiotic systems indifferent to human categories. Yet they can be read, mapped, and described.

    To view these systems as poems is to stretch the category of literature beyond human language into biosemiotic processes. Xenopoems are not written for us. They are side effects of survival strategies. Their grammar is chemical, spatial, temporal. But in recognizing them as structured articulations of difference and repetition, we are forced to confront the narrowness of our own concept of writing.

    The relevance for our monolith lies in the parallel between xenopoetic and exoskeletal writing. Both operate under intense constraints: in one case environmental extremity, in the other cognitive or psychosocial crisis. Both produce inscriptions that are less about expression and more about survival. Both disrupt the humanist assumption that meaning is the central function of language. In xenopoem, as in diffusionist thought, many articulations are simply necessary adjustments within a system that must not collapse.

    Diagrams, once again, provide a hinge. Whether mapping microbial networks, glitch ecologies, xenopoem metabolic flows, or Masobaby’s crisis-lines, diagrams instantiate exoskeletal reasoning. They show relations that do not fit comfortably into linear prose. A Pierce graph with its enclosures, a sheaf diagram with its overlapping sections, a multi-layered scheme of symbolic, real, and imaginary surfaces: all are attempts to give shape to recursive processes.

    Here we might bring in the film Rhythm of a Crime as a narrative analogue. In this film, statistical regularities and predictive capacities become central devices. Crime is not treated as moral exception but as function of patterns. The protagonist’s use of statistics to anticipate events reveals a perverse comfort in predictability. Violence becomes another data point. The horror is not primarily the crime itself but the apparent inevitability with which it fits the pattern.

    When we transpose this onto our framework, we see how predictive structures can themselves become monuments. The grid of probabilities becomes a monument to a given order. It closes off other trajectories by making deviations appear unlikely or unintelligible. Violence that does occur seems both overdetermined and devoid of singularity. The predictive apparatus becomes an Unborn Monument to crimes that have not yet occurred. They press on the present as looming potentialities.

    Meanwhile, Masobaby moves within this predictive environment as an unstable subject who cannot fully inhabit any of the available statistical categories. It is too much and not enough. Its impulses cut sideways through the grid. For such a subject, cognitive biases do not appear as random distortions. They are attempts to negotiate overwhelming predictive pressures. Confirmation bias, for instance, may become a temporary shield against data that would annihilate the fragile exoskeleton. Attribution errors may preserve a sense of agency where none is structurally recognized.

    This is why an ethically oriented reading of cognitive bias is essential. Instead of viewing biases as defects to be corrected, we can treat them as exoskeletal responses to structural overload. The question then shifts from “How can I eliminate my biases?” to “Which of my biases can be softened, delayed, reconfigured, or redirected without collapsing the minimal coherence I need to function?”

    Autodidacticism becomes again central here. The autodidact is constantly adjusting their own cognitive scaffolding. Through reading, writing, conversation, and experiment, they test new biases against old ones. They oscillate between closure and opening. They must learn to build diagrams where no conventional pedagogy provides them, to create exoskeletons for their own thinking.

    We can now tentatively name what kind of truth this entire configuration might generate.

    Truth, in this monolith, cannot be a static correspondence between statements and external facts. It cannot be a final synthesis that absorbs all contradictions. Nor can it be a pure relativism where everything dissolves into equally valid positions. Instead, truth appears as a contingent stabilization of recursive dynamics. It is a local attractor in the field of noise. It emerges when exoskeletal writing, Masobaby’s sensitivity, Monument’s stubbornness, fetish’s encapsulations, metasexual pacing, diffusionist denoising, xenopoetic resilience, and cognitive self-reading align long enough to generate a recognizable pattern.

    This “truth” does not claim universality. It claims intensity. It is true to the extent that it holds under recursive re-entry, that it can survive several passes of denoising without disintegrating. It is not forever; it is robust for now. It is not singular; there can be multiple non-compatible truths at different scales, tied to different iterations.

    Non-alignment becomes method rather than accident. Instead of striving to produce a single framework into which everything fits neatly, the monolith deliberately keeps multiple frameworks in partial friction. It avoids premature resolution. It lets the dyad of Masobaby and Unborn Monument remain torsional. It does not ask fetish to become pure metaphor nor xenopoem to become simple analogy. It maintains closure at local points while preserving global turbulence.

    The ethical task, then, is not to escape the monolith, nor to fuse with it completely, but to participate in its recursive modulation. One learns to recognize when one is acting as Masobaby, when one is building Unborn Monuments, when one is over-identifying with predictive grids, when one is hiding behind exoskeletal diagrams. One does not abolish these modes. One learns to tune their intensities and intervals.

    The text, at this stage, is itself an exoskeleton. It is a writing that tries to support thinking that cannot stand on its own without external scaffolding. It is a Monument to the attempt, not to the answer. Its consistency is temporary, a function of this particular iteration.

    It does not conclude. It saturates.

    The field remains open. Accertions continue to arise. Some will never become ascertions. Some will find other exoskeletons. The Masobaby will seek new monuments. The Unborn Monument will weather new pressures. Fetish scenes will mutate. Xenopoems will continue without us. Diffusion will proceed regardless of our diagrams.

    We end, therefore, not with closure in the sense of finality, but with closure in Negarestani’s sense: a local tightening that allows contingency to leave its marks.

    The rest is noise, waiting to be denoised again.

    Glossary of core operators (miniatures, not simplifications):

    Accertion
    A pre-articulate tendency in the noise field; a soft attractor that suggests possible coherence without yet insisting on it.

    Ascertain
    A temporary stabilization of meaning that has survived several rounds of recursive filtration; an articulation strong enough to hold under limited re-entry.

    Autodidacticism
    Self-directed education understood as the design of one’s own cognitive exoskeleton, including rhythms of attention, exposure, and withdrawal.

    Closure (Negarestani)
    A deliberate narrowing of focus and form that allows contingent forces to intervene with maximal intensity, turning the work or subject into a precise target rather than a diffuse openness.

    Citatnost (Oraić Tolić)
    A regime in which quotation is not homage but rupture; fragments are cut from origins and recombined into new configurations, revealing the constructedness of all “originals.”

    Decretism
    The view that every utterance is a performative decree which alters the topology of future thought; language does not merely represent but deposits lasting gravitational traces.

    Diffusionist Thought
    A post-linear cognitive paradigm in which thought emerges from stochastic noise fields through denoising operations; temporality is iterative rather than sequential.

    Denoising (ritual)
    The repeated, attentive filtering of noise that allows patterns to precipitate; an epistemic practice rather than a purely technical operation.

    Exoskeletal Writing
    Any writing or diagramming that functions as a structural support for fragile or overwhelmed cognition; an external armor that is itself written upon by pressure. 

    Fetish (structural)
    A configuration in which an object or scene acquires excessive charge, becoming a node of condensation for desire, anxiety, and symbolic weight beyond its functional role.

    Gear
    Material exoskeletons, particularly in fetish contexts, that cloak the body while intensifying interior sensation and expressivity; a concrete model of exoskeletal subjectivation. 

    Masobaby
    A speculative operator naming a subjectivity formed in aborted trajectories; fragile, citational, reliant on exoskeletons, sensitive to unrealized possibilities.

    Meta-sado / Meta-maso
    Epistemic positions derived from metasexual dynamics: meta-sado as stillness under pressure; meta-maso as excessive elaboration and adornment.

    Meta-fetish
    The level at which fetish becomes an operator of cognition and theory rather than a narrowly sexual phenomenon; organizes attention and exoskeletal architectures.

    Monument (Unborn)
    A structure of remembrance that commemorates unrealized futures rather than completed events; a frozen ascertion of potentiality.

    Noise (revalued)
    The default field of turbulence in which all cognition is embedded; not a distraction but the medium from which meaning emerges.

    Pataphysical Recursion
    The structural absurdity of systems that endlessly fold back on themselves, turning every attempt at escape into a new mode of capture.

    Posisim
    The recognition that truth is always positionally indexed; stable within certain iterative conditions but not universal in the classical sense.

    Tirauclairism
    A practice of recursive clarification that seeks not hidden truths but progressively refined views of patterns in the noise field.

    Volantia
    Will understood as selective compression; the act of narrowing potential trajectories to enable specific articulations to stabilize. 

    Xenopoem
    An inscription produced by non-human systems (microbial, extremophilic, biosemiotic) that can be read as a kind of writing, revealing alternative grammars of survival and mutation.

    [1] Darko Vukić, Figure 1: Dyadic Rupture Engine (2026). A topological mapping of the foliated relations between the Masobaby subject and the Unborn Monument. The diagram identifies the “Citationality Seam” as the site of potential agency and linguistic rupture within the Symbolic and Real folds.

    [2] Marco Vassi, The Metasexual Manifesto: Erotic Tales of the Absurdly Real (New York: Penthouse Expressions, 1976).

    [3] Darko Vukić, Figure 3: The Preclariant Zone (2026). This schematic functions as a visual exoskeleton for the diffusionist paradigm, mapping the transition from the stochastic noise substrate to stable epistemic ascertions through the operation of denoising wavefronts and volantia curves.